Teri Khataa hai kya...................................NIkhaar

by Nikhaar on May 16, 2012, 06:03:03 AM
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Mohabbat kitni khoobsurat hai, ye unse pucchiye jinhone Mohabbat mein zannat ko pa liya aur kitni dardnaak hai Mohabbat, unse pucchiye jinhone Mohabbat mein apna sab gawaan diya yha tak ki Mohabbat ko bhi.....Dard , Judaayi , nafrat ,bewaafayi, dokha...na jaane kitne naam jude hai iss Mohabbat se....Na jaane kitno ne thokar khaayi hai Mohabbat mein aur jeene ki aas chor di...ye poem mai inme se hi ek dost ko dedicate karti hu...ummid hai aap sab saath dege Mohaabat ki raahon mein tutte huye inn dilon ko samjhaane ka ...kya pta aapke chand alfaaz kab kisi ki zindagi mein ek nayi roshni le aaye Usual Smile


Wo bhool gaya tujhe, de gaya dagaa,isme teri bol, khata hai kya
Waqt hai kabhi bhala toh kabhi bura,isme teri bol,khata hai kya

Tha wo baadal ghana, barasna hi tha,Chahta bhi toh, tu rok paata nahi
Dekh sar utha k aasmaa_n ko zra,wha par tujhe ab dikhta hai kya

Har raat tanhayi mein jo tum Ghamon ko sharaab pilaate ho
Roti hai mohabbat dar par tumhare,siskiya nahi sunte tum kya

Mohabbat hai rab ki inaayat, ye alfaaz tum hi toh kehte the
Nilaam kar gaya wo waffa teri, mohabbat ki isme bol,khata hai kya

Kyu hai khaufzada tu rishton se yu,kabhi lagte wo apne,kabhi begaane hai
Har pal mein ek naya mod leti zindagi,isme na jeene ki vajah hai kya

Kar dua iss pal k gujarane ki, teri khushi se badi uske liye sazaa hai kya
Uski galti ki khud ko de rha tu sazaa, Rab ki isme bol,razaa hai kya
Wo bhool gaya tujhe, de gaya dagaa,isme teri bol, khata hai kya
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2012, 06:32:49 AM »
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bohut nayaab pesh kash nikhar ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2012, 06:45:26 AM »
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mohabbt ki baat hi alg hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2012, 07:44:07 AM »
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Outstanding peshkash..
bahut khoob Pooja jee
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2012, 08:56:00 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Nikhar Jee
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AASHIQON KE DARD KI NA DAWAA KIJIYE.
   MIL JAYE UNHEN MEHBOOB UNKA BAS YAHI DUA KIJIYE.
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2012, 09:31:52 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2012, 01:15:50 PM »
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Mohabbat kitni khoobsurat hai, ye unse pucchiye jinhone Mohabbat mein zannat ko pa liya aur kitni dardnaak hai Mohabbat, unse pucchiye jinhone Mohabbat mein apna sab gawaan diya yha tak ki Mohabbat ko bhi.....Dard , Judaayi , nafrat ,bewaafayi, dokha...na jaane kitne naam jude hai iss Mohabbat se....Na jaane kitno ne thokar khaayi hai Mohabbat mein aur jeene ki aas chor di...ye poem mai inme se hi ek dost ko dedicate karti hu...ummid hai aap sab saath dege Mohaabat ki raahon mein tutte huye inn dilon ko samjhaane ka ...kya pta aapke chand alfaaz kab kisi ki zindagi mein ek nayi roshni le aaye Usual Smile


Wo bhool gaya tujhe, de gaya dagaa,isme teri bol, khata hai kya
Waqt hai kabhi bhala toh kabhi bura,isme teri bol,khata hai kya

Tha wo baadal ghana, barasna hi tha,Chahta bhi toh, tu rok paata nahi
Dekh sar utha k aasmaa_n ko zra,wha par tujhe ab dikhta hai kya

Har raat tanhayi mein jo tum Ghamon ko sharaab pilaate ho
Roti hai mohabbat dar par tumhare,siskiya nahi sunte tum kya

Mohabbat hai rab ki inaayat, ye alfaaz tum hi toh kehte the
Nilaam kar gaya wo waffa teri, mohabbat ki isme bol,khata hai kya

Kyu hai khaufzada tu rishton se yu,kabhi lagte wo apne,kabhi begaane hai
Har pal mein ek naya mod leti zindagi,isme na jeene ki vajah hai kya

Kar dua iss pal k gujarane ki, teri khushi se badi uske liye sazaa hai kya
Uski galti ki khud ko de rha tu sazaa, Rab ki isme bol,razaa hai kya
Wo bhool gaya tujhe, de gaya dagaa,isme teri bol, khata hai kya



Waaah bahut bahut Khooob Dear..

Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Ko Lafzo Mein sajaaaya Aapne..

Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2012, 05:04:27 AM »
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I don't have words for appreciation..
very promising..Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2012, 05:22:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2012, 05:59:55 AM »
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bohut nayaab pesh kash nikhar ji
shukriya saahil
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2012, 06:05:09 AM »
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mohabbt ki baat hi alg hai

lagta hai kaafi kareeb se mehsoos kiya hai aapne mohabbat ko...
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2012, 06:06:29 AM »
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Outstanding peshkash..
bahut khoob Pooja jee
shukriya mkv jeee...
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2012, 06:13:03 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Nikhar Jee
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AASHIQON KE DARD KI NA DAWAA KIJIYE.
   MIL JAYE UNHEN MEHBOOB UNKA BAS YAHI DUA KIJIYE.

bahut khoob kha  aapne...
 
Gar Mehboob k hi haatho mein ho khanzar toh kya kijiye....
Uss khanzar ki chot ki kya??? na dawaa kijiye....
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2012, 11:46:12 AM »
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bahut khoob...ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2012, 08:32:00 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah ji waah..kya mohabbat bhari  liness... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Ro ro ke arzan guzaarda da ae dil
Haye mera dil, haye mera dil
Jag diyan nazran toh chori kitey mil
Haye mera dil, haye mera dil""

lines from a song..
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