Tanhaa ho gayaa hoo mai

by NETRAPAL on December 19, 2008, 04:56:08 AM
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mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo
chut gayaa sab peeche,
safar me jindgee ke, aaj
akelaa mai chal rahaa hoo
mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo.....

akelaa hee ayaa thaa yahaa
jaoongaa akelaa hee magar
n jaane kab or kahaan,,,,,,

farj jo the mere, mai nibhaa ayaa
rishtee bhee mai sare nibhaa ayaa
kabhee bhayee banaa thaa
ban kar betaa mai abhee
chita baap ke jalaa ayaa...
farj saare nibhaa ayaa

ek galtee kar gayaa tha mai
apne aap ko bhool gayaa  tha mai
aaj lee jo sudh apnee maine
laawarish saa ho gayaa hoo mai
aaj tanhaa ho gayaa hoo mai...

sathee bhee ayaa tha jeewan me
bichad gayaa tha magar kuch pal me
neshaane apnee wo chod gayaa tha
ek baap or maa mai hee ban gayaa tha
aaj wo aashaa bhee toot gayee
wo bhee piya ke ghar chalee gayee

nahi hai koi pochne waal aasoo
aansoo hee baha rahaa hoo
jidgee ke sarar me apne hee
ladkhadaataa hooa chal rahaa ho
mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo ....

netra..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2008, 05:12:23 AM »
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Nice one Netrapal Ji
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2008, 05:20:33 AM »
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netra ji aapki ye poetry padhne k baad sach mei bohut dukh ho raha hai aapke dil mei daba hua dard jaise aapki shayri mei bayan ho raha hai ..... netra ji ye zindgi hai jise sabke hote hue bhi akele hi jeena padta hai ........


zindgi ek sangharsh hai dost
jisse har pal ladte jaana hai

bhale aansu ho aankho mei magar
fir bhi muskurate jaana hai

kehne ko har rishte se hain ham bandhe
par safar zindgi ka tanha hi bitana hai

mat soch netra kya hai ye zindgi
ye duniya to bas musafir khaana hai

yaha aayenge bhi sab aur jaate bhi rahenge
farz zindgi mei sab nibhate bhi rahenge

mat gam karo kisi k na rehne ka doston
ye zakhm khud-b-khud bharte hi rahenge
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 06:22:21 AM »
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bhut sahi kha hai apne....netrapalji.

tanha aate hain,
rishte ban te hain.
rishte tuethe hain,
fir tanha hojate hain.
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2008, 03:06:30 AM »
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thanks rajesh ji care ji

netra...
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2008, 03:08:08 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 19, 2008, 05:20:33 AM
tearyeyed  

netra ji aapki ye poetry padhne k baad sach mei bohut dukh ho raha hai aapke dil mei daba hua dard jaise aapki shayri mei bayan ho raha hai ..... netra ji ye zindgi hai jise sabke hote hue bhi akele hi jeena padta hai ........


zindgi ek sangharsh hai dost
jisse har pal ladte jaana hai

bhale aansu ho aankho mei magar
fir bhi muskurate jaana hai

kehne ko har rishte se hain ham bandhe
par safar zindgi ka tanha hi bitana hai

mat soch netra kya hai ye zindgi
ye duniya to bas musafir khaana hai

yaha aayenge bhi sab aur jaate bhi rahenge
farz zindgi mei sab nibhate bhi rahenge

mat gam karo kisi k na rehne ka doston
ye zakhm khud-b-khud bharte hi rahenge

pahale to aapkaa bahut bahut shukriya kee aapne bhawnaao kee kadr kee......fir ji aapne likhaa hai wastav me bahut achaa likhaa hai.....bhawan ji

netra....
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2008, 03:42:42 AM »
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bahoot khoob Netra ji and bhawna
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2008, 06:46:27 AM »
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thanks pooja ji....

netra...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2008, 07:07:20 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 19, 2008, 05:20:33 AM
tearyeyed  

netra ji aapki ye poetry padhne k baad sach mei bohut dukh ho raha hai aapke dil mei daba hua dard jaise aapki shayri mei bayan ho raha hai ..... netra ji ye zindgi hai jise sabke hote hue bhi akele hi jeena padta hai ........


