Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai kuch Iss Qadar "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
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Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Karna Seekhlo
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 03:27:44 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Kar Le
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut khoob likheya hai khwaish ji...
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 04:06:43 PM »
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Kyaaaaaaaaaaa baat hai mere dost..
jeeyo my friend..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2010, 07:33:12 PM »
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Bahot khoob Khwaish Ji, Hazaron daad hazir karta hoon is ghazal per...behad khoobsurat hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause



Quote from: khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Kar Le
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 04:58:54 AM »
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отличный сайт!
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2010, 05:50:50 AM »
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khwaish ji .....wat a mindblowing presentation ..........
dil chu gaya apka har shabd ......really  its wonderfull......isi gungunane ka dil kar raha he ....koi dhun bataiye jis pe ise gunguna saku........superb  poetry..

few lines from my side....

NA APNE MILE NA ANJAAN MILE
HUME TO MAHFILO ME BHI SUNSASN MILE

WAFA AUR BEWAFAYI KA FAISLA AB HO CHUKA MUSHKIL
HUME TO QURBANI PER BHI SO SO ILJAAM MILE

DAR B DAR BHATKA HU TA-UMRR SUKUN KI TALASH ME
EE KHUDA SHAYAD AB TERE DAR PER HI KUCH PAL KA ARAAM MILE

KOI MILA DAULATMAND KOI MILA JARURATMNAD
DIL ME CHAHAT THI KOI TO APNSA SA EK INSAN MILE
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2010, 08:43:32 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 21, 2010, 03:27:44 PM
Bahut khoob likheya hai khwaish ji...

Thankyou Sooooooooo Much geetji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 09:16:14 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Kar Le
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

khwaish ji kai dino baad aapke kisi post pe reply de rahi hun..kya karti kuch aisa ban hi nahinraha tha k aapke likhe pe jawwab de paati...
ek adna si koshish ki hai yahan ..ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega....

Iss safar me chalte hume log hazaar mile
Kuch jaane pehchane to kuch anjaan mile

Dekhkar muskura diye kabhi wo hume
Kabhi nazrein churate wo saahibaan mile

Kehne ko to sab apne hain yhan is mehfil me
Kahan hume yahan koi aapse kadardaan mile

Jo samjh paaye na hamare ehsaas aat kabhi
Hume aise hi log aksar gaate apne gungaan mile

Zaroori to nahin k kasak ki har khwaish puri ho jaye
Bas itni dua karo k uski parwaz ko khula aasmaan mile...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2010, 09:17:20 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob khawish ji.....
luved d 1st one...
superb lines...
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2010, 09:18:56 AM »
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what a mindblowing reply kasak ji....
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2010, 09:43:53 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob khwaish bhai..

bahut badhiya peshkash hai apki..

yunhi likhte rahiye~
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 21, 2010, 03:27:44 PM
Bahut khoob likheya hai khwaish ji...

Tuada Tehhhh Dillllll To Shukriya geetji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2010, 01:54:21 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 21, 2010, 04:06:43 PM
Kyaaaaaaaaaaa baat hai mere dost..
jeeyo my friend..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Humesha Ki Tarah Tehhhhhhhhhhh Dilllllllll Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

bas Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega
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Quote from: Crervisse on December 22, 2010, 04:58:54 AM
отличный сайт!

Kuch Samaj Nahi Aaya par phir Bhi Shukriya
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Quote from: drpandey on December 21, 2010, 07:33:12 PM
Bahot khoob Khwaish Ji, Hazaron daad hazir karta hoon is ghazal per...behad khoobsurat hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause





Tehhhhhhh Dilllllllll Se Shukriya DrPandey Ji..

Jab Daad Aap Jaise Shahkaro Se Haasil Ho to Khushi Dugni ho jaati hai..

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower
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