Teri Tasveer

by Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2009, 03:06:17 AM »
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Wow Bahut Khoob Pooja di .. Dono Shayri Simply Good Thumbs UP
Nice Lines Pandit Ji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: April 23, 2009, 03:11:50 AM »
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Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2009, 03:45:17 AM »
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THANKS ROJA....
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«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2009, 05:18:26 AM »
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  ITNEY KAM LINES MAIN EK MARRIED WOMAN KAA ACHCHA PICTURE KHICHAA HAI...
   
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«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2009, 06:48:28 AM »
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kishi ne kuchh arshad farmane ki
pooja ji
Je kadi koi yaad naina vich aawe tan yaad kari,
Kade khwaban de phull murjhawan tan yaad kari,
Je khushi howe tan beshak sanu bhull javi,
Par koi dukh kade staawe tan yaad kari.......
Zafa hor katal da jabab poochhenga main aikdin
Khawanbo de wich agar kadi lagugi adalat meri

 
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«Reply #20 on: April 23, 2009, 08:03:44 AM »
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Wah! Kya baat hai Pooja Ji

Sab or ye kaisi halchal chhai hai
Kya kamaal ki ye aap ki likhai hai
Ye lekhan mujhe bhi pasand aai hai
Aise mein humne bhi prerna paai hai
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«Reply #21 on: April 23, 2009, 12:53:18 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
Ajj pata nahi kaya ho raha hai, kisi aor mood se likhna shuru karati hu aor kuch aor he likha ja raha hai....

yah kavita main Judai main likh rahi thi is thread main : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/teri-tasveer-t25274.165.html

magar jab kavita khatam ki to Funny aor Zindagi ke kareeb jayada lagi Judai ki nahi ... So iAdmin ji ka thanks jinhone Misc Shyri ka section de diya....

so ab yaha post karne ja rahi hu.. jis ko jis najar se pasand ayye ussi roop main jawab likh de!!!


Teri tasveer ajj anssuo se sajai hai
Mui yah rajaai bhi koi rajaai hai

Thund ne itani cheekh pukar muchaai hai
Heater ko deta nahi kuch bhi sujhaai hai

Teri amma ne ajj phir ki mujhse ladaai hai
 Sun rahe ho, ya kaano main rui phir dabai hai

Bittu ne ajj phir se chinttu ki, ki pitaai hai
Baap ki tarah bacho ne bhi zindagi meri khai hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…


Nice one really Pooja ji.

Kuch meri tarf se aapke liye


Raat ki thand mai rajaai, Aag tapte muh main dudh malaai
roote bacche ko jaise lage, Maa ke seene ki garmaai
Karne chale the hum bhi neki, par mili ha humme bhi buraai
Na mila payar na mila yaarhumme, mili to bas tanhaai....
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«Reply #22 on: April 24, 2009, 12:53:55 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
Ajj pata nahi kaya ho raha hai, kisi aor mood se likhna shuru karati hu aor kuch aor he likha ja raha hai....

yah kavita main Judai main likh rahi thi is thread main : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/teri-tasveer-t25274.165.html

magar jab kavita khatam ki to Funny aor Zindagi ke kareeb jayada lagi Judai ki nahi ... So iAdmin ji ka thanks jinhone Misc Shyri ka section de diya....

so ab yaha post karne ja rahi hu.. jis ko jis najar se pasand ayye ussi roop main jawab likh de!!!


Teri tasveer ajj anssuo se sajai hai
Mui yah rajaai bhi koi rajaai hai

Thund ne itani cheekh pukar muchaai hai
Heater ko deta nahi kuch bhi sujhaai hai

Teri amma ne ajj phir ki mujhse ladaai hai
 Sun rahe ho, ya kaano main rui phir dabai hai

Bittu ne ajj phir se chinttu ki, ki pitaai hai
Baap ki tarah bacho ne bhi zindagi meri khai hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…

mere khayal se ise funny me jaana chahiye...vyangy bhi to funy hi hai....pooja ji.....baharhaal...aapke mood ki khoobsoorati ko dekhte hue yahan bhi thik hai.....pal me masha pal me tola..wah ji wah.........

ab mai samjha plate me pakoudiyan kyun sajai hain,
mausam-e-bahar hai, kaali ghata bhi chai hai,
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«Reply #23 on: August 11, 2009, 09:05:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 24, 2009, 12:53:55 PM
mere khayal se ise funny me jaana chahiye...vyangy bhi to funy hi hai....pooja ji.....baharhaal...aapke mood ki khoobsoorati ko dekhte hue yahan bhi thik hai.....pal me masha pal me tola..wah ji wah.........

ab mai samjha plate me pakoudiyan kyun sajai hain,
mausam-e-bahar hai, kaali ghata bhi chai hai,

Bekarar ji yah jo lines hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…

yah apne app main bahoot gahra arth liye hue hai... inhe kisi haal main funny nahi kaha ja sakta... dil ke dard ko behad sadharan shabdo main.. humare roj marra ke jeene ke tarike se likhne ki koshish ki thi..

jab bhi humare gharo main aurat ko gussa atta hai, ya kisi baat se dil dukhi ho raha hota hai to mostly... ghar ki safai, bacho ki shikayat ya phir koi chees ghar main sahi na ho.. usko budbudate hue main apna dukh/gussa nikal leti hai...

bas ussi manjar ko samne rakhte hue... ek aourat jo apne Priytam ko miss kar rahi hai usko kah rahi hai...

ek sharmila andaaz, sar-e-amm dil ki baat na kahte hue... alag dhang se kahna....
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«Reply #24 on: August 14, 2009, 07:28:03 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 11, 2009, 09:05:14 PM
Bekarar ji yah jo lines hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…

yah apne app main bahoot gahra arth liye hue hai... inhe kisi haal main funny nahi kaha ja sakta... dil ke dard ko behad sadharan shabdo main.. humare roj marra ke jeene ke tarike se likhne ki koshish ki thi..

jab bhi humare gharo main aurat ko gussa atta hai, ya kisi baat se dil dukhi ho raha hota hai to mostly... ghar ki safai, bacho ki shikayat ya phir koi chees ghar main sahi na ho.. usko budbudate hue main apna dukh/gussa nikal leti hai...

bas ussi manjar ko samne rakhte hue... ek aourat jo apne Priytam ko miss kar rahi hai usko kah rahi hai...

ek sharmila andaaz, sar-e-amm dil ki baat na kahte hue... alag dhang se kahna....

pooja ji,
waqi pahle is kavita ko maine is angle se nahi padha tha....aap yaqinan bilkul sahi farma rahi hai....
kabil-e-taarif kaam hain aapka
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«Reply #25 on: October 01, 2009, 01:48:24 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2009, 05:10:33 PM
Ajj pata nahi kaya ho raha hai, kisi aor mood se likhna shuru karati hu aor kuch aor he likha ja raha hai....

yah kavita main Judai main likh rahi thi is thread main : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/teri-tasveer-t25274.165.html

magar jab kavita khatam ki to Funny aor Zindagi ke kareeb jayada lagi Judai ki nahi ... So iAdmin ji ka thanks jinhone Misc Shyri ka section de diya....

so ab yaha post karne ja rahi hu.. jis ko jis najar se pasand ayye ussi roop main jawab likh de!!!


Teri tasveer ajj anssuo se sajai hai
Mui yah rajaai bhi koi rajaai hai

Thund ne itani cheekh pukar muchaai hai
Heater ko deta nahi kuch bhi sujhaai hai

Teri amma ne ajj phir ki mujhse ladaai hai
 Sun rahe ho, ya kaano main rui phir dabai hai

Bittu ne ajj phir se chinttu ki, ki pitaai hai
Baap ki tarah bacho ne bhi zindagi meri khai hai

Per tumhaare bin, yaad tumhari bahoot aai hai
Teri tasveer ajj phir anssuo se sajaai hai…




 Pooja ji behad khoobsurat aur gehri kavita likhi hai...aapki kavita ka jawab aapke hi andaz mein likhne ki gustakhi.....


meri amma se tum tang ho
kaise mujhe yeh baat sunai hai

bittu chintu jaan khaate hain
iss par meri sha'maat kayun ayi hai

heater ,rajai aur thund ka lafda
in sab ke liye bhi mujhse hi ladai hai

kitna chaha khud ko rok lu ,magar
pard ke teri chitti ankh bhar aayi hai

jee raha hoon tujh bin main bhi akela
batao kab meri halat tumhse chup payi hai

ek-ek pal tujh bin itna adhura bane
jaise 100-100 janmo ki lambhi judai hai
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«Reply #26 on: October 02, 2009, 04:37:24 PM »
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Quote from: JEET* on October 01, 2009, 01:48:24 PM


  Pooja ji behad khoobsurat aur gehri kavita likhi hai...aapki kavita ka jawab aapke hi andaz mein likhne ki gustakhi.....


meri amma se tum tang ho
kaise mujhe yeh baat sunai hai

bittu chintu jaan khaate hain
iss par meri sha'maat kayun ayi hai

heater ,rajai aur thund ka lafda
in sab ke liye bhi mujhse hi ladai hai

kitna chaha khud ko rok lu ,magar
pard ke teri chitti ankh bhar aayi hai

jee raha hoon tujh bin main bhi akela
batao kab meri halat tumhse chup payi hai

ek-ek pal tujh bin itna adhura bane
jaise 100-100 janmo ki lambhi judai hai




wow kaya baat hai.. kaya jawab diya hai Nanmunh ji.. bahoot bahoot khoob!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: October 04, 2009, 10:44:53 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji .... lekin aap ka jawab nahi aaya abhi tak
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«Reply #28 on: October 04, 2009, 11:20:23 AM »
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ye ghazal to dil ko chu gayi Aksh
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