tabeeb...............A.B

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                       rishto.n   se bahut  ghareeb  hain  ye  ameer...,
                       sirf   daulat   se  hi   qareeb  hain ye ameer..,

                       khareede pade hain zindagi chund  lamho.n   ki...,
                       samjh   se    pare    ajeeb   hain   ye ameer...,

                       qeemat   ujaalo.n   ki   nahin   paas    inke...,
                       teergi mein zindagi, bud-naseeb hain ye ameer ...,

                       dena  dard-o-zakhm  hi  jaane    zamaane    ko...,
                       kirdaar  se,  dawaa  na tabeeb  hain ye  ameer ..,
  
                       hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
                       apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

                       rahaa  silsila  haq-talfi  ka barqraar in-mein...,
                       bataaye koi   jiske   habeeb   hain   ye    ameer...,
                      
                      
                  
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2014, 06:33:05 PM »
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Waah!! Waah!!
Kya baat he!!

hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

Bahut Badhiya
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2014, 01:32:29 AM »
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                       rishto.n   se bahut  ghareeb  hain  ye  ameer...,
                       sirf   daulat   se  hi   qareeb  hain ye ameer..,

                       khareede pade hain zindagi chund  lamho.n   ki...,
                       samjh   se    pare    ajeeb   hain   ye ameer...,

                       qeemat   ujaalo.n   ki   nahin   paas    inke...,
                       teergi mein zindagi, bud-naseeb hain ye ameer ...,

                       dena  dard-o-zakhm  hi  jaane    zamaane    ko...,
                       kirdaar  se,  dawaa  na tabeeb  hain ye  ameer ..,
 
                       hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
                       apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

                       rahaa  silsila  haq-talfi  ka barqraar in-mein...,
                       bataaye koi   jiske   habeeb   hain   ye    ameer...,
                       
                       
                   


Kya bat hai.....Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2014, 02:39:19 AM »
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Waah behad umda... bahut khoob rau pesh kar raha hoon janab...
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2014, 09:21:10 PM »
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                       rishto.n   se bahut  ghareeb  hain  ye  ameer...,
                       sirf   daulat   se  hi   qareeb  hain ye ameer..,

                       khareede pade hain zindagi chund  lamho.n   ki...,
                       samjh   se    pare    ajeeb   hain   ye ameer...,

                       qeemat   ujaalo.n   ki   nahin   paas    inke...,
                       teergi mein zindagi, bud-naseeb hain ye ameer ...,

                       dena  dard-o-zakhm  hi  jaane    zamaane    ko...,
                       kirdaar  se,  dawaa  na tabeeb  hain ye  ameer ..,
  
                       hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
                       apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

                       rahaa  silsila  haq-talfi  ka barqraar in-mein...,
                       bataaye koi   jiske   habeeb   hain   ye    ameer...,
                      
                      
                  


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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2014, 04:57:16 AM »
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Waah waah waah !!! Bahaut khoob AB sahab !! Fiqr aur bayaan to khoobtar hain hi, saath hi itne mushkil radeef aur na-aasaan qafiye par kehkar ghazal aur bhi umdah ho gayee hai !! Bahaut si daad !!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2014, 05:05:59 PM »
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 rishto.n   se bahut  ghareeb  hain  ye  ameer...,
                       sirf   daulat   se  hi   qareeb  hain ye ameer..,

                       khareede pade hain zindagi chund  lamho.n   ki...,
                       samjh   se    pare    ajeeb   hain   ye ameer...,

                       qeemat   ujaalo.n   ki   nahin   paas    inke...,
                       teergi mein zindagi, bud-naseeb hain ye ameer ...,

                       dena  dard-o-zakhm  hi  jaane    zamaane    ko...,
                       kirdaar  se,  dawaa  na tabeeb  hain ye  ameer ..,
 
                       hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
                       apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

                       rahaa  silsila  haq-talfi  ka barqraar in-mein...,
                       bataaye koi   jiske   habeeb   hain   ye    ameer...,
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2014, 07:40:46 PM »
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Waah!! Waah!!
Kya baat he!!

hisaar-e- kashmakash mein phansa kar jaan apni...,
apni  hi  khushi  ke  raqeeb  hain  ye   ameer...,

Bahut Badhiya

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Kya bat hai.....Bahut Khoob.

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