Tanha Hue Jab!!!

by Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:39:54 PM
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Tanha hue jab to her insaan ko tanha paaya
Khud ke sath her ek ko badlta paaya

Jo dunia lagati thi kabhi haseen her pal mujhko
Khud ki tanhaai main, sabko bahoot khokhla paaya

Kahne ko main bhi kah deti hu ki sab thik hai yaha
Ajj aoro ke thik kahne main, dard ka samunder paaya

Tanha hue jab to her insaan ko tanha paaya
Khud ke sath her ek ko badlta paaya !!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2009, 06:46:13 PM »
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wah POOJA ji wah... bahut hi dard sey likha hai aap ney ..



BADAL JAYE DUNIYA, NAHI BADALTEY SACHEY DOST
HUMNEY TOH BUSS YEHI GEET HAR BAAR DOHRAYA
KAISEY TUMHEY YEH AAJ KISSA SUNAYA
DUKH SEY AAJ MERA SINA BHAR AAYA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2009, 07:00:26 PM »
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wahhh pooja ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne n very true.

"Kehne ko main keh deti.....
these lines i liked d most.

gr8 work jasbir ji.

"Tanha huye jab tab jaana tanhaiyon ka dard kya hai,
 tu nahi tha jab,tab jana tere bina nidhi kya hai,
 khud se baat karti hun to b har baat tujse hoti hai,
 aaj jaana kis kadar mera jeevan tujhse judaa hai."
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2009, 07:05:27 PM »
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THANKS NIDHI JI &
Bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney


MERE HATHOH  MEH TERA HAATH DEH DEH
LAKIROH MEH MERE TERA NAAM LIKH DEH
KAISEY DOOR REH SAKTI HAI KOI PARCHAYI
ISS KOREY DIL KOH APNEY PYAR KA SAUGAAT DEH DEH




JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 04:50:02 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2009, 06:39:54 PM
Tanha hue jab to her insaan ko tanha paaya
Khud ke sath her ek ko badlta paaya

Jo dunia lagati thi kabhi haseen her pal mujhko
Khud ki tanhaai main, sabko bahoot khokhla paaya

Kahne ko main bhi kah deti hu ki sab thik hai yaha
Ajj aoro ke thik kahne main, dard ka samunder paaya

Tanha hue jab to her insaan ko tanha paaya
Khud ke sath her ek ko badlta paaya !!!


Awesome Written Pooja di.. bahoot dard chupa hai iss rachna mea.. bahoot Khoob!

Jahan mila mujhe Shahara Zindgai ka
Wahin par Khud ko maine akela paaya

Roti rahi Saari saari raat mein tahna
Apno ko nahi Parayo ko apne saath paaya

Rang bhare the jis jis be meri holi mea
Unko hi maine Mujhse Rang Churate paaya

Banati thi pyaar ki kasti jisme mere sang
Dard hua,jab usse kasti mea kisi aur k sang paya
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2009, 04:51:02 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 07, 2009, 06:46:13 PM


wah POOJA ji wah... bahut hi dard sey likha hai aap ney ..



BADAL JAYE DUNIYA, NAHI BADALTEY SACHEY DOST
HUMNEY TOH BUSS YEHI GEET HAR BAAR DOHRAYA
KAISEY TUMHEY YEH AAJ KISSA SUNAYA
DUKH SEY AAJ MERA SINA BHAR AAYA



JASBIR SINGH




Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 07, 2009, 07:05:27 PM


THANKS NIDHI JI &
Bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney


MERE HATHOH  MEH TERA HAATH DEH DEH
LAKIROH MEH MERE TERA NAAM LIKH DEH
KAISEY DOOR REH SAKTI HAI KOI PARCHAYI
ISS KOREY DIL KOH APNEY PYAR KA SAUGAAT DEH DEH




JASBIR SINGH
Hira_company@yahoo.com




Waah Waah Jasbir ji.. bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2009, 04:51:36 AM »
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 07:00:26 PM
wahhh pooja ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne n very true.

"Kehne ko main keh deti.....
these lines i liked d most.

gr8 work jasbir ji.

"Tanha huye jab tab jaana tanhaiyon ka dard kya hai,
 tu nahi tha jab,tab jana tere bina nidhi kya hai,
 khud se baat karti hun to b har baat tujse hoti hai,
 aaj jaana kis kadar mera jeevan tujhse judaa hai."

Waah Nidhi... bahoot bahoot khoob Likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2009, 06:32:34 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI.......

JAB SAATH THEY, SAARI DUNIYA KO APNA PAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,KISI KA NA SAATH PAAYA.

JAB SAATH THEY,KISI SEY HAMNEY KABHI NA GABRAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,DARATA HAI HUMKO AB APNA SAAYA.
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2009, 01:35:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 08, 2009, 04:50:02 AM
Awesome Written Pooja di.. bahoot dard chupa hai iss rachna mea.. bahoot Khoob!

Jahan mila mujhe Shahara Zindgai ka
Wahin par Khud ko maine akela paaya

Roti rahi Saari saari raat mein tahna
Apno ko nahi Parayo ko apne saath paaya

Rang bhare the jis jis be meri holi mea
Unko hi maine Mujhse Rang Churate paaya

Banati thi pyaar ki kasti jisme mere sang
Dard hua,jab usse kasti mea kisi aur k sang paya

wah wah wah, sophi ji.. wah bahut hi khoobsurati sey aap ney dard pesh kia hai... wah ... jindagi yeh hakikat hai

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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2009, 01:36:35 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 08, 2009, 06:32:34 AM
KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI.......

JAB SAATH THEY, SAARI DUNIYA KO APNA PAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,KISI KA NA SAATH PAAYA.

JAB SAATH THEY,KISI SEY HAMNEY KABHI NA GABRAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,DARATA HAI HUMKO AB APNA SAAYA.

wah cara ji, wah,, bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2009, 01:37:05 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 08, 2009, 04:51:02 AM
Waah Waah Jasbir ji.. bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai

thanks sophi ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: August 10, 2009, 06:22:57 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 07, 2009, 06:46:13 PM


wah POOJA ji wah... bahut hi dard sey likha hai aap ney ..



BADAL JAYE DUNIYA, NAHI BADALTEY SACHEY DOST
HUMNEY TOH BUSS YEHI GEET HAR BAAR DOHRAYA
KAISEY TUMHEY YEH AAJ KISSA SUNAYA
DUKH SEY AAJ MERA SINA BHAR AAYA



JASBIR SINGH




Thanks Jas ji and Nice lines from you too!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2009, 06:23:27 PM »
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on August 07, 2009, 07:00:26 PM
wahhh pooja ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne n very true.

"Kehne ko main keh deti.....
these lines i liked d most.

gr8 work jasbir ji.

"Tanha huye jab tab jaana tanhaiyon ka dard kya hai,
 tu nahi tha jab,tab jana tere bina nidhi kya hai,
 khud se baat karti hun to b har baat tujse hoti hai,
 aaj jaana kis kadar mera jeevan tujhse judaa hai."

Thansk Nidhi!!! apnebhi khoob likha hai... ab atte rahiyega...
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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2009, 06:25:06 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 08, 2009, 04:50:02 AM
Awesome Written Pooja di.. bahoot dard chupa hai iss rachna mea.. bahoot Khoob!

Jahan mila mujhe Shahara Zindgai ka
Wahin par Khud ko maine akela paaya

Roti rahi Saari saari raat mein tahna
Apno ko nahi Parayo ko apne saath paaya

Rang bhare the jis jis be meri holi mea
Unko hi maine Mujhse Rang Churate paaya

Banati thi pyaar ki kasti jisme mere sang
Dard hua,jab usse kasti mea kisi aur k sang paya

Thanks Dear!! waise main ise vayang main likhna chahti thi magar shabd jis tarah se nikale wo baat nahibani... same topic per kabhi man hua to phir se vayang main likhne ki koshish hogi...

Apki likhi lines bhi bahoot khoob hai...
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2009, 06:25:44 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 08, 2009, 06:32:34 AM
KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI.......

JAB SAATH THEY, SAARI DUNIYA KO APNA PAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,KISI KA NA SAATH PAAYA.

JAB SAATH THEY,KISI SEY HAMNEY KABHI NA GABRAAYA,
TANHA HUE JAB,DARATA HAI HUMKO AB APNA SAAYA.

Thanks Cara ji... Good lines from you too!!
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