////----Tera Tsvur----//// @Advo.RavinderRavi"Sagar"

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Muhabbat  to sabhi  karte hain.!
Hamne kar  lee to  Gunaha kiya.!!

Chaand  ka  intzaar  kai  karte.!
Maine  kiya to  kya  khata  hai.!!

Log khate sath jine ki kasamein.!
Hamne   khai  to   kya   hua.!!

Khawab dekhna muqaddar ki bat.!
Tasvur  unka kar gunaha kiya.!!


मुहब्बत तो सभी  करते हैं.!
हमने कर ली गुनहा किया.!!

चाँद का इंतज़ार  कई करते.!
मैने किया तो क्या खता है.!!

लोग खाते साथ जीने की कसमें.!
हमने  खाई  तो   क्या  हुआ.!!

खवाब देखना मुक़द्दर की बात.!
तस्वूर उनका  कर गुनहा किया.!!


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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2013, 01:45:36 AM »
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Muhabbat  to sabhi  karte hain.!
Hamne kar  lee to  Gunaha kiya.!!

Chaand  ka  intzaar  kai  karte.!
Maine  kiya to  kya  khata  hai.!!

Log khate sath jine ki kasamein.!
Hamne   khai  to   kya   hua.!!

Khawab dekhna muqaddar ki bat.!
Tasvur  unka kar gunaha kiya.!!

मुहब्बत तो सभी  करते हैं.!
हमने कर ली गुनहा किया.!!

चाँद का इंतज़ार  कई करते.!
मैने किया तो क्या खता है.!!

लोग खाते साथ जीने की कसमें.!
हमने  खाई  तो   क्या  हुआ.!!

खवाब देखना मुक़द्दर की बात.!
तस्वूर उनका  कर गुनहा किया.!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2013, 01:52:09 AM »
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Nicee one jii...
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2013, 01:55:06 AM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 01, 2013, 01:52:09 AM
Nicee one jii...
Pasand karne ke liya Shuqriya.
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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2013, 02:13:57 AM »
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खूब कहा रविंदर जी......
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2013, 02:53:16 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 01, 2013, 02:13:57 AM
खूब कहा रविंदर जी......
Thanks.
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2013, 03:59:11 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on November 01, 2013, 01:45:36 AM
Muhabbat  to sabhi  karte hain.!
Hamne kar  lee to  Gunaha kiya.!!

Chaand  ka  intzaar  kai  karte.!
Maine  kiya to  kya  khata  hai.!!

Log khate sath jine ki kasamein.!
Hamne   khai  to   kya   hua.!!

Khawab dekhna muqaddar ki bat.!
Tasvur  unka kar gunaha kiya.!!

मुहब्बत तो सभी  करते हैं.!
हमने कर ली गुनहा किया.!!

चाँद का इंतज़ार  कई करते.!
मैने किया तो क्या खता है.!!

लोग खाते साथ जीने की कसमें.!
हमने  खाई  तो   क्या  हुआ.!!

खवाब देखना मुक़द्दर की बात.!
तस्वूर उनका  कर गुनहा किया.!!

acha sawaal hai ji koi gunaah nahin kiya tum ne icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2013, 08:29:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2013, 10:29:57 AM »
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achcha likhe ho ravi jee... dheron daaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2013, 02:58:57 PM »
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very nice ravi ji
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2013, 03:07:05 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Karte jaiye karte jaiye..
Inn gunaho.N me aage badhte jaiye..

Kya kehne..
Bahut bahut khoob ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2013, 03:48:31 PM »
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waaahhhhh........ kyaa khoob sher kahe hain aapne.. bahot sunder

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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2013, 05:25:43 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on November 01, 2013, 01:44:15 AM
Muhabbat  to sabhi  karte hain.!
Hamne kar  lee to  Gunaha kiya.!!

Chaand  ka  intzaar  kai  karte.!
Maine  kiya to  kya  khata  hai.!!

Log khate sath jine ki kasamein.!
Hamne   khai  to   kya   hua.!!

Khawab dekhna muqaddar ki bat.!
Tasvur  unka kar gunaha kiya.!!


मुहब्बत तो सभी  करते हैं.!
हमने कर ली गुनहा किया.!!

चाँद का इंतज़ार  कई करते.!
मैने किया तो क्या खता है.!!

लोग खाते साथ जीने की कसमें.!
हमने  खाई  तो   क्या  हुआ.!!

खवाब देखना मुक़द्दर की बात.!
तस्वूर उनका  कर गुनहा किया.!!


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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2014, 03:27:21 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on November 01, 2013, 03:59:11 AM

acha sawaal hai ji koi gunaah nahin kiya tum ne icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Thanks Shebaji.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 01, 2013, 08:29:34 AM
Applause Applause
Thankyou !
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