Tab...aur ab.... !!!

by Talat on April 03, 2008, 02:44:41 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #45 on: July 18, 2008, 07:29:24 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob celmira
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«Reply #46 on: July 18, 2008, 07:37:58 PM »
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Sab ne apne apne khayaalaat ko khoobsurti se paish kya hai... buhat achha laga...
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«Reply #47 on: July 21, 2008, 01:01:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2008, 08:48:12 PM
Wo bachpan wo khilaune, wo gudiya ki shaadi
Armaan poore karte the jab dada aur daadi

Wo raaton main jama hona, wo sunna kahani
Bachchon ke ghere main pariyon si ek nani

Wo mausam baarish ka wo kaghaz ki nayya
Ghoom jaata hai kaise ye waqt ka pahiya

Wo yaadain reh gayin, wo baatain reh gayi hain
Khushbu thaame yaadon ki saansan reh gayi hain


bahoot khoob celmira,

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«Reply #48 on: July 21, 2008, 01:19:07 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2008, 08:48:12 PM
Wo bachpan wo khilaune, wo gudiya ki shaadi
Armaan poore karte the jab dada aur daadi

Wo raaton main jama hona, wo sunna kahani
Bachchon ke ghere main pariyon si ek nani

Wo mausam baarish ka wo kaghaz ki nayya
Ghoom jaata hai kaise ye waqt ka pahiya

Wo yaadain reh gayin, wo baatain reh gayi hain
Khushbu thaame yaadon ki saansan reh gayi hain

Very Beautiful Lines Celmira... Usual Smile
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«Reply #49 on: August 31, 2008, 12:24:19 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 18, 2008, 07:25:34 PM
Kya baat he bohut khoob.
Apni or sabhi ki maasoom yaadon ke sunehre motiyoN ko bade hi khubsurat andaaz mein piroya he aapne.

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid Usual Smile

Quote from: Pooja on July 18, 2008, 07:29:24 PM
wah bahoot khoob celmira

Thanks a lot Pooja Usual Smile

Quote from: syednaami on July 18, 2008, 07:37:58 PM
Sab ne apne apne khayaalaat ko khoobsurti se paish kya hai... buhat achha laga...

Shukriya janaab

Quote from: bekarar on July 21, 2008, 01:01:04 PM
bahoot khoob celmira,

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Bohot shukriya Sanjeev Usual Smile

Quote from: Mahiya on July 21, 2008, 01:19:07 PM
Very Beautiful Lines Celmira... Usual Smile


Thanks so much Mahiya Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #50 on: September 22, 2008, 06:43:36 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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«Reply #51 on: November 07, 2008, 05:14:37 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 03, 2008, 02:44:41 PM



Bahut khoob Celmira
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Talat
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«Reply #52 on: November 08, 2008, 01:34:46 PM »
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Shukriya Sonia Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #53 on: November 16, 2008, 03:01:13 PM »
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Bahut accha likha aapne Talat  Applause
aur bahut naye andaz se description diya hai bekarar ji ne..
and sach toh yeh hai ke Tab aur Ab mein bahut bahut farak aagaya hai..
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«Reply #54 on: November 16, 2008, 04:40:53 PM »
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Aapka jawab nahi aap bahut khoob likha , and so beautiful topic  and i hope aage aap isse acha likhenge i like this topic .....always

Aapne purani yaadon ko taaza kar diya,
dada-dadi ke rishtein ko mazboot or bana diya,
iss rishte ki aapne ehmiyat logo ko samjhayi ,
ye samjhkar dil khush ho gaya
aapne purani yaadon ko taaza kar diya

Rishtein toh dil ke hote hai or
woh rishta apna pariwaar hota hai jisse
humara dil judha hota hai

Khushiyon ki sougaat tabhi sabhi ko nasib hoti hai
jab apne badon ki ehmiyat pata hoti hai
tab log iss ehmiyat sir jhukakar salam kartein the
or ab is kadar buzurgon ki baizaiti kartein hai jaise
woh gheer ho , ye dekhke dil rota hai , tab dil mein bahut derd hota ,
bas yahi khayal ata hai "TAB AUR AB " mein kitna fark aa gya hai

Humne bahut log dekhe
kisi ko khoob apnon se pyaar mila , toh
kisi ko bahut baizati naseeb mili , kisi
ko bahut khushi mili , toh kisi ko bahut ghum mile,
kisi ko nafrat mili , toh kisi ko apno se behad pyaar mila
jo bado ki izzat kare toh khuda uski izzat karta hai , jo bado ko
samjhe nahi or na izzat kare uske liye khuda ke dil mein bhi jagha nahi, or
unki jannat mein bhi panah nahi .............

