-----/// Thodi der lagegi ///----- Hriday

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mausam ke badalne  mein  thodi der lagegi
phoolon  ke   khilne  mein  thodi der lagegi

geeli   hain  yeh   lakdiyaan   kai mahino se
abhi  in  ko  jalne   mein   thodi   der lagegi

honth sukhe hain  baarish  ke naa hone se
abhi to muskuraane  mein thodi  der lagegi

aansoo  soch  rahe  hain  ki nikle yaa nahin
unhe  nikalne  mein  abhi   thodi der lagegi

abhi tak to  unhe  samajh hi rahe the hum
khud  ko  samjhaane mein thodi der lagegi

puraane woh zakham abhi sukhe nahi hain
hum ko  sambhalne   mein thodi der lagegi

kisi  aur  se mohabbat hum ab kaise karlen
unko  abhi  bhulaane mein thodi der lagegi


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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2013, 11:11:57 PM »
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har baar ki tarha tareef se baala, umdah aur aala

abhi tak to  unhe  samajh hi rahe the hum
khud  ko  samjhaane mein thodi der lagegi

puraane woh zakham abhi sukhe nahi hain
hum ko  sambhalne   mein thodi der lagegi

kisi  aur  se mohabbat hum ab kaise karlen
unko  abhi  bhulaane mein thodi der lagegi
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2013, 11:41:48 PM »
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 ehsaas se labrez qalaam par daad hriday ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 01:36:36 AM »
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waah waah waah hriday ek aur umda peshkash..har baar ki tarah ek dam jhakkas wali post hai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 01:55:39 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2013, 03:13:57 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 26, 2013, 10:23:16 PM


mausam ke badalne  mein  thodi der lagegi
phoolon  ke   khilne  mein  thodi der lagegi

geeli   hain  yeh   lakdiyaan   kai mahino se
abhi  in  ko  jalne   mein   thodi   der lagegi

honth sukhe hain  baarish  ke naa hone se
abhi to muskuraane  mein thodi  der lagegi

aansoo  soch  rahe  hain  ki nikle yaa nahin
unhe  nikalne  mein  abhi   thodi der lagegi

abhi tak to  unhe  samajh hi rahe the hum
khud  ko  samjhaane mein thodi der lagegi

puraane woh zakham abhi sukhe nahi hain
hum ko  sambhalne   mein thodi der lagegi

kisi  aur  se mohabbat hum ab kaise karlen
unko  abhi  bhulaane mein thodi der lagegi


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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2013, 04:04:50 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2013, 09:08:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Iqtedar ji....!!!

Quote from: Iqtedar on August 26, 2013, 11:11:57 PM
har baar ki tarha tareef se baala, umdah aur aala

abhi tak to  unhe  samajh hi rahe the hum
khud  ko  samjhaane mein thodi der lagegi

puraane woh zakham abhi sukhe nahi hain
hum ko  sambhalne   mein thodi der lagegi

kisi  aur  se mohabbat hum ab kaise karlen
unko  abhi  bhulaane mein thodi der lagegi
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Zarraa ji....!!!

Quote from: zarraa on August 26, 2013, 11:41:48 PM
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waah waah waah hriday ek aur umda peshkash..har baar ki tarah ek dam jhakkas wali post hai..dhero daad..happy9
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