Tamannao ka sheher...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 23, 2011, 03:38:51 PM
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Falak pe rehta chand bhi kuch dino mein poora ho jata hai,
jane kya baat hai jo merre hi intezar ka anjam nhi ata,

duniya ka dastur hai ek waqt k baad har cheez khatam ho jati hai,
merre dil ko chalte chalte ek arsa hua jane kyun ise aram nhi ata,

milta rehta hai zamane bhar k logo ko mhbto ka paigham,
bus merre hi ishq k musafir ka mujhe salaam nhi ata,

dubti kayi kashtiya bachayi hai jisne,
use merri kashti ko kinare pe lane ka kaam nhi ata,

jude hai kayi naam is viran si zindgi se,
jiske sahare guzar saku main apni umar aesa koi naam nhi ata,

banjar ho gya hai ab tou tamanao ka sheher,
per nilam karne ise koi sar-e-aam nhi ata,

bahut likh chuki ab maaf karna dosto..
apke dil ko chhu sake jo ab GEET ko aesa kalaam nhi ata..........
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 07:16:05 PM »
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yunhi nahin tum aaj mash.hur is mehfil me geet
ho shaamil har dil me bas hontho par naam nahin aata... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 07:41:43 PM »
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Nice poem Brokenbyluvji....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sabra ka phal hota  hai meetha,Ye kyu Samajh  nahi aata
Naa jaane kaun se chashme pehan k dhundti  ho tum naam

Anaam mai chhupa hai jo naam tujhe nazar nahi aataa
kis ajnabee ki talaash hai,saamne hai wo nazar nahi aata

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Falak pe rehta chand bhi kuch dino mein poora ho jata hai,
jane kya baat hai jo merre hi intezar ka anjam nhi ata,

duniya ka dastur hai ek waqt k baad har cheez khatam ho jati hai,
merre dil ko chalte chalte ek arsa hua jane kyun ise aram nhi ata,

milta rehta hai zamane bhar k logo ko mhbto ka paigham,
bus merre hi ishq k musafir ka mujhe salaam nhi ata,

dubti kayi kashtiya bachayi hai jisne,
use merri kashti ko kinare pe lane ka kaam nhi ata,

jude hai kayi naam is viran si zindgi se,
jiske sahare guzar saku main apni umar aesa koi naam nhi ata,

banjar ho gya hai ab tou tamanao ka sheher,
per nilam karne ise koi sar-e-aam nhi ata,

bahut likh chuki ab maaf karna dosto..
apke dil ko chhu sake jo ab GEET ko aesa kalaam nhi ata..........



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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 08:36:05 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 03:58:27 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya intezar ji anaam ji rishi ji aur shihab ji..

Intezar ji n anaam ji bahut shukriya itne khubsurat alfazo k liye...
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 04:05:37 PM »
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""
tamannao ka shahar hai
suna he---'nir' ne
samay ke saath bhar jaata dil ka har zakham hai !!
""
kya kamaal ka post hai BBL ji
""
kai kashtiyan bachai hai jisne--uff wo line to super dooper he
umda aur behad umda post ji
""
apki kalaam parhne ke baad bas aapki khusi ke lie dua nikalti hai
god bless you dear
""
thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 04:15:14 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 24, 2011, 04:05:37 PM
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tamannao ka shahar hai
suna he---'nir' ne
samay ke saath bhar jaata dil ka har zakham hai !!
""
kya kamaal ka post hai BBL ji
""
kai kashtiyan bachai hai jisne--uff wo line to super dooper he
umda aur behad umda post ji
""
apki kalaam parhne ke baad bas aapki khusi ke lie dua nikalti hai
god bless you dear
""
thanx

Baahut bahut shukriya nirala ji aur sath hi mujhe behad khushi hai ki apko iss baar merri kavita main koi kami nazar nhi aayi..apki duao ka bahut shukriya god bless u too ji.take care...
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 04:19:25 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 23, 2011, 03:38:51 PM



Falak pe rehta chand bhi kuch dino mein poora ho jata hai,
jane kya baat hai jo merre hi intezar ka anjam nhi ata,

duniya ka dastur hai ek waqt k baad har cheez khatam ho jati hai,
merre dil ko chalte chalte ek arsa hua jane kyun ise aram nhi ata,

milta rehta hai zamane bhar k logo ko mhbto ka paigham,
bus merre hi ishq k musafir ka mujhe salaam nhi ata,

dubti kayi kashtiya bachayi hai jisne,
use merri kashti ko kinare pe lane ka kaam nhi ata,

jude hai kayi naam is viran si zindgi se,
jiske sahare guzar saku main apni umar aesa koi naam nhi ata,

banjar ho gya hai ab tou tamanao ka sheher,
per nilam karne ise koi sar-e-aam nhi ata,

bahut likh chuki ab maaf karna dosto..
apke dil ko chhu sake jo ab GEET ko aesa kalaam nhi ata..........





Agar Tuanu Dil Nu Chuna Nahi Aanda Te Muaaf Karna Phir kisi Nu vi Nahi Aanda..

bahuttttttt Bahutttttt Khooob Geetji..

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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 04:22:00 PM »
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mai kami nahi dekhta aur na hi dekhna aata hai.
bas jo feel hota hai wo kahta hu--aur jo nhi samjhta wo puchta hun.
wese bhi itni kabiliyat nhi ki aapki kavita me kamiyan dhoond sakun.
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 04:29:15 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 24, 2011, 04:22:00 PM
mai kami nahi dekhta aur na hi dekhna aata hai.
bas jo feel hota hai wo kahta hu--aur jo nhi samjhta wo puchta hun.
wese bhi itni kabiliyat nhi ki aapki kavita me kamiyan dhoond sakun.

Ji behtar hai ji..shukriya take care...
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 04:31:04 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2011, 04:19:25 PM

Agar Tuanu Dil Nu Chuna Nahi Aanda Te Muaaf Karna Phir kisi Nu vi Nahi Aanda..

bahuttttttt Bahutttttt Khooob Geetji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tuanu es tarah lagta hai te ji bahut bahut shukriya....
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