Humne pyaar kiya bado se,
bado ne pyaar diya khushi se,
humne unko chaha dil se ,
bado ne apnaya pure dil se,
humne unki har khuwaish ko pura karne ki koshish ki,
bado ne humari koshish ko hi apni khuwaish samjhi,
humne unse behad saari baatein kari,or
bado se hume bahut si baatein sikhne ko mili,
hum agar apne ki ehmiyat samjhenge tabhi bade khush rahe sakenge..........

Yaadein toh bahut hai jo humne dada dadi ke sath guzari
baatein toh bahut hai jo humne dada dadi ke sath ki
or pyaar bahut mila jo dada dadi ne humko diya................

***************************************(MUSKAN)*****************************
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syednaami
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«Reply #55 on: May 08, 2009, 02:28:26 PM »
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Very nice Muskaan, where have you been?
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Talat
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«Reply #56 on: May 08, 2009, 02:32:04 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on November 16, 2008, 03:01:13 PM
Bahut accha likha aapne Talat  Applause
aur bahut naye andaz se description diya hai bekarar ji ne..
and sach toh yeh hai ke Tab aur Ab mein bahut bahut farak aagaya hai..



Thanks so much Roja tongue3 tongue3
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Talat
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«Reply #57 on: May 08, 2009, 02:34:18 PM »
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Quote from: muskan_bye on November 16, 2008, 04:40:53 PM
Aapka jawab nahi aap bahut khoob likha , and so beautiful topic  and i hope aage aap isse acha likhenge i like this topic .....always

Aapne purani yaadon ko taaza kar diya,
dada-dadi ke rishtein ko mazboot or bana diya,
iss rishte ki aapne ehmiyat logo ko samjhayi ,
ye samjhkar dil khush ho gaya
aapne purani yaadon ko taaza kar diya

Rishtein toh dil ke hote hai or
woh rishta apna pariwaar hota hai jisse
humara dil judha hota hai

Khushiyon ki sougaat tabhi sabhi ko nasib hoti hai
jab apne badon ki ehmiyat pata hoti hai
tab log iss ehmiyat sir jhukakar salam kartein the
or ab is kadar buzurgon ki baizaiti kartein hai jaise
woh gheer ho , ye dekhke dil rota hai , tab dil mein bahut derd hota ,
bas yahi khayal ata hai "TAB AUR AB " mein kitna fark aa gya hai

Humne bahut log dekhe
kisi ko khoob apnon se pyaar mila , toh
kisi ko bahut baizati naseeb mili , kisi
ko bahut khushi mili , toh kisi ko bahut ghum mile,
kisi ko nafrat mili , toh kisi ko apno se behad pyaar mila
jo bado ki izzat kare toh khuda uski izzat karta hai , jo bado ko
samjhe nahi or na izzat kare uske liye khuda ke dil mein bhi jagha nahi, or
unki jannat mein bhi panah nahi .............

Humne pyaar kiya bado se,
bado ne pyaar diya khushi se,
humne unko chaha dil se ,
bado ne apnaya pure dil se,
humne unki har khuwaish ko pura karne ki koshish ki,
bado ne humari koshish ko hi apni khuwaish samjhi,
humne unse behad saari baatein kari,or
bado se hume bahut si baatein sikhne ko mili,
hum agar apne ki ehmiyat samjhenge tabhi bade khush rahe sakenge..........

Yaadein toh bahut hai jo humne dada dadi ke sath guzari
baatein toh bahut hai jo humne dada dadi ke sath ki
or pyaar bahut mila jo dada dadi ne humko diya................

***************************************(MUSKAN)*****************************




Thanks a lot Muskan....aur dear aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai.....Bohot bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #58 on: May 09, 2009, 05:02:26 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 03, 2008, 06:39:39 PM
Hua yoon ki kisi baat pe bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye, bachpan ke khel khilaune aur janne kya kya khoobsurat yaadain.....

Bas..chand sher likh diye...haalanki post karne ke baad thoda bachkaane lage...  tongue3

Bohot bohot Shukriya pasandidgi ka Sayyid.. Thankyou !


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«Reply #59 on: May 09, 2009, 05:11:54 AM »
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celmira ji very nice,very very good one.
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