Tod dun sheesha jahan.....Premdeep

by premdeep on January 31, 2014, 04:59:46 PM
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 Tod dun sheesha jahan wahin  mehkhana ban jaye
 Dekh  humko ek nazar mein  wo  dewaana ban jaye

 Ishq ke do din hain in mein jee le apni zindagi
 kya pata is dil ka dushman kab zamana ban jaye

 Door jana hi tha behtar wo bade masroof the
 Bewafai ka wahi phir se ek  bahana  ban jaye

 Chod de chahat ke parinde ab khule asmaan mein
 kya pata ye zindagi kab ek fasana ban jaye

 Dillagi hai mujhme todi aashiqui todi si hai
 Dil ka kya hai apna kab ye begana ban jaye

 Dard ka mahaul hai aur zakhm gehra sa jo hai
 Bas zindagi aur maut ka ab dostana ban jaye
 
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2014, 05:38:04 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on January 31, 2014, 04:59:46 PM
Tod dun sheesha jahan wahin  mehkhana ban jaye
 Dekh  humko ek mein nazar wo dewaana ban jaye

 Ishq ke do din hain in mein jee le apni zindagi
 kya pata is dil ka dushman kab zamana ban jaye

 Door jana hi tha behtar wo bade masroof the
 Bewafai ka wahi phir se ek  bahana  ban jaye

 Chod de chahat ke parinde ab khule asmaan mein
 kya pata ye zindagi kab ek fasana ban jaye

 Dillagi hai mujhme todi aashiqui todi si hai
 Dil ka kya hai apna kab ye begana ban jaye

 Dard ka mahaul hai aur zakhm gehra sa jo hai
 Bas zindagi aur maut ka ab dostanan ban jaye
 



Bahut Bahut Khoob premdeep Jee

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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2014, 06:12:24 PM »
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behtreen ....
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2014, 08:32:10 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2014, 08:43:16 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah kya kehne premdeep ji... behad khooooooob... bahut bahut mubarak ho...
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bahut khoob Applause Applause bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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waah waah laajawab likha hai premdeep..
Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2014, 05:29:45 AM »
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nice one.
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