zindgi ek sangharsh hai dost
jisse har pal ladte jaana hai

bhale aansu ho aankho mei magar
fir bhi muskurate jaana hai

kehne ko har rishte se hain ham bandhe
par safar zindgi ka tanha hi bitana hai

mat soch netra kya hai ye zindgi
ye duniya to bas musafir khaana hai

yaha aayenge bhi sab aur jaate bhi rahenge
farz zindgi mei sab nibhate bhi rahenge

mat gam karo kisi k na rehne ka doston
ye zakhm khud-b-khud bharte hi rahenge

Nice Bhawna Ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2008, 06:05:48 AM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on December 20, 2008, 03:08:08 AM
pahale to aapkaa bahut bahut shukriya kee aapne bhawnaao kee kadr kee......fir ji aapne likhaa hai wastav me bahut achaa likhaa hai.....bhawan ji

netra....


bohut bohut shukriya netra ji notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2008, 06:07:33 AM »
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shukriya pooja ji and rajesh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2008, 06:12:08 AM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on December 19, 2008, 04:56:08 AM
mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo
chut gayaa sab peeche,
safar me jindgee ke, aaj
akelaa mai chal rahaa hoo
mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo.....

akelaa hee ayaa thaa yahaa
jaoongaa akelaa hee magar
n jaane kab or kahaan,,,,,,

farj jo the mere, mai nibhaa ayaa
rishtee bhee mai sare nibhaa ayaa
kabhee bhayee banaa thaa
ban kar betaa mai abhee
chita baap ke jalaa ayaa...
farj saare nibhaa ayaa

ek galtee kar gayaa tha mai
apne aap ko bhool gayaa  tha mai
aaj lee jo sudh apnee maine
laawarish saa ho gayaa hoo mai
aaj tanhaa ho gayaa hoo mai...

sathee bhee ayaa tha jeewan me
bichad gayaa tha magar kuch pal me
neshaane apnee wo chod gayaa tha
ek baap or maa mai hee ban gayaa tha
aaj wo aashaa bhee toot gayee
wo bhee piya ke ghar chalee gayee

nahi hai koi pochne waal aasoo
aansoo hee baha rahaa hoo
jidgee ke sarar me apne hee
ladkhadaataa hooa chal rahaa ho
mai tanhaa ho gayaa hoo ....

netra..


Bahut hi badiya, Netra

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2008, 06:13:39 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 19, 2008, 05:20:33 AM
tearyeyed  

netra ji aapki ye poetry padhne k baad sach mei bohut dukh ho raha hai aapke dil mei daba hua dard jaise aapki shayri mei bayan ho raha hai ..... netra ji ye zindgi hai jise sabke hote hue bhi akele hi jeena padta hai ........


zindgi ek sangharsh hai dost
jisse har pal ladte jaana hai

bhale aansu ho aankho mei magar
fir bhi muskurate jaana hai

kehne ko har rishte se hain ham bandhe
par safar zindgi ka tanha hi bitana hai

mat soch netra kya hai ye zindgi
ye duniya to bas musafir khaana hai

yaha aayenge bhi sab aur jaate bhi rahenge
farz zindgi mei sab nibhate bhi rahenge

mat gam karo kisi k na rehne ka doston
ye zakhm khud-b-khud bharte hi rahenge


wah wah Bhavna, kya jawaab dia hai aap ney, bahut hi badiya

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2008, 06:22:02 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 22, 2008, 06:13:39 AM

wah wah Bhavna, kya jawaab dia hai aap ney, bahut hi badiya

Jasbir Singh


ji shukriya jasbir ji notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2008, 05:09:14 AM »
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n jane kyo tanha ho gayaa mai
nahe ponchtaa koi ansoo mere
n jane kyo ansoo bahaataa ho mai
bheed me khadaa hoo logo kee
rasto se fir bhee anjaan hoo mai..

netra....
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