tamashaa... (by vb)

by vb on December 05, 2013, 10:35:51 PM
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Wo jis ki khaatir, likhay hen hum ne, inhen tamaashaa, bana raha hay
Na-jaanay hum ko, khud apnay naghmon, pe aaj ghusa, ku aa raha hay

Hazaar cheekhay, hazaar roayay, sitam-garoN ki, palak na bheegi
Kai dinon say, fazool naghmon, ka bojh koi, utha raha hay

Mitaa he den gay, phir apnay likhay, tamaam naghmay, usi taraah say
Wo aaj hum ko, guzishtaa saalon, ki yaad phir say, dila raha hay

Do aik din hen, tum aa kay parh lo, qalam ka lehja, jo dil men ayay
Tumhen he jaanaaN! hamara har ik, udaas naghma, bula raha hay

Udaas sapnay, ghubaar moorat, ujaar naghmay, fareb-soorat
Tu in men aisa, bhe kya hay vb, jo tum ko such-much, rula raha hay



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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2013, 10:51:58 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoobsoorat, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2013, 11:05:33 PM »
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VB ji ek rau subh men doongaa udhaar rahaa bas ayr kyaa kahoon aage aap khud samajhdaar hain
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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2013, 11:25:58 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoobsoorat, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.

Iftakhar Ahmad jee! buhat shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2013, 11:32:34 PM »
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VB ji ek rau subh men doongaa udhaar rahaa bas ayr kyaa kahoon aage aap khud samajhdaar hain

sksaini4 jee!
aap ki inayat k shukar-guzaar hen hum... yahan Rau ka sikka chalta hay aur is waqt tak hamari jholi men sika-raaij-ul-waqt mubligh 18 Rau daalay gayay hen.. bad-qismati hamari k hum nahi jaantay k ye sikka kis dukaan par chalay ga...

hamaari duniya men jo sikka chalta hay us hisaab say hamari jabe men kuchh khotay sikkay hen... jinhen kisi dust-bin ki nazar kar den gay...

hamaaray liyay itna he kaafi hay k aap ka guzar hamaaray koochhay say ho jaata hay... aap ki hosla afzaai he kaafi hay, ye Rau kisi aisay shakhs k kaam aa saktay hen, jo is ki qadar bhe jaanta hay aur isay chala bhe sakta hay...

ake dafa phir hausla afzaai aur taareefi kalemaat ka shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2013, 01:42:37 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2013, 02:20:03 AM »
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bahut khub vb ji.. very beautiful creation..
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2013, 09:14:29 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2013, 04:47:11 PM »
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buhat shukriya aap sub ka..
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