tu badnaam hota hai~~ Saahil

by -Saahil- on June 10, 2009, 12:26:37 PM
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mere hothon par aake ruk gaya hai tera naam
kii main kahoon kuch toh mehfil mein tu badnaam hota hai

yeh bhi sahi kaha gaya kii aankehn meri khamosh thi
koi kya jaane woh manjar jo saamne inke subah o shaam hota hai

aapki aankhon mein dekh aansu, yeh duniya ro padi
aur rona ab hamara, mehfil mein bahut aam hota hai

aaye thay shirkat karne mehfil mein magar na jaane kyun
dekh kar jalwa tera ,dil-e-nadaan rota hai

tune bhi keh diya hashra mohabbat ka besharam
jara dekh toh ab iska charcha sare aam hota hai

maine toh izzzat nilaam kar di bahut pahle
mujhe kar k beizzat yahan, tu bhi badnaam hota hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 01:07:28 PM »
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Wah wah mere bhai tumhare makhte ne to Ghayel ko khareed liya yaar. Subhanallah bohat badiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii baat kehdi tumne mere bhai samne hote to matha chum leta tumhara. Khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de.
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 01:38:26 PM »
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Wah Sahil Ji Bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 01:50:30 PM »
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Bahut ache salil...kya baat hai Dear... Applause Applause

Beh jaati hai sari tamanna yun hi aansuaon ke sailaab me
saayad jahan me pyaar ka yahi aakhri