Taish- ghar se jo baahar jaati haiN ghar ki BAATEN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 28, 2012, 04:43:58 PM
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Pehle samajheN to sahi rehguzar ki baateN,
Gar mila waqt, to fir karenge safar ki baateN.

Kehte haiN ke sun leti hain deewareN bhi,
Ghar se jo baahar jaati haiN ghar ki baateN.

Ulfat hai lafz-e-bemaani is daur me, kyuNki,
Log karte haiN faqat idhar-udhar ki baateN.

Kal jo suna tha maine chaupaal pe logoN ko,
Soch raha hun ab bhi ki thi vo kidhar ki baateN.

Iski mitti se na utTh jaaye kahiiN buu-e-Khuluus
Ab bohat gaoN meN sunta huuN shahar kii baateN

Jaagtey haiN to andheroN meN bhatak jaate haiN
Log bas neend meN karte haiN sahar kii baateN.

Ek waqt naam leNge log 'taish' ka bhi mehfiloN me,
Jab chidengi ghazalen, hongi sukhanwar ki baateN.
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2012, 04:48:53 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 28, 2012, 04:43:58 PM
Pehle samajheN to sahi rehguzar ki baateN,
Gar mila waqt, to fir karenge safar ki baateN.

Kehte haiN ke sun leti hain deewareN bhi,
Ghar se jo baahar jaati haiN ghar ki baateN.

Ulfat hai lafz-e-bemaani is daur me, kyuNki,
Log karte haiN faqat idhar-udhar ki baateN.

Kal jo suna tha maine chaupaal pe logoN ko,
Ab bhi soch raha hun ki thi vo kidhar ki baateN.

Iski mitti se na utTh jaaye kahiiN buu-e-Khuluus
Ab bohat gaoN meN sunta huuN shahar kii baateN

Jaagtey haiN tau andheroN meN bhatak jaate haiN
Log bas neend meN karte haiN sahar kii baateN.

Ek waqt naam leNge log 'taish' ka bhi mehfiloN me,
Jab chidengi ghazalen, hongi sukhanwar ki baaten.

waaaah waaah.... bahut khoob Taish jee.... bahut bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2012, 05:40:00 PM »
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Pehle samajheN to sahi rehguzar ki baateN,
Gar mila waqt, to fir karenge safar ki baateN

Ek waqt naam leNge log 'taish' ka bhi mehfiloN me,
Jab chidengi ghazalen, hongi sukhanwar ki baateN

Bahut umda ghazal hai taish jee
par ye ashaar ...behatreen

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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2012, 06:23:17 PM »
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bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai , Taish saheb .5th sher bahut sachha hai.
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2012, 08:14:34 PM »
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waaaah waaah.... bahut khoob Taish jee.... bahut bahut khoob  Thumbs UP

suman ji aapki daad humare sar aankhon pe, bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karti raaheN aap, hum naadanon ki...
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2012, 01:09:02 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2012, 02:40:04 AM »
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humesha ki terah behtareen
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2012, 02:47:31 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 28, 2012, 04:43:58 PM
Pehle samajheN to sahi rehguzar ki baateN,
Gar mila waqt, to fir karenge safar ki baateN.

Kehte haiN ke sun leti hain deewareN bhi,
Ghar se jo baahar jaati haiN ghar ki baateN.

Ulfat hai lafz-e-bemaani is daur me, kyuNki,
Log karte haiN faqat idhar-udhar ki baateN.

Kal jo suna tha maine chaupaal pe logoN ko,
Soch raha hun ab bhi ki thi vo kidhar ki baateN.

Iski mitti se na utTh jaaye kahiiN buu-e-Khuluus
Ab bohat gaoN meN sunta huuN shahar kii baateN

Jaagtey haiN to andheroN meN bhatak jaate haiN
Log bas neend meN karte haiN sahar kii baateN.

Ek waqt naam leNge log 'taish' ka bhi mehfiloN me,
Jab chidengi ghazalen, hongi sukhanwar ki baateN.
bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal kahi hai, khas kar ye shair hasil e ghzal shair hai, bohut saari daad qubool kareN...
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2012, 05:04:50 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 28, 2012, 05:40:00 PM
Pehle samajheN to sahi rehguzar ki baateN,
Gar mila waqt, to fir karenge safar ki baateN

Ek waqt naam leNge log 'taish' ka bhi mehfiloN me,
Jab chidengi ghazalen, hongi sukhanwar ki baateN

Bahut umda ghazal hai taish jee
par ye ashaar ...behatreen



hehehehe mukesh sahab, bas maqte me apni tareef kiye baigair raha nahi gaya... tongue3 waise jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko peshkash pasand aayi, bas yuNhi hausla dete rahiye likhne ka... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2012, 05:36:03 AM »
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bahut khoob taish ji dili daad qubool farmaayen
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 28, 2012, 06:23:17 PM
bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai , Taish saheb .5th sher bahut sachha hai.

hasan sahab shukriya ise pasand karne ka, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki ghazal aapko pasand aayi aur kuch sachhyi bhi dikhi bas aage v aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN aur hum likhne ki kosisheN karte rahenge...
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2012, 08:29:06 AM »
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Bahot khoob Taish ji. Bahot achhi takhleeq hai. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2012, 09:33:05 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2012, 12:33:26 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Taish ji...!!!
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Quote from: prashad on November 29, 2012, 01:09:02 AM
wah wah

prashad sahab, bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka.. Usual Smile
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