toot ke barsa paani

by Pooja on November 05, 2004, 10:45:49 PM
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2004, 11:02:51 AM »
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wow wow pooja,,,,,,,,,,nice words....................

Yeh hayaat ki kahani hai fana ka aik sagher
too labon se muskra kar issi jam ko laga le........
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2004, 08:41:12 PM »
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Very Nice pooja ji! & Waheed Bhai!!! Wah!
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2004, 03:10:05 PM »
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Thanx Arun Bhai.............
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2004, 05:22:58 PM »
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani


uiima pooja kya baat hai

dekh ke teri ye qatil jawaani
badal ne haske jhatka paani  : p
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2004, 05:34:47 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2004, 06:18:58 PM »
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani


Wah Pooja ji! Excellent!!! Waah!


Subahdum Zulfein Na Yoon Bikhraiye,
Log Dhokha kha rahe hain Shaam ka!
Kuchh hain ki Achraj se Gir hi Pade jaate hain,
Kuchh ke liye hai yeh tilism Tumhare Naam ka!


{Subahdum:Morning, Pratah Kaal}
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2004, 06:36:51 PM »
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani


uiima pooja kya baat hai

dekh ke teri ye qatil jawaani
badal ne haske jhatka paani  : p


Very Nice Nishita ji!!Waaah!!

Bikher do jo Zulfon ko apne mukhde par,
To Maare sharm ke aayee Hui Ghata Phir Jaaye!
Jhatak do gar Tum Apni Zulfon se paani,
Chamakti woh Bark Phir Kidhar jaaye!


{Bark: Bijli}
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2004, 06:03:20 AM »
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Shukariya AKS JI, NISHITA AND waheed_rose!!!!!

WAH!!! KAYA BAAT AKS JI!!!! BAHOOT KHOOB LIKHA APNE!!!

Bahoot khoob Nishita!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2004, 06:52:33 AM »
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani


uiima pooja kya baat hai

dekh ke teri ye qatil jawaani
badal ne haske jhatka paani  : p


kya baat hai.........bahot khoob pooja...

wajood raat ka dunya se khatm ho jata
ke zulf-e-yaar se ger maangta ziya sooraj...........
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2004, 06:32:41 PM »
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Wah Waheed Bhai!!! Bahut Khoob!!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2004, 10:37:25 AM »
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Kisne bheege hue balon se ye jhatka paani
Jhoom kar aayi ghata, toot ke barsa paani


uiima pooja kya baat hai

dekh ke teri ye qatil jawaani
badal ne haske jhatka paani  : p


Very Nice Nishita ji!!Waaah!!

Bikher do jo Zulfon ko apne mukhde par,
To Maare sharm ke aayee Hui Ghata Phir Jaaye!
Jhatak do gar Tum Apni Zulfon se paani,
Chamakti woh Bark Phir Kidhar jaaye!


{Bark: Bijli}


wah wah

zulfon ko humaari chehre se na hatayenge
aise na hum barkha ko ab satayenge
jhatak kar paani tum pe bijli na girayenge
chamakti wo bark ko ankho me chhupayenge
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«Reply #12 on: November 15, 2004, 12:16:38 PM »
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wow!!! Great!!!! Superb!!! Bahut achchhe Nishita ji!! Waah!! :thumb:  :wis
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2004, 06:00:15 PM »
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Nice all !!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2004, 08:24:40 PM »
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Shukriya Immi ji!
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