tanhaai..........................A.B

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                          ajeeb   saa  hunar  mere  andar  aa gayaa...,
                          mujhe qatre  mein samandar nazar aa gayaa...,

                          kai  koshiso.n  ke  baad bhi nahin jeetaa...,
                          wahi  lekar  haraa huaa moqaddar aa gayaa...,

                          takleef  raaste  ki  bhhol  gayaa main to...,
                          paas   jaise   hi  meraa  ghar  aa  gayaa...,

                          hui roo-b-roo teergi se lipti tanhaai aur...,
                          aankho.n  mein bhhoola wo manzar aa gayaa...,

                          biwi  to biwi  aaj   saas  bhi aa dhhamki...,
                          dil mein chhubhne ek aur khanjar aa gayaa...,

                          mere  gulshan  ki  khush  haali  ke  liye...,
                          kahin  se sookhaa huaa ek shajar aa gayaa...,

                          duniya  fatah   karne  ki qaabliyat  nahin...,
                          per bechain her gali ek sikandar aa gayaa...,

                          

                          

                          

                          

                          

                          
                          
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2015, 05:07:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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waah waah bahut umdah dheron daad waahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kyaa kahne waah  rau qubool karen
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श्री आदिल बेचैन जी अति सुंदर ढेरो दाद कबूल करे  Applause Applause Applause
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वाह....वाह....

क्या बात है.....

बहुत ही खूब.....
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2015, 01:03:20 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Adil ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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Bahut khoob Adil Bechain sb , umdah ghazal k liye mubarakbad
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behad umda peshkash adil ji waaaaaaaaaahhh daaaaaaaaddddddd
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ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad


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