Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
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Ajj pata nahi kaya ho raha hai, kisi aor mood se likhna shuru karati hu aor kuch aor he likha ja raha hai....

yah kavita main Judai main likh rahi thi is thread main : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/teri-tasveer-t25274.165.html

magar jab kavita khatam ki to Funny aor Zindagi ke kareeb jayada lagi Judai ki nahi ... So iAdmin ji ka thanks jinhone Misc Shyri ka section de diya....

so ab yaha post karne ja rahi hu.. jis ko jis najar se pasand ayye ussi roop main jawab likh de!!!


Teri tasveer ajj anssuo se sajai hai
Mui yah rajaai bhi koi rajaai hai

Thund ne itani cheekh pukar muchaai hai
Heater ko deta nahi kuch bhi sujhaai hai

Teri amma ne ajj phir ki mujhse ladaai hai
 Sun rahe ho, ya kaano main rui phir dabai hai

Bittu ne ajj phir se chinttu ki, ki pitaai hai
Baap ki tarah bacho ne bhi zindagi meri khai hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2009, 05:21:20 PM »
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Pooja Ji
Aapki ye ghazal humko bahut bhayee hai
Congratulation
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2009, 05:28:43 PM »
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Shukaria Sarvesh ji... bahoot he ajeeb-o-greeb type ki likhi gai hai yah lines.... magar padni khud ko bhi achi lagi... so Misc ka sahara lete hue Post kar di hai... dekhein kitne Yo-members ko pasand atti hai yah lines!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2009, 07:00:58 PM »
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great pooja jee....
waah....
kaha se kaha mood diya hai aapne...
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2009, 07:05:07 PM »
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POOJA JEE
THODA TRY KIYA HAI....


TUMNE AAJ TAK YE BAAT Q CHUPAAI HAI,
KYA ITNE DINO K BAAD MERI YAAD AAYI HAI.

POOCH LEE ANSU GAR AANKH TERI BHAR AAYI HAI,
AISA KYA HO GAYA JO TU INTNI GHABRAAI HAI..


.......... hello
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2009, 07:08:19 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Pooja jee... Applause
Bahaut khoob Pandit jee..  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2009, 07:40:15 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 22, 2009, 07:00:58 PM
great pooja jee....
waah....
kaha se kaha mood diya hai aapne...

maine nahi kiya kuch, yah kalam man marji karne per utari hui hai ajj...
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2009, 07:45:19 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 22, 2009, 07:05:07 PM
POOJA JEE
THODA TRY KIYA HAI....


TUMNE AAJ TAK YE BAAT Q CHUPAAI HAI,
KYA ITNE DINO K BAAD MERI YAAD AAYI HAI.

POOCH LEE ANSU GAR AANKH TERI BHAR AAYI HAI,
AISA KYA HO GAYA JO TU INTNI GHABRAAI HAI..


.......... hello

Kaya chupaye aor kaya bataye tumhe
ek ek baat kaya shabdo mai sunaye tumhe

Dino ki baat nahi, yaad to her pal staati hai
Roj-mrra ki zindagi main, kaise yah bataye tumhe

her baat bol kar tumhe, shant ho jaata hai man
tere bin, yah khalipan, kaise samjhaaye tumhe!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2009, 08:17:14 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
Ajj pata nahi kaya ho raha hai, kisi aor mood se likhna shuru karati hu aor kuch aor he likha ja raha hai....

yah kavita main Judai main likh rahi thi is thread main : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/teri-tasveer-t25274.165.html

magar jab kavita khatam ki to Funny aor Zindagi ke kareeb jayada lagi Judai ki nahi ... So iAdmin ji ka thanks jinhone Misc Shyri ka section de diya....

so ab yaha post karne ja rahi hu.. jis ko jis najar se pasand ayye ussi roop main jawab likh de!!!


Teri tasveer ajj anssuo se sajai hai
Mui yah rajaai bhi koi rajaai hai

Thund ne itani cheekh pukar muchaai hai
Heater ko deta nahi kuch bhi sujhaai hai

Teri amma ne ajj phir ki mujhse ladaai hai
 Sun rahe ho, ya kaano main rui phir dabai hai

Bittu ne ajj phir se chinttu ki, ki pitaai hai
Baap ki tarah bacho ne bhi zindagi meri khai hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…


Awww...its so cute and sweet actualy !! Loved it Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2009, 08:28:32 PM »
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Thanks Celmira, alag mood mai start ki thi aor shararti sa mood ban gaya.. uske baad judai section ko najar main rakhte hue end kiya...

Magar waha post karne ka man nahi hua... such main ab phir se parri hai... achi lagi tongue3 (Miya mithu)
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2009, 09:32:06 PM »
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kaya baat hai pooja ji , kaya likhti hain aap. kamaal ka likhti hai app.waha!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2009, 10:33:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 07:45:19 PM
Kaya chupaye aor kaya bataye tumhe
ek ek baat kaya shabdo mai sunaye tumhe

Dino ki baat nahi, yaad to her pal staati hai
Roj-mrra ki zindagi main, kaise yah bataye tumhe

her baat bol kar tumhe, shant ho jaata hai man
tere bin, yah khalipan, kaise samjhaaye tumhe!!!




GUD REPLY POOJA JEE......
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2009, 02:11:30 AM »
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Quote from: forgot on April 22, 2009, 09:32:06 PM
kaya baat hai pooja ji , kaya likhti hain aap. kamaal ka likhti hai app.waha!!!



Shukaria Forgot ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 02:12:22 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 22, 2009, 10:33:23 PM


GUD REPLY POOJA JEE......

Thanks Pandit ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2009, 02:47:14 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 23, 2009, 02:12:22 AM
Thanks Pandit ji

u welcome pooja jee..
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