Talatum Hai

by drpandey on January 28, 2010, 07:39:18 PM
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Talatum hai ke dariya hai nazar ye kyuN nahin Aate,
Bahar hai yake tufaN hai gujar ye kyuN nahin Jaate.! Shocked

Hui muddat ke sahil se nazara kar rahe hum bhi,
Nateeza garq hi hona yaquinan inki kismat hai,
Musafir in safeenoN ke utar fir kyuN nahin Jaate.!! Shocked

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2010, 07:47:45 PM »
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Shihab Ji Pasand fermaney ka dil se Sukriya.....
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2010, 05:38:17 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey ji ek baar phir aapne karishmaai andaaz mein apna kalaam pesh kiya hai. Bahut achha laga. Very nice. Excellent.

Quote from: drpandey on January 28, 2010, 07:39:18 PM
Talatum hai ke dariya hai nazar ye kyuN nahin Aate,
Bahar hai yake tufaN hai gujar ye kyuN nahin Jaate.! Shocked

Hui muddat ke sahil se nazara kar rahe hum bhi,
Nateeza garq hi hona yaquinan inki kismat hai,
Musafir in safeenoN ke utar fir kyuN nahin Jaate.!! Shocked

Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
 
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2010, 08:46:18 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 29, 2010, 05:38:17 AM
Wah wah Pandey ji ek baar phir aapne karishmaai andaaz mein apna kalaam pesh kiya hai. Bahut achha laga. Very nice. Excellent.
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2010, 08:51:08 AM »
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Riyaj Sahab aapke hausla afjai ka behad Sukriya....bas meri galtiyon per jaroor dhyan dete raheH...
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2010, 09:56:09 AM »
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 Applause
Bahot khoob kaha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2010, 10:01:23 AM »
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 Thankyou ! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2010, 02:05:12 PM »
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Nice Creation Pandey JI
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2010, 04:29:44 AM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB pANDEYG




Quote from: Shihab on January 28, 2010, 07:41:52 PM
Bahut Khoob Pandey Ji....
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