!!!..Tanhai..!!!

by nashwani on October 11, 2013, 07:01:27 PM
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Yun to sang sada vo parchhai rehti hai,,
Phir bhi chhupi dil me tanhai rehti hai..

Faisle hote kyu zindagi ke itne mushkil,,
Idhar hai kua.N to udhar khai rehti hai..

Dard kaise dikhta uss kore kapde kaa,,
Ki hui uspe jo, reshmi kadhai rehti hai..

Shaks koi ab pasand aaye bhi to kaise,,
Aaine-e-dil me shakal vo samai rehti hai..

Sipahi desh ke liye tha mar mita aur ab,,
Sooni wo chudiyo se saji kalai rehti hai..

Paigam-e-aman se bhi sulajhte hai mudde,,
Phir kyu chhidi jaanlewa ladai rehti hai..

Naa ab keh paaunga aur chand aashar,,
Waise hi aankh meri bhar aai rehti hai..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2013, 08:05:41 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2013, 08:26:42 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 07:01:27 PM
Yun to sang sada vo parchhai rehti hai,,
Phir bhi chhupi dil me tanhai rehti hai..

Faisle hote kyu zindagi ke itne mushkil,,
Idhar hai kua.N to udhar khai rehti hai..

Dard kaise dikhta uss kore kapde kaa,,
Ki hui uspe jo, reshmi kadhai rehti hai..

Shaks koi ab pasand aaye bhi to kaise,,
Aaine-e-dil me shakal vo samai rehti hai..

Sipahi desh ke liye tha mar mita aur ab,,
Sooni wo chudiyo se saji kalai rehti hai..

Paigam-e-aman se bhi sulajhte hai mudde,,
Phir kyu chhidi jaanlewa ladai rehti hai..

Naa ab keh paaunga aur chand aashar,,
Waise hi aankh meri bhar aai rehti hai..!!!
Bahut Umda Rachna Pesh Ki Hai Ashwani Jee.DheroN Daad Qabool KareiN.!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2013, 09:05:00 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2013, 09:08:08 PM »
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Waah waah nashwani ji khoob likh rahe ho
Umda bayani alfazon mein behtareen rawani.


Array kaa hua babuwa
Kaahe sasuri tanhai pe kalaam
Likhat ho. .
Kauno paresaniwa mein ho kya

Isak mein to aisa howat hai
Tensionwa mati lo.

Hum abhi jinda hoon.

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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2013, 10:18:29 PM »
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Waah ......  bahaut hi sensitive ghazal hai .... Daad Nashwani ji
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WaaH WaaH Ashwaniji kya khoob likha....
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Waaah waah waah.. bahut bahut khoooooooooob ashwani... badi achchi peshkash.. is khoob kalaam par dheron daaaaaaaad.. yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye

Dard kaise dikhta uss kore kapde kaa,,
Ki hui uspe jo, reshmi kadhai rehti hai..

Shaks koi ab pasand aaye bhi to kaise,,
Aaine-e-dil me shakal vo samai rehti hai..
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2013, 01:01:26 PM »
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Shaks koi ab pasand aaye bhi to kaise,,
Aaina-e-dil me shakal vo samai rehti hai..

Ye Sher Bahut Achcha Laga Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2013, 09:35:42 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2013, 10:07:30 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on October 11, 2013, 07:01:27 PM
Yun to sang sada vo parchhai rehti hai,,
Phir bhi chhupi dil me tanhai rehti hai..

Faisle hote kyu zindagi ke itne mushkil,,
Idhar hai kua.N to udhar khai rehti hai..

Dard kaise dikhta uss kore kapde kaa,,
Ki hui uspe jo, reshmi kadhai rehti hai..

Shaks koi ab pasand aaye bhi to kaise,,
Aaine-e-dil me shakal vo samai rehti hai..

Sipahi desh ke liye tha mar mita aur ab,,
Sooni wo chudiyo se saji kalai rehti hai..

Paigam-e-aman se bhi sulajhte hai mudde,,
Phir kyu chhidi jaanlewa ladai rehti hai..

Naa ab keh paaunga aur chand aashar,,
Waise hi aankh meri bhar aai rehti hai..!!!

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