tanhaai

by bekarar on October 04, 2008, 09:53:33 AM
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bujha bujha sa sama, har sun udaasi chai,
deewaron se takara ke har sada lout aai,
ab tak sirf suna tha, mahsoos aaj kiya,
kya hai akelapn aur kya hoti hai tanhaai,

masroofiyat pe meri, tere tanz, wo duhaai,
khaali hua jo ab mai, har baat yaad aai,
kitna mai namukammal, kitna adhura tujh bin,
mujhe aaina dikha gai, ye mukhtsar judai,
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 10:15:13 AM »
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bohat khoob plz ise mukammal kare 2 rubaiee aur likhe plz.
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 10:29:10 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SANJEEV BROTHER,

RAAH ME KISI KE LIYE NAZRE HAI BICHAI,
PAR HAR BAAR NIGAH DOOR TAK JA KAR SOONI
LOUT AAYI,
PYAR TO NA KIYA KISI NE HAMSE PAR INTZAAR
KIYA BAHUT,
PHIR BHI AAB TALAK KISI APNE KE HONE KI
KHAIR KHABAR NA AAYI...

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 11:06:57 AM »
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Buhj jata jub sama hai toh parwana ko kuch soojhta nahi
Patthar se takrane wale ko dard ke siwa kuch milta nahi
Jise duniya wale thukra dete hai woh akela rah jata hai
Yahi akelapan ko jhelne wali waqt hi tanhaai hoti hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 11:33:16 AM »
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kamal hai! bohat khoob bohat pyara khayal bayaan kiya apne sanjeev ji....
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 11:45:40 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 04, 2008, 10:15:13 AM
bohat khoob plz ise mukammal kare 2 rubaiee aur likhe plz.
shukriya ghayel...
jo hukum sarkaar......ek to aur add kar di hai...baaki bani to aapki najar jaroor karenge

Quote from: k.shael on October 04, 2008, 10:29:10 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB SANJEEV BROTHER,

RAAH ME KISI KE LIYE NAZRE HAI BICHAI,
PAR HAR BAAR NIGAH DOOR TAK JA KAR SOONI
LOUT AAYI,
PYAR TO NA KIYA KISI NE HAMSE PAR INTZAAR
KIYA BAHUT,
PHIR BHI AAB TALAK KISI APNE KE HONE KI
KHAI KHABAR NA AAYI...

BY. K.SHAEL

thank u shally
 bahoot asardaar chaar line likhi tune bhi..bahoot khoob

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 04, 2008, 11:06:57 AM
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Buhj jata jub sama hai toh parwana ko kuch soojhta nahi
Patthar se takrane wale ko dard ke siwa kuch milta nahi
Jise duniya wale thukra dete hai woh akela rah jata hai
Yahi akelapan ko jhelne wali waqt hi tanhaai hoti hai

bahoot shukriya rajesh ji....aur aapne tanhaai ki paribhasha di hai wo bhi achchi lagi...par ek baat mai kahunga ki......ye sirf mahsoos karne ki baaat hai

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 04, 2008, 11:33:16 AM
kamal hai! bohat khoob bohat pyara khayal bayaan kiya apne sanjeev ji....
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tanha ji aapki daad mil jaaye to sukun hota hai ki kuch thik likha gaya hai..shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2008, 01:13:56 PM »
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wah jeeeeyo kya baat ise bekarar ki lino ka jadu kahu ya tumhari bekarari ka asar bohat khoob likha hain tumne
Quote from: k.shael on October 04, 2008, 10:29:10 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB SANJEEV BROTHER,

RAAH ME KISI KE LIYE NAZRE HAI BICHAI,
PAR HAR BAAR NIGAH DOOR TAK JA KAR SOONI
LOUT AAYI,
PYAR TO NA KIYA KISI NE HAMSE PAR INTZAAR
KIYA BAHUT,
PHIR BHI AAB TALAK KISI APNE KE HONE KI
KHAI KHABAR NA AAYI...

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2008, 01:16:18 PM »
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are yaar mera bhi dil kar raha hain 4 line likhne ko par tumne aur shally ne pehle hi chakke cahuke mar diye ho mujse to ek run bhi nahi liya ja raha DOH
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 04, 2008, 11:06:57 AM
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Buhj jata jub sama hai toh parwana ko kuch soojhta nahi
Patthar se takrane wale ko dard ke siwa kuch milta nahi
Jise duniya wale thukra dete hai woh akela rah jata hai
Yahi akelapan ko jhelne wali waqt hi tanhaai hoti hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2008, 05:22:57 AM »
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SHUKRIYA BEKARAR BROTHER,
& SAJID JI...
BY. K.SHAEL

MOHABBAT KEHTE HAI DUJA NAAM HAI KHUDA
KA, KHUDA HI JAANE PHIR HAMNE BEWAFAI
KYUN PAAYI,U TO MUKAMMAL JAHAAN MILA HAME
PAR EK USKI HI KAMI ISS JHOLI ME KYUN AAYI,
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2008, 06:29:12 AM »
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BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI SANJEEV JI Applause Applause
FULL OF EMOTIONS AUR SHALLY SIS AAPKE BAARE MEIN KYA KAHOON ...
AAP TO BAHUT ACCHA LIKHTE HO Applause  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2008, 06:34:09 AM »
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SHUKRIYA DIYA DEAR...
BY. K.SHAEL

DIL KE TUKDE SAMETE JO AANCHAL ME
WO BHI TAAR-TAAR HO GAYA,EK AANKHIEN
HI SEHTI RAHI BHADI SHIDAAT SE USKI
BEWAFAI KYUNKI AAJ TALAK INME NAMI NA
AAYI...
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2008, 09:20:45 AM »
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SHUKRIYA DIYA DEAR...
BY. K.SHAEL

DIL KE TUKDE SAMETE JO AANCHAL ME
WO BHI TAAR-TAAR HO GAYA,EK AANKHIEN
HI SEHTI RAHI BHADI SHIDAAT SE USKI
BEWAFAI KYUNKI AAJ TALAK INME NAMI NA
AAYI...
khoob likha hai shally Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2008, 09:26:20 AM »
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SHUKRIYA BROTHER,
KUCH AAP LIKHTE TO MEHARBAANI HOTI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2008, 09:43:47 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on October 04, 2008, 09:53:33 AM
bujha bujha sa sama, har sun udaasi chai,
deewaron se takara ke har sada lout aai,
ab tak sirf suna tha, mahsoos aaj kiya,
kya hai akelapn aur kya hoti hai tanhaai,

masroofiyat pe meri, tere tanz, wo duhaai,
khaali hua jo ab mai, har baat yaad aai,
kitna mai namukammal, kitna adhura tujh bin,
mujhe aaina dikha gai, ye mukhtsar judai,




bekarar ji such a wonderful creation Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2008, 09:55:05 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sanjeev  Applause Applause

Very nice contributions Shael, Rajesh and Bhawna  icon_thumleft
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