Taqdeer likhne wala, insaan khud hi hai...............

by SURESH SANGWAN on January 27, 2012, 04:38:21 PM
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Pareshaniyon ko bhulakar ye mehsoos kiya humne.
Jaise sirhaane pe phoolon ka takia laga liya humne.

Bewajah chintayen kabhi kam hi nahin hoti zindagi mein.
Dar hai aur kuchh nahin,anjaam ye aksar paya humne.

Unki adayen juda,andaaz alag jo kisi makaam par gaye.
Taqdeer likhne wala insaan khud hi hai ye jana humne.

Jo karte hain kaam badi mehnat se lagan se.
Unhen hi gehri neend mein sote dekha humne.
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2012, 04:41:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob Suresh Sir
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2012, 04:42:21 PM »
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thanks a lot mkv ji.
u r most welcome for comments.
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Quote from: mkv on January 27, 2012, 04:41:25 PM
Bahut khoob Suresh Sir
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2012, 02:55:38 AM »
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waah waah Suresh ji--
aaj kal aap bade pate ki baat likhne lage hain janaab Usual Smile

dher saari daad aur miubarakbaad aapke iss sakaratmak kalaam par--

aapka post parhne se pehle mai bht chidchidapan feel kr rha tha boss--lekin isko parhte hi mind halka ho gya
positive energy se bharpoor hai aapki post--

khus rahie janaab
muskurate rahie
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likhte rahie yun hi
god bless u
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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2012, 05:31:44 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kya baat hai sangwani sahiba ,,bahut khub ...very 2 inspirable lines ,,
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2012, 06:22:50 AM »
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waah waah suresh ji kaafee dino ke baad aaye par behtreen peshkash ke saath aaye mubaarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2012, 02:19:09 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 27, 2012, 04:38:21 PM
Pareshaniyon ko bhulakar ye mehsoos kiya humne.
Jaise sirhaane pe phoolon ka takia laga liya humne.

Bewajah chintayen kabhi kam hi nahin hoti zindagi mein.
Dar hai aur kuchh nahin,anjaam ye aksar paya humne.

Unki adayen juda,andaaz alag jo kisi makaam par gaye.
Taqdeer likhne wala insaan khud hi hai ye jana humne.

Jo karte hain kaam badi mehnat se lagan se.
Unhen hi gehri neend mein sote dekha humne.


Bahut khoob! Suresh ji. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2012, 03:48:03 PM »
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sarfiraji bahut 2 shukriya aapka
pasand farmane ka.aur aapka man halka ho gaya ise padhkar to humen aur achha laga.
aap hausla afzahi karte rahen.
aur apni post se humara dil bhi halka karte rahen,
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Quote from: sarfira on January 28, 2012, 02:55:38 AM
waah waah Suresh ji--
aaj kal aap bade pate ki baat likhne lage hain janaab Usual Smile

dher saari daad aur miubarakbaad aapke iss sakaratmak kalaam par--

aapka post parhne se pehle mai bht chidchidapan feel kr rha tha boss--lekin isko parhte hi mind halka ho gya
positive energy se bharpoor hai aapki post--

khus rahie janaab
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile
likhte rahie yun hi
god bless u
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2012, 03:49:40 PM »
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thanks u very much usha ji.
aapka bahut 2 shukriya waqt dene ke liye.
abaad rahen.
khush rahen.
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Bahut khoob! Suresh ji. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2012, 03:50:33 PM »
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bahut 2 shukriya sunil ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
pasand farmane ka.
Quote from: sunildehgawani on January 28, 2012, 05:31:44 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kya baat hai sangwani sahiba ,,bahut khub ...very 2 inspirable lines ,,
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2012, 03:51:44 PM »
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sksaini ji aapka bahut 2 shukriya hausla afzahi ke liye.
aur apne qeemati waqt dene ke liye.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 28, 2012, 06:22:50 AM
waah waah suresh ji kaafee dino ke baad aaye par behtreen peshkash ke saath aaye mubaarak ho
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2012, 05:12:25 PM »
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waah.....kya khoob baat kahi hai aapne...apni taqdeer insaan khud hi likhta hai..
bahut khoob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2012, 07:59:36 AM »
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bahut sara shukriya nikhar ji.
aap to pahunchi hui shayra hain.aapke comliments special hain.
Quote from: Nikhaar on January 29, 2012, 05:12:25 PM
waah.....kya khoob baat kahi hai aapne...apni taqdeer insaan khud hi likhta hai..
bahut khoob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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