Tere hi khyalo mai

by sarthika on March 15, 2008, 12:41:00 AM
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baith akele tere ahsaas ko tarsu
tanhai mai tere un zajbaato ko tarsu
sote mai jab khayal tera ayye
ek khalipan main phir bhatku

kabhi hoti thi subah teri mere chahre se
ajj apne us aaine ko main tarsu
dil dhadkna hi jaise bhool gaya
tere hi khyalo mai her dum khud ko jhakru

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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2008, 02:11:50 AM »
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baith akele tere ahsaas ko tarsu
tanhai mai tere un zajbaato ko tarsu
sote mai jab khayal tera ayye
ek khalipan main phir bhatku

kabhi hoti thi subah teri mere chahre se
ajj apne us aaine ko main tarsu
dil dhadkna hi jaise bhool gaya
tere hi khyalo mai her dum khud ko jhakru



Bahut khoob sarthika sis...
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2008, 08:32:51 PM »
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dil ke hai armaan, khoon ke ansoo rulayege
ek kami se, sari khushio ko dhool mai milayege
kahne ko kaya kuch nahi ho jaata is jahan main
bas ek yahi jagah hai, jahan kisi aor ko na la payege!!


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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2008, 08:44:49 PM »
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Bohot khoob Sarthika and Pooja
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2008, 04:58:09 AM »
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bahoot achhe sarthika our pooja ji......

Bhoolne waale se keh de koi zara
Is tarah teri yaad aane ko tarsooN

Jab mmere dil ki duniyaN basti hi nahiN
Phir tera khyaloN maiN aane ko tarsooN


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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2008, 07:58:58 AM »
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baith akele tere ahsaas ko tarsu
tanhai mai tere un zajbaato ko tarsu
sote mai jab khayal tera ayye
ek khalipan main phir bhatku

kabhi hoti thi subah teri mere chahre se
ajj apne us aaine ko main tarsu
dil dhadkna hi jaise bhool gaya
tere hi khyalo mai her dum khud ko jhakru



nice emotions sarthika......
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2008, 06:44:38 PM »
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bahoot achhe sarthika our pooja ji......

Bhoolne waale se keh de koi zara
Is tarah teri yaad aane ko tarsooN

Jab mmere dil ki duniyaN basti hi nahiN
Phir tera khyaloN maiN aane ko tarsooN


Harash

bahoot khoob Harsh ji!! ek request hai ki agar app end mai capital letter ki jagah small letter hi use kare to apki kavita padte waqat lay nahi tootegi!!

jaise apne yah likha hai: duniyaN basti hi nahiN
agar app aise likh sake: duniyan basti hi nahin

jab bhi bich mai capital letter atta hai ek full stop sa lagta hai aor apki kavita ki lay toot se jaati hai!! yah sirf mera vichar hai!! agge jaise app thik samjhe!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2008, 01:34:52 AM »
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thanks Roja, harsh, Celmira and Bekarar jee!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2008, 01:37:10 AM »
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dil ke hai armaan, khoon ke ansoo rulayege
ek kami se, sari khushio ko dhool mai milayege
kahne ko kaya kuch nahi ho jaata is jahan main
bas ek yahi jagah hai, jahan kisi aor ko na la payege!!




Bhatkta hai dil, kabhi yaha to kabhi wahan
kabhi pyar bikhre, kabhi nafrat se dekhun jahan
kyun kisi aor ke pyar se man mera jal uthta hai
tadpate is dil ko main, le jaau kahan
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2008, 01:57:37 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Sarthika aur Pooja di Harash Mahajan jee aap sab ne be
bahut accha reply diya hai..
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sarthika
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2008, 02:02:54 AM »
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Thanks Sonia
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