toot kar bikhar jaana hai

by saahill on April 27, 2013, 12:25:16 PM
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rooth kar aapse humko kahan jaana hai sanam
                 hue jo dhoor apse to toot kar bikharna jaana hai sanam ,,,

is kadhar saanson mein aapko basaa liya hai humne
                 ek pal bhi jo bhulaaya to mar hi jaana hai sanam ,,,

ab to yeh zindagi hai aapse bas itna samjh lijiye na
                 rooh mein hamaari bas aapko utar jaana hai sanam ,,,

armaan  dil mein hain mere mohabbat ke appke hi liye
                 apki khaatir hi ab khawaishon ko sajaana hai sanam ,,,

dadhkano ki suno awaaz yeh kya kehti hain humse
                 na dekhein ge apko to inko tham jaana hai sanam ,,,

rooth kar aapse humko kahan jaana hai sanam
                 hue jo dhoor apse to toot kar bikharna jaana hai sanam ,,,



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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 12:29:12 PM »
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bahut umda likha hai aapne saahill jee. bahut daad
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2013, 01:07:36 PM »
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ab to yeh zindagi hai aapse bas itna samjh lijiye na
rooh mein hamaari bas aapko utar jaana hai sanam ,,,
nice line kaya khub kha hai ap nea
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2013, 03:30:01 PM »
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nice one
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Waah sahil sir kya likha hai..daad qubool kare..happy9
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thx suman ji
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thx ravi ji
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BAHUT KHOOB
SAHIL JI
MOHABAT KIYA HAI SAMAJHNA HAI TO
AAPKI GAZAL KO ACHHE SE PADNA HAI
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THX ASWANI JI
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