too hi too @sheba

by Sheba on March 05, 2016, 09:21:32 PM
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                                  chaar - soo  wahi khusboo liye hue!
                                  hain phhool teri justjoo liye hue!!

                                 
                                  nazre.n dekti  rahee.n   usi  simt!
                                  tere   aane  ki  aarzoo  liye  hue!


                                 
                                 hai  izteraab - e - dil baaqi abhi!
                                  dhharkan.en   be-qaaboo   liye hue!


                                 
                                  badalti  nahin   karwat zindagi to!
                                  hai  ek    hi   pahloo   liye  hue!

                                 
                                  hone  lagi  udaasi dekh lafzo.n ko!
                                  chale  aate  wahi  mauzoo liye hue!


                                  ghazal  me.n  sheba ka her khayaal!
                                  hai  buss  too  hi  too  liye hue!!

                                 
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2016, 01:14:28 AM »
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ye eka rau tumhaaree ghazal par  ek baad men doongaa tumhaaree aamad par
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2016, 04:26:00 AM »
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waah waah bas waah bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal se doosraa janam liyaa hai, Rau to bantaa hee hai lekin baad mein miley gaa. Bas aatey rahiye ghazal kee raunak bharhaatey rahiye, apnaa jalwaa dikhaatey rahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2016, 06:00:28 AM »
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WaaHHH !! Bahaut achchhee ghazal !!  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2016, 06:26:20 AM »
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Waaaah waaah lajawab hamesha ki tarha  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2016, 08:47:10 PM »
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Sheba Sahiba Aadaab ...!

Aap aaye bahaar aayi ... badi hi khoob aur gehre khayaayoN se labrez kalaam ke saath bazm meiN shirkat ki hai ....

Behad pur asar aur qabil e daad sher kahe hai... amuman kalaam hi umda huyi hai..
Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...







                                  chaar - soo  wahi khusboo liye hue!
                                  hain phhool teri justjoo liye hue!!

                                 waah bahut khoob sidhe se lafzoN meiN achcha matla kaha hai daad ...




                                  nazre.n dekti  rahee.n   usi  simt!
                                  tere   aane  ki  aarzoo  liye  hue!


                                 waah waah waah kia kahne jee behad khoobsurat sher hua hai daad....



                                  hai  izteraab - e - dil baaqi abhi!
                                  dhharkan.en   be-qaaboo   liye hue!


                                 waah Wallaah Masha Allaah ... behad laajawab sher kaha hai bahut khoob jee ... is tarhaa ka ahsaas o khayaal ek shohra hi kah sakti hai ... daad daad daad ...



                                  badalti  nahin   karwat zindagi to!
                                  hai  ek    hi   pahloo   liye  hue!

                                 bahut khoob jee bahut achcha .... badal jayeNgi jee ... sikke ko uchaliye to sahiN ...



                                  hone  lagi  udaasi dekh lafzo.n ko!
                                  chale  aate  wahi  mauzoo liye hue!

Aah kia baat hai bahut hi umda... behad sidha aur suljha huaa sher hai daad ... aik khayaal humare zahen se ...

MaiN ek misre ko kitna samajh paata
Lafz lafz tha daastaaN e guftagu liye hue



                                  ghazal  me.n  sheba ka her khayaal!
                                  hai  buss  too  hi  too  liye hue!!


Waah waah Sheba Sahiba bahut khoob....  achcha maqta hua hai...  daad daad daad ...

                                 

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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2016, 09:18:50 PM »
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waah waah bas waah bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal se doosraa janam liyaa hai, Rau to bantaa hee hai lekin baad mein miley gaa. Bas aatey rahiye ghazal kee raunak bharhaatey rahiye.
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Sheba Sahiba Rau mein ne add kar diyaa hai, qabool keejiye.
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2016, 04:22:30 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya baat hai sheba g..  Mai first time aapko parh raha hun..   gahrai dikhi hai.. Dhero daad bahut umda..
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«Reply #8 on: March 08, 2016, 12:34:02 PM »
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WAAAW OWSOME.... AM ALSO READING YOU FIRST TIME, REALY OWSOME...
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