Tishnagee bujhatee nahee...........Mamta Bajpai

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raat qaatil hai usee ko hee bulaayaa jaaye
mar ke jeene kee museebat ko mitaayaa jaaye

ishq ke marz ne humko bhee giraftaar kiyaa
ab bhalaa kis se madaawaa ye karaayaa jaaye

khat kee tahreer me kyaa tumne likhaa kyaa jaane
hum samajh paayeN naa ye kis se paRhaayaa jaaye

hai garebaaN yahaaN har chaak kareN kis pe nazar
apnee hee uljhanoN me aur hee uljhaa jaaye

darmiyaaN rishtoN ke deewaareN haiN ye kaisee bhalaa
tod deewaaroN ko apnoN se milaayaa jaaye

dil me hee soch ke ikraar nahee hotaa hai
dil me jo sochaa hai izahaar karaayaa jaaye

tishnagee bujhatee nahee aisaa kareN aye 'Mamta'
paimaanaa pyaas kaa kuchh aur ghataayaa jaaye

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2011, 07:37:31 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Waah waah bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi
hai kya kahne..dili daad qubool farmaayen...

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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2011, 07:45:24 AM »
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raat qaatil hai usee ko hee bulaayaa jaaye
mar ke jeene kee museebat ko mitaayaa jaaye

ishq ke marz ne humko bhee giraftaar kiyaa
ab bhalaa kis se madaawaa ye karaayaa jaaye

khat kee tahreer me kyaa tumne likhaa kyaa jaane
hum samajh paayeN naa ye kis se paRhaayaa jaaye

hai garebaaN yahaaN har chaak kareN kis pe nazar
apnee hee uljhanoN me aur hee uljhaa jaaye

darmiyaaN rishtoN ke deewaareN haiN ye kaisee bhalaa
tod deewaaroN ko apnoN se milaayaa jaaye

dil me hee soch ke ikraar nahee hotaa hai
dil me jo sochaa hai izahaar karaayaa jaaye

tishnagee bujhatee nahee aisaa kareN aye 'Mamta'
paimaanaa pyaas kaa kuchh aur ghataayaa jaaye

Mamta Bajpai



maqta bahut wazandar hai aur badi nasihat deta hai. ghazal ke saare ashar khoob rahe Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2011, 09:49:36 AM »
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Mamta ji...
Bahut Khoob...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 11:43:49 AM »
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Har baar humaaree housalaa afzai me apna qeematee waqt dene ke liye behad shukriyaa Satish jee!
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2011, 11:52:04 AM »
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achi ghazal kahi aapne
bht khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2011, 12:41:48 PM »
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Mamta ji kya baat hai. bahut hi sunder rachna hai.
last 2 lines are very beautiful.
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raat qaatil hai usee ko hee bulaayaa jaaye
mar ke jeene kee museebat ko mitaayaa jaaye

ishq ke marz ne humko bhee giraftaar kiyaa
ab bhalaa kis se madaawaa ye karaayaa jaaye

khat kee tahreer me kyaa tumne likhaa kyaa jaane
hum samajh paayeN naa ye kis se paRhaayaa jaaye

hai garebaaN yahaaN har chaak kareN kis pe nazar
apnee hee uljhanoN me aur hee uljhaa jaaye

darmiyaaN rishtoN ke deewaareN haiN ye kaisee bhalaa
tod deewaaroN ko apnoN se milaayaa jaaye

dil me hee soch ke ikraar nahee hotaa hai
dil me jo sochaa hai izahaar karaayaa jaaye

tishnagee bujhatee nahee aisaa kareN aye 'Mamta'
paimaanaa pyaas kaa kuchh aur ghataayaa jaaye

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2011, 05:18:40 PM »
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Thanks a lot Suresh jee!
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2011, 08:01:15 AM »
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shukriyaa Adil jee!
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2011, 04:46:27 PM »
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raat qaatil hai usee ko hee bulaayaa jaaye
mar ke jeene kee museebat ko mitaayaa jaaye

ishq ke marz ne humko bhee giraftaar kiyaa
ab bhalaa kis se madaawaa ye karaayaa jaaye

khat kee tahreer me kyaa tumne likhaa kyaa jaane
hum samajh paayeN naa ye kis se paRhaayaa jaaye

hai garebaaN yahaaN har chaak kareN kis pe nazar
apnee hee uljhanoN me aur hee uljhaa jaaye

darmiyaaN rishtoN ke deewaareN haiN ye kaisee bhalaa
tod deewaaroN ko apnoN se milaayaa jaaye

dil me hee soch ke ikraar nahee hotaa hai
dil me jo sochaa hai izahaar karaayaa jaaye

tishnagee bujhatee nahee aisaa kareN aye 'Mamta'
paimaanaa pyaas kaa kuchh aur ghataayaa jaaye

Mamta Bajpai


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Mamtaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2011, 03:38:44 AM »
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housla afzai kaa behad shukriyaa Satish jee!
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2011, 03:40:35 AM »
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ek kripan par apni daad kaa beshqeematee khazaanaa lutaane ke liye behad shukriyaa Khwaish jee!
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2011, 05:59:52 AM »
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Mast kalaam Mamta-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap



raat qaatil hai usee ko hee bulaayaa jaaye
mar ke jeene kee museebat ko mitaayaa jaaye

ishq ke marz ne humko bhee giraftaar kiyaa
ab bhalaa kis se madaawaa ye karaayaa jaaye

khat kee tahreer me kyaa tumne likhaa kyaa jaane
hum samajh paayeN naa ye kis se paRhaayaa jaaye

hai garebaaN yahaaN har chaak kareN kis pe nazar
apnee hee uljhanoN me aur hee uljhaa jaaye

darmiyaaN rishtoN ke deewaareN haiN ye kaisee bhalaa
tod deewaaroN ko apnoN se milaayaa jaaye

dil me hee soch ke ikraar nahee hotaa hai
dil me jo sochaa hai izahaar karaayaa jaaye

tishnagee bujhatee nahee aisaa kareN aye 'Mamta'
paimaanaa pyaas kaa kuchh aur ghataayaa jaaye

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2011, 09:22:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2011, 03:45:05 PM »
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Bahut dinoN ke baad nazar aayeeN Koyal ! shukriyaa adaa karne se is gumshudagee kee wajah poochanaa chaahooNgee....
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