tamanna.........(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on December 08, 2011, 05:51:17 AM
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                            na kar sitam itna ki mar jaaye hum.!
                            ho ijaazat ab toh ghar jaaye hum.!!

                            hain wahshi sabhi kafile mein ab tak,
                            mile zaahid koi toh sudhar jaaye hum,

                            chalte-chalte tanhaa thakk gaye bahut,
                            mile saathi koi toh thahar jaaye hum,

                            tujh se mohabbat kar jaan pe aa bani,
                            hua dushman zamanaa ab kidhar jaaye hum,

                            rahaa aaine ke beech chehra har waqt,
                            sikhaaye hunar koi toh sanwar jaaye hum,

                            aur jeene ki tamanna baaqi nahin khamosh.!
                            de koi umr apni toh mookar jaaye hum.....!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2011, 06:03:06 AM »
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                            na kar sitam itna ki mar jaaye hum.!
                            ho ijaazat ab toh ghar jaaye hum.!!

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                            hain wahshi sabhi kafile mein ab tak,
                            mile zaahid koi toh sudhar jaaye hum,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                            chalte-chalte tanhaa thakk gaye bahut,
                            mile saathi koi toh thahar jaaye hum,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                            tujh se mohabbat kar jaan pe aa bani,
                            hua dushman zamanaa ab kidhar jaaye hum,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                            rahaa aaine ke beech chehra har waqt,
                            sikhaaye hunar koi toh sanwar jaaye hum,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                            aur jeene ki tamanna baaqi nahin khamosh.!
                            de koi umr apni toh mookar jaaye hum.....!!


WAH WAH.. KYA BAAT HAI K.A JI...

BAHUT HI KHOOB.. HAR EK SHER HAR EK LAFZ LAJAWAAB HAI...
LAKHON DAAD KABUL FARMAYE..

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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2011, 06:09:39 AM »
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khaamosh ji bahut sunder ghazal pesh kee hai. muabaarak ho
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2011, 07:06:43 AM »
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khamosh aawaaz ji, bahut pyaari,dil ko chhoone wali ghazal hai.tah e dil se daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2011, 08:07:55 AM »
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                            na kar sitam itna ki mar jaaye hum.!
                            ho ijaazat ab toh ghar jaaye hum.!!

                            hain wahshi sabhi kafile mein ab tak,
                            mile zaahid koi toh sudhar jaaye hum,

                            chalte-chalte tanhaa thakk gaye bahut,
                            mile saathi koi toh thahar jaaye hum,

                            tujh se mohabbat kar jaan pe aa bani,
                            hua dushman zamanaa ab kidhar jaaye hum,

                            rahaa aaine ke beech chehra har waqt,
                            sikhaaye hunar koi toh sanwar jaaye hum,

                            aur jeene ki tamanna baaqi nahin khamosh.!
                            de koi umr apni toh mookar jaaye hum.....!!



Bahut Bahut Khooob Khamosh Awaaz Ji..

Umda Peshkash!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2011, 10:53:54 AM »
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Aadab Janab K A jee


Bade dino baad khub kalaam lekar hazir huye haiN
janab.. bahut khoob aur achche ahsas O khayaaloN
ko khubsurat lafzoN meiN kalam baND kiya hai aapne..


Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab.. HUmari dili
daad O mubarakbad akbul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2011, 11:53:48 AM »
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                            na kar sitam itna ki mar jaaye hum.!
                            ho ijaazat ab toh ghar jaaye hum.!!

                            hain wahshi sabhi kafile mein ab tak,
                            mile zaahid koi toh sudhar jaaye hum,

                            chalte-chalte tanhaa thakk gaye bahut,
                            mile saathi koi toh thahar jaaye hum, Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            tujh se mohabbat kar jaan pe aa bani,
                            hua dushman zamanaa ab kidhar jaaye hum,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            rahaa aaine ke beech chehra har waqt,
                            sikhaaye hunar koi toh sanwar jaaye hum,  Applause Applause Applause Applause

                            aur jeene ki tamanna baaqi nahin khamosh.!
                            de koi umr apni toh mookar jaaye hum.....!!

Bahut Khoob KA ji
Bada hi dardila maqta kaha hai...kya kahe..mere to hoth sile hue hai..ise to band hotho se hi samajhna chahiye..
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2011, 02:31:34 PM »
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Uff Kya kahun kya khoobsoorat kalam pesh kiya hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda  !!

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Divya
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2011, 04:49:54 PM »
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Khamooshji,
Dil se Daad
Kya behtareen Ghazal likhi hai .. Lajawaab
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2011, 06:28:54 PM »
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kamaal--behad kamaal
gazabb ke aashar kahe hain--

bht khoob khamosh ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2011, 09:31:43 AM »
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bht bht khoob khamosh ji....
sply 2nd last.....
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2011, 12:51:47 PM »
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WAH WAH.. KYA BAAT HAI K.A JI...

BAHUT HI KHOOB.. HAR EK SHER HAR EK LAFZ LAJAWAAB HAI...
LAKHON DAAD KABUL FARMAYE..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



THANKS MT
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2011, 04:49:28 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 18, 2011, 01:00:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
khaamosh ji bahut sunder ghazal pesh kee hai. muabaarak ho

THANX SKS
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«Reply #14 on: December 18, 2011, 01:03:10 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah ...kya baat hai ...very good work
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