tapish...........A.B

by adil bechain on March 13, 2011, 11:58:00 AM

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toot chuki door abb sambhalnaa kaisa,
   koi rishta nahin abb milnaa kaisa,

   hai talkiyon mein ghiree zindagi apni,
   aane do bahaar abb khilnaa kaisa,

   ho gayi choor khawahisein apni,
   phate hue libaas ka abb silnaa kaisa,

   rahe zinda jab tak na dekha kabhi mud kar,
   janaaze mein abb mere nikalnaa kaisa,

   hai wafa mein mohabbat ki tapish bechain..!
   bewafa ke pyaar mein abb jalnaa kaisa.


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2011, 12:26:19 PM »

bahut khoob bechain ji.

Quote from: adil bechain on March 13, 2011, 11:58:00 AM

toot chuki door abb sambhalnaa kaisa,
koi rishta nahin abb milnaa kaisa,

hai talkiyon mein ghiree zindagi apni,
aane do bahaar abb khilnaa kaisa,

ho gayi choor saari khawahisein apni,
phate hue libaas ka abb silnaa kaisa,

the zinda jab tak na dekha kabhi mud kar,
janaaze mein mere abb nikalnaa kaisa,

hai wafa mein mohabbat ki tapish bechain..!
bewafaai ki aag mein abb jalnaa kaisa.


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2011, 01:41:18 PM »

bht khubsurat dard bharipeshkash adil bechain ji.......
achcha laga padhkar....


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2011, 01:08:35 AM »

nice one Adil ji........


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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2011, 04:03:57 AM »

Wah aapke last line mujhe bahut pasand aayi Adil ji,bewafai ki aag mein ab jalna kaisa,very touching n great creation,hats off,keep writting icon_thumleft


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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2011, 04:25:13 AM »

bahut bahut khub adilji...

Applause


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2011, 08:46:15 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 13, 2011, 12:26:19 PM

bahut khoob bechain ji.

thank you suresh ji


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2011, 08:46:44 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on March 13, 2011, 01:41:18 PM

bht khubsurat dard bharipeshkash adil bechain ji.......
achcha laga padhkar....

thank you kasak ji


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2011, 08:48:28 AM »

Quote from: manjum on March 14, 2011, 04:25:13 AM

bahut bahut khub adilji...

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thank you manjum ji


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2011, 12:34:55 PM »

Quote from: ANAAM on March 14, 2011, 01:08:35 AM

nice one Adil ji........

thank you anaam ji


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2011, 05:52:39 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 14, 2011, 04:03:57 AM

Wah aapke last line mujhe bahut pasand aayi Adil ji,bewafai ki aag mein ab jalna kaisa,very touching n great creation,hats off,keep writting icon_thumleft

thank madhu ji


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Re: tapish...........A.B

«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2011, 10:38:54 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 14, 2011, 04:03:57 AM

Wah aapke last line mujhe bahut pasand aayi Adil ji,bewafai ki aag mein ab jalna kaisa,very touching n great creation,hats off,keep writting icon_thumleft

thank you