Tamasha

by Sonu on December 30, 2004, 02:40:56 AM
Pages: 1 2 [3]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 3365 times)
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #30 on: January 19, 2005, 04:12:22 AM »
Reply with quote
Usual Smile whaeed etna keo muskura rahey hoo keya baat hai keskeo kesko ajj phansa apney sach sach batana icon_scratch

tum etna jo muskura rahey hoo,
keya gum hai jisko chupa rahey hoo.

waheed yea gazel mujhey pori nahi ati hai mager mujhey achi legti hai
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
qudrat ka dikha neya tamasha by waheed_rose2004 in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3 4 »
Tamasha nahi dekha by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
Tamasha by Sonu in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
Ye zindagi meri ek ajeeb tamasha hai by Delicate_Doll in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Hum tamasha ban gaye by anil kumar aksh in Ghazals
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #31 on: January 19, 2005, 04:47:44 AM »
Reply with quote
kya karoon sonu bahot ro liya......ab to muskurana hi hai..........  aur kuch chupana hai.....  :lol:

haan sonu.........bahot acchi ghazal hai ......

mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai...... jagjeet   singh ne gaya hai........
Logged
sandhaya
Guest
«Reply #32 on: January 19, 2005, 05:56:18 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "yogi"
aaja tamasha ban janekka dil karta hai
aaj khud ko unke liye mitnaka ka dil iraada karta hai
sabkuch yeh dil karta,ek unka dil hai jo kuch nahi karta hai,
phir bhi humare dil par raaz karata hai



very touching line yogi
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #33 on: January 19, 2005, 09:42:53 PM »
Reply with quote
haan sahye kha apney waheed bahoot he achi gazel hia or sahi kaha apney apney key ab bahoota ro leay hai ab to muskurana hia hee hai mager ek baat samajh mey nahi ahey waheed apney chupana keya hia icon_scratch keay chupa rahey hoo arey koi gf dundi hai to humey bhibatow na hum bhi too miley us dream girl sey.

jagjeet singh bahoot achi gazle gata hia...

acha waheed app khey rahye they key pooja chali gayea hai mager meyney to kal parso deykha tha vo online thi or ati ahi to i think ager app usko mess bheyjney to vo apko rely jroor deygi...
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #34 on: January 21, 2005, 09:49:05 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "yogi"
aaja tamasha ban janekka dil karta hai
aaj khud ko unke liye mitnaka ka dil iraada karta hai
sabkuch yeh dil karta,ek unka dil hai jo kuch nahi karta hai,
phir bhi humare dil par raaz karata hai


Wah!!! Bahoot khoob Yogi!!!
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #35 on: January 29, 2005, 04:41:50 PM »
Reply with quote
dekha sonu.........  abhi yahan  aaye thi....lekin kuch nahin boli........... :sad:

Jab Yaad Ki Na'o Chalti Hai
To Dard Ki Laher Ubharti Hai
To Bas Mai Kahan Hum Hote Hain
Anson'o Ki Barish Barti Haii
Tab Yaad Buhat Tum Atay Ho
Tab Yaad Buhat Tum Atay Ho...............
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #36 on: April 08, 2005, 06:06:24 PM »
Reply with quote
keay huya waheed kon ahyee thi abhi...

batey bhool jatey hai yadey yaad ati hai,
yea yadey humey umer bhar tadpati hia,
dard kee lehro ko tum uthney na dyea kro,
apney gumo ko parow ko dikhay ana kro,
jub vo sahra hee chut chuka hoo to us kenarey per jaya mat kro,
jub yaad uski ahye to hus ker bhula deya kro,
ahko ki barish hoo to barish mey bhig leya kro,
phir bhi yaar na jaye to yoindia per ah jaya kro,
gum bhulaney key or bhi bhaney hai hum sey puchney ah jaya kro.
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #37 on: April 09, 2005, 06:20:12 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "Sonu"
keay huya waheed kon ahyee thi abhi...

batey bhool jatey hai yadey yaad ati hai,
yea yadey humey umer bhar tadpati hia,
dard kee lehro ko tum uthney na dyea kro,
apney gumo ko parow ko dikhay ana kro,
jub vo sahra hee chut chuka hoo to us kenarey per jaya mat kro,
jub yaad uski ahye to hus ker bhula deya kro,
ahko ki barish hoo to barish mey bhig leya kro,
phir bhi yaar na jaye to yoindia per ah jaya kro,
gum bhulaney key or bhi bhaney hai hum sey puchney ah jaya kro.


wow  sonu..............   bahot  khoob...........kaun  aaya  tha abhi....

jaane  kaun  aaya  aur  mausam ki tarah  guzar   gaya
aisa laga ki  koi  mera  ek  puraana  dost  bina kuch  kahe  chala gaya..
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #38 on: April 09, 2005, 06:26:37 PM »
Reply with quote
wowwwww waheedd!!!!! very gud liness!!!!!!!!!

 :D
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #39 on: April 10, 2005, 07:59:49 AM »
Reply with quote
shukriya waheed ( ur welcome) arey mujhey nahi peta kon tha tumhara hee mess tha uska reply dyea sheyd nelu key bary mey khey rahye hugye

waheed_rose2004
Monitor

Joined: 05 Jul 2004
Posts: 10258
Location: Bewafa Ke Shaher Mein
  Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:41 pm  

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
dekha sonu......... abhi yahan aaye thi....lekin kuch nahin boli...........  

Jab Yaad Ki Na'o Chalti Hai
To Dard Ki Laher Ubharti Hai
To Bas Mai Kahan Hum Hote Hain
Anson'o Ki Barish Barti Haii
Tab Yaad Buhat Tum Atay Ho
Tab Yaad Buhat Tum Atay Ho...............

_________________
Unki Kismat Mein Sada Chain Hi Likhna Ya Rub,
Wah Jo Har Baat Per Dil Mera Tod Dete hain ________
 
khair janey do din gaye bat gayee.

bhoot wonderful lines likhi hia waheed...

musan atey jatey hai,
kuch log bechdtey hia kuch chut jatey hai,
jiska nam peta he na hoo pass mey uska bulaya jata nahi hai,
dil key joo kreeb hoo usey bhulaya jata nahi hai.
puraney manjoro ko ab tarasho nahi,
naye makano ki khidkeo mey jaal leg  na jaye,
puraney dost ki yaad aney per tujhey naye dosto ka sath na chut jaye.
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #40 on: April 10, 2005, 08:20:47 AM »
Reply with quote
very  nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sonu...........bahot  khoob...

yeh  kisne  likha.....kaun  hai yeh.... Puzzled !  main  nahin samjha.........
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #41 on: April 11, 2005, 09:03:38 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya (u r welcome)

janey do waheed nahi jantey hoo acha hia Usual Smile
Logged
Pages: 1 2 [3]  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: Tamasha
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 09, 2024, 01:50:30 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer