---- /// Thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme /// -----

by klaskar on May 09, 2010, 11:10:12 AM
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Ye kavita maine maujudaa haalaat ke baare me soch ke likha hai. Har taraf kitni nafrat hai kitna paap hai jurm hai. Insaan insaan se hi nafrat karta hai. Par fir bhi jaane kyun aisa lagta hai main kuch alag hoon. In sab se mujhe dard hota hai....


kitni nafrat hai aaj yahaan is jahaan mein,
log bhoolne lage hain mohabbat kya hoti hai,
jaane kyun log ladte hain aaj apno mein,
bhool jaate hain rishton ki ahmiyat kya hoti hai,
kyun in sabko dekh main aankhen nam karta hoon,
kya ab bhi thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme,

dharm ke naam pe ek dusre ki jaan le lete hain,
jaane dharm k naam pe kitne dange hote hain,
hindu muslim sikh isaai ye to bas naam hain,
par haqeeqat me to sab insaan hi hote hain,
kyun in sabko dekh main apna waqt kharaab karta hoon,
kya ab bhi thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme,

har taraf raajniti ka ganda jaal hai,
bhai bhatijawaad ki yahaan misaal hai,
gyaan ki yahaan aaj koi qadar nahi,
pratibha ka bhi bahut bura haal hai,
kyun in sab baaton se pareshaan hota hoon,
kya ab bhi thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme,

apne hawas ka samaan samajhte hain naari ko,
bhool jaate hain jisne janam diya uska wajood,
naari ka apmaan karte hain yahaan har jagah,
bas ghreena hi aati hai dekh ke aisi kartoot,
kyun in sabko dekh main aasoo bahata hoon,
kya ab bhi thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme,

paathakon ko aajkal lekhon mein bas masaala chahiye,
auron k ghum me bhi unhe apne liye sirf mazaa chahiye,
koi chaahe tadapta ho chahe koi roye khoon ke aasoon,
apne liye par har kisi ko khushi ka khazaana chahiye,
kyun in sab ke baare me soch ke apni umar kam karta hoon,
kya ab bhi thodi si insaaniyat bachi hai mujhme....


*****HRIDAY*****

http://littlefeelingz.blogspot.com/2010/05/main-insaan-bacha-hoon.html

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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2010, 11:28:00 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Wah Kapil ji bahut achi soch sachai aur dard bhari kavita likha aapne.wonderful work,bahut bahut koob.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2010, 03:24:22 PM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash hai Kapil
Aap ka andaaz nirala hai

Ye sab Kalyug ka prabhav hai
Jo har par jagah chhaaya hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2010, 05:17:38 PM »
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Vahh kya khoob kaha Kapil!!!!!!

Gud 1.............

Keep writing!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2010, 06:13:09 AM »
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bohat bohat khoobsoorat klaskar ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2010, 07:07:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

:icon_salut:Wah Kapil ji bahut achi soch sachai aur dard bhari kavita likha aapne.wonderful work,bahut bahut koob.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2010, 07:08:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

han sach kaha aapne ye kalyug ka hi asar hai...!!!

Bahut hi umda peshkash hai Kapil
Aap ka andaaz nirala hai

Ye sab Kalyug ka prabhav hai
Jo har par jagah chhaaya hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2010, 07:09:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji.... thanx a lot...  !!!

Vahh kya khoob kaha Kapil!!!!!!

Gud 1.............

Keep writing!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2010, 07:10:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Saurabh ji...!!!

bohat bohat khoobsoorat klaskar ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2010, 10:04:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji
Maujuda Haalat Ko Lafzon Men Pirone Ki
Bahut Achchi Koshish Ki Hai Aapne...

Yun Hi Likhte Rahiye...


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

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