*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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<>*Teri har shaam ka*<>
Kya kabhi yun hua hai
Akeli si shaam me
Mehki fizaaon k daaman me
Baithe ho tum
Yunhi gumsum
Dubte suraj ki laalima k sath
Rangeen ho gai hain
Yaadein tumhari
Timtimate chiragon k aas paas
Machal uthti hai gai baatein
Sukhe honth tumhare
Bheeg jate hain anayaas
Dil me umangon ki lehrein
Shor machine lagti hain
Hath anayaas hi
Apni purani dairy k
Panne palatne lagte hain
Aankhen na jane kise
Khojne lagti hai
Nahin milta wo warq
Jispe likha tha naam hamara
Dil se nikalti hai ek aahhh
Aur bebasi me ek bund
Aankhon se chhalak uthti hai
Janti hun main
Yehi manzar hota hoga
Meri yaad me mere sanam
Teri har shaam ka........!!!!!!
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 06:33:27 PM » |
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aahhaaaaaaaaa........aaj maza aaya parwaz ji..aapne dil khol k tareef ki....
thnx thnx ji bht sara thnx...ab lagta hai k hum bhi kuch kuch achcha likhne lage hain ..thnx ji aapne pasand ki ise......
God bless u ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 06:46:03 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 06:51:36 PM » |
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correction done parwaz ji........isi tarah har bar correct karke sikhate rahiyega......thnx ji ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 08:06:52 PM » |
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vry touchy .......
very very gud
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 10:08:10 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 10:12:12 AM » |
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Good poem Kasak ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2010, 11:42:42 AM » |
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Aahaaa,, Kya baat hai Anamika kya mast likha hai... Mann kiya padate hi chale jao .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsooorat ehsaas !!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2010, 11:47:41 AM » |
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Wow.. Kapil ji.. waah kya baat hai... Bahoot hi meeti ki khushi mili pad ke... jaise yea sunder sa sach dil ke bahoot kareeb hai... Lajawaab !!!! |
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2010, 09:25:24 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!! Wow.. Kapil ji.. waah kya baat hai... Bahoot hi meeti ki khushi mili pad ke... jaise yea sunder sa sach dil ke bahoot kareeb hai... Lajawaab !!!!
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on eTI community..
