Tanhaayi.......!!!

by Talat on October 11, 2007, 07:09:23 PM
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Someone told me I am not writing these days.."likhna band kar diya kya" !

Just now written something...after a very long time.....

Ek shor, ek hujoom main lipti hui tanhaayi
Dhadakta dil, saansain madhdham aur tanhaayi

Baadalon main lipta, kuch bheega sa aasmaan
Khidki se jo dekha, nazar aayi hai tanhaayi

Har pal hai thehra sa, barhta magar ye waqt
Har lamhe ka hissa nazar aati hai tanhaayi

Moond ke palkain, baithe hain kamre main
Ghar ke har kone se sada deti hai tanhaayi

Khamoshiyon main hoti dar-o-deewar se baatain,
Milte hain aksar, main aur meri tanhaayi !!
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2007, 07:19:40 PM »
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Someone told me I am not writing these days.."likhna band kar diya kya" !

Just now written something...after a very long time.....

Ek shor, ek hujoom main lipti hui tanhaayi
Dhadakta dil, saansain madhdham aur tanhaayi

Baadalon main lipta, kuch bheega sa aasmaan
Khidki se jo dekha, nazar aayi hai tanhaayi

Har pal hai thehra sa, barhta magar ye waqt
Har lamhe ka hissa nazar aati hai tanhaayi

Moond ke palkain, baithe hain kamre main
Ghar ke har kone se sada deti hai tanhaayi

Khamoshiyon main hoti dar-o-deewar se baatain,
Milte hain aksar, main aur meri tanhaayi !!


BAHUT KHOOB TALAT...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI... =D>  =D>
TALAT...I WISH, AAP YOINDIA PE REGULAR RAHE....
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2007, 08:13:39 PM »
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Wah Talat.........u have not lost touch....thanks for being back....n thanks to the person who got you back....Winking

Tanhai ka bhi toh apna khud ka hi maza hai,
Dil mein dard gar ho toh mehfil bhi saza hai..

Kabhi khud se karen batein, dil yahi chahta hai,
Kissi azeez ka sang bhi toh phir bemaza hai..

Nahi chahat ki koi thapthapaye mere iss dil ko,
Khud ke saath jeene ki hi ab meri raza hai..
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2007, 08:43:43 PM »
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Good one Talat and Amit!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2007, 10:34:52 PM »
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Thank you Pooja ji...........bina kuch kahe chali gayi........lagta hai mehfil ki hi shaukeen hain aap...tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2007, 11:19:48 PM »
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Really nice one Talat. Very beautiful words and appears as if arranged to make decorum.

Amit, your contribution is also appreciable.
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2007, 06:42:01 AM »
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Thanks a lot ricky ji............Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2007, 10:26:03 AM »
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Superb Talat..!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2007, 10:33:48 AM »
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Tallu, Amit

Chaa gaye boss =D>

Very nice :D
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2007, 11:03:35 AM »
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Really a nice one...

Sab ke Hisse mein kahin na kahin likhi hui hai Tanhaayi...
Raat ke aandheron me aksar chaa jaati hai ye Tanhaayi...
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2007, 03:47:36 PM »
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Thanks a lot Raj bhai..........aur ye salma itni sudhar kaise gayi.........??
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2007, 05:48:47 PM »
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Superbb Talat sis..n nice reply Thy..
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«Reply #12 on: October 15, 2007, 11:58:22 AM »
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Beauty Talat ...
I loved it a lot ...
Keep it up ...


Unke saath jo dekha hame to ruth gayi tanhaai,
Naaraz ho gayi humse aur phir laut gayi tanhaai,
Nahi raha wo mukaam ab aur na rahi wo manzil,
Akele jo hue hum to bahut yaad aayi tanhaai ...
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2007, 09:48:42 AM »
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Someone told me I am not writing these days.."likhna band kar diya kya" !

Just now written something...after a very long time.....

Ek shor, ek hujoom main lipti hui tanhaayi
Dhadakta dil, saansain madhdham aur tanhaayi

Baadalon main lipta, kuch bheega sa aasmaan
Khidki se jo dekha, nazar aayi hai tanhaayi

Har pal hai thehra sa, barhta magar ye waqt
Har lamhe ka hissa nazar aati hai tanhaayi

Moond ke palkain, baithe hain kamre main
Ghar ke har kone se sada deti hai tanhaayi

Khamoshiyon main hoti dar-o-deewar se baatain,
Milte hain aksar, main aur meri tanhaayi !!


BAHUT KHOOB TALAT...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI... =D>  =D>
TALAT...I WISH, AAP YOINDIA PE REGULAR RAHE....


Bohot shukriya Khwaish.....Koshish humesha karti hoon aane ki..aage bhi rahegi Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: October 16, 2007, 09:49:51 AM »
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Wah Talat.........u have not lost touch....thanks for being back....n thanks to the person who got you back....Winking

Tanhai ka bhi toh apna khud ka hi maza hai,
Dil mein dard gar ho toh mehfil bhi saza hai..

Kabhi khud se karen batein, dil yahi chahta hai,
Kissi azeez ka sang bhi toh phir bemaza hai..

Nahi chahat ki koi thapthapaye mere iss dil ko,
Khud ke saath jeene ki hi ab meri raza hai..


Thanks Amit...and yeah Thanks to the person Winking

Bohot ho achcha likha hai Amit...Thanks again for writing Usual Smile
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