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Tere ye gulaabi mulaayam gaal
Chalaati hain mere dil par bhaal
Chuumne ko inhe aaj dil karta hai
Par teri naraazgi se ye dil darta hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2010, 01:46:47 AM » |
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meri nazron se yun darr
aa kareeb aor mujhe jakad
chuum le gaalon ko
sahla de baalon ko
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2010, 03:51:40 AM » |
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mere rukhsar pe chamakte ye tere pyaar ki laali
ye har lamha tumhe apne paas bulati hain
chhu le inhe tu zara apne hathon se oo sanam
k ye tere pyaar se aur bhi nikhar jana chahti hain |
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2010, 09:18:40 AM » |
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meri nazron se yun darr
aa kareeb aor mujhe jakad
chuum le gaalon ko
sahla de baalon ko
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Shukriya kb Ji Maar nahi khana mujhe |
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2010, 09:20:51 AM » |
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mere rukhsar pe chamakte ye tere pyaar ki laali
ye har lamha tumhe apne paas bulati hain
chhu le inhe tu zara apne hathon se oo sanam
k ye tere pyaar se aur bhi nikhar jana chahti hain Wonderful response ANU Hum ab aage kuch nahi kahenge |
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2010, 11:45:35 AM » |
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maar khaya nhi to kya mohabbat ki
ye to dastoor e mohabbat hai
isse nibhaya nhi to kya
mohabbat ki!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2010, 12:46:49 PM » |
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Tere ye gulaabi mulaayam gaal
Chalaati hain mere dil par bhaal
Chuumne ko inhe aaj dil karta hai
Par teri naraazgi se ye dil darta hai
Bahut khoob rajesh ji.. |
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2010, 07:27:09 PM » |
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good ji good Rajesh ji aur kill bi ji aap ka bhi jawaab nahin bhai bahut badhiya... ! Intezar ! Tere ye gulaabi mulaayam gaal
Chalaati hain mere dil par bhaal
Chuumne ko inhe aaj dil karta hai
Par teri naraazgi se ye dil darta hai
meri nazron se yun darr
aa kareeb aor mujhe jakad
chuum le gaalon ko
sahla de baalon ko
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2010, 07:41:36 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne rajesh ji Chum lun honto se aapke ruksaaro ko Jin par sharam ki ajab si laali chayi hai Darta hun to bas aapki khooshboo se jo har pal Aapko chumne ke baad Meri rooh ko mahkaayegi Muje phir se aapke karib aane ko uksaayegi ....!! Tere ye gulaabi mulaayam gaal
Chalaati hain mere dil par bhaal
Chuumne ko inhe aaj dil karta hai
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2010, 09:18:38 PM » |
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maar khaya nhi to kya mohabbat ki
ye to dastoor e mohabbat hai
isse nibhaya nhi to kya
mohabbat ki!!!!
Maar to kabhi khaya nahi Toot kar mohabbat ki sahi Haar jaroor pai hai humne Kaal aayaa jab unhe lene |
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«Reply #10 on: December 07, 2010, 09:19:17 PM » |
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Bahut khoob rajesh ji..
Shukriya geet ji |
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«Reply #11 on: December 07, 2010, 09:20:16 PM » |
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good ji good Rajesh ji aur kill bi ji aap ka bhi jawaab nahin bhai bahut badhiya... !
Intezar !
Shukriya Intezar Ji |
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«Reply #12 on: December 07, 2010, 09:22:47 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne rajesh ji
Chum lun honto se aapke ruksaaro ko
Jin par sharam ki ajab si laali chayi hai
Darta hun to bas aapki khooshboo se
jo har pal Aapko chumne ke baad Meri rooh ko mahkaayegi
Muje phir se aapke karib aane ko uksaayegi ....!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2010, 04:35:47 AM » |
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RH ji aapne sad kar dia at last.
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aap khusnaseeb ho ke
aapko kuch pal ko hi sahi apne sachhe pyar ka saath naseeb hua..
warna
aise bhi badnaseeb hai yaha jinka pyar aankho ke samne hote hue bhi ek pal ke saath ko ta-umra taraste hain..
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2010, 07:35:40 AM » |
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RH ji aapne sad kar dia at last.
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aap khusnaseeb ho ke
aapko kuch pal ko hi sahi apne sachhe pyar ka saath naseeb hua..
warna
aise bhi badnaseeb hai yaha jinka pyar aankho ke samne hote hue bhi ek pal ke saath ko ta-umra taraste hain..
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