tahzeeb.......A.B

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                         mujhe  mere  kaarwaa.n  se  judaa  na  karo,
                         mar  jaaein  ge  warna  ye  khataa na  karo,

                         ho  jaaye  na  aadat  sirf  tere  saath  ki,
                         karke  wafaa  itni  mujhe  tanhaa  na   karo,

                         hoon  jaisa  usi  haal  mein  rahne  do  abb,
                         pahnaa kar cholaa ameero.n ka badnumaa na karo,

                         hai   ilm   itna   ki  kise    kyaa     kahoo.n,
                         bann   kar   zubaan  meri  ruswaa   na   karo,

                         samjhata  raha  dil   ko  baarah  ye  bechain,
                         itni   khalish   se  manzar   niharaa  na karo.
                       
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2011, 11:26:22 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause kya khub likha hai ,,,,daad hajir hai ...
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2011, 11:57:34 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 28, 2011, 09:44:38 AM


                         mujhe  mere  kaarwaa.n  se  judaa  na  karo,
                         mar  jaaein  ge  warna  ye  khataa na  karo,

                         ho  jaaye  na  aadat  sirf  tere  saath  ki,
                         karke  wafaa  itni  mujhe  tanhaa  na   karo,

                         hoon  jaisa  usi  haal  mein  rahne  do  abb,
                         pahnaa kar cholaa ameero.n ka badnumaa na karo,

                         hai   ilm   itna   ki  kise    kyaa     kahoo.n,
                         bann   kar   zubaan  meri  ruswaa   na   karo,

                         samjhata  raha  dil   ko  baarah  ye  bechain,
                         itni   khalish   se  manzar   niharaa  na karo.
                       
waaaaaaahhhh ji wah
baht baht khoooob
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2011, 12:06:23 PM »
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Nice !
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2011, 05:00:20 PM »
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Vaah Vaah Adil bhai

Sabhi ash'aar behad khoob hai

Maqta khoob jama mujhe.
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2011, 05:57:05 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 28, 2011, 09:44:38 AM


                         mujhe  mere  kaarwaa.n  se  judaa  na  karo,
                         mar  jaaein  ge  warna  ye  khataa na  karo,

                         ho  jaaye  na  aadat  sirf  tere  saath  ki,
                         karke  wafaa  itni  mujhe  tanhaa  na   karo,

                         hoon  jaisa  usi  haal  mein  rahne  do  abb,
                         pahnaa kar cholaa ameero.n ka badnumaa na karo,

                         hai   ilm   itna   ki  kise    kyaa     kahoo.n,
                         bann   kar   zubaan  meri  ruswaa   na   karo,

                         samjhata  raha  dil   ko  baarah  ye  bechain,
                         itni   khalish   se  manzar   niharaa  na karo.
                       
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2011, 06:01:35 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab behad khub aur achche khayaalaat bayaaN kiye
hai aapne.. kalaam behad khoob rahi janab.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe dili daad O mubarakbad kabul
kijiye.. Likhate rahiye..

HaaN Maqte meiN kafiyaa khariz sa nazar aa raha hai hume
khair shayad humari kam ilmi ho.. Usual Smile

Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile    
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2011, 04:46:15 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob adil saheb mubaarak ho
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2011, 06:36:51 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 28, 2011, 09:44:38 AM


                         mujhe  mere  kaarwaa.n  se  judaa  na  karo,
                         mar  jaaein  ge  warna  ye  khataa na  karo,

                         ho  jaaye  na  aadat  sirf  tere  saath  ki,
                         karke  wafaa  itni  mujhe  tanhaa  na   karo,

                         hoon  jaisa  usi  haal  mein  rahne  do  abb,
                         pahnaa kar cholaa ameero.n ka badnumaa na karo,

                         hai   ilm   itna   ki  kise    kyaa     kahoo.n,
                         bann   kar   zubaan  meri  ruswaa   na   karo,

                         samjhata  raha  dil   ko  baarah  ye  bechain,
                         itni   khalish   se  manzar   niharaa  na karo.
                       


"Ho Jaaye Naa Aadat Sirf Tere Saath Ki
 Karke Waffa Itni, Mujhe Tanha Naa karo"

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut Khoooooob Adil ji
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on December 28, 2011, 11:26:22 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause kya khub likha hai ,,,,daad hajir hai ...

shukriya sunil ji
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Quote from: sarfira on December 28, 2011, 11:57:34 AM
waaaaaaahhhh ji wah
baht baht khoooob


thank you sarfira ji
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 28, 2011, 12:06:23 PM
Nice !

thank you siddiqui sahab
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boht khoob ab ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2012, 11:55:07 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 28, 2011, 05:00:20 PM
Vaah Vaah Adil bhai

Sabhi ash'aar behad khoob hai

Maqta khoob jama mujhe.

shukria mkv
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on December 28, 2011, 05:57:05 PM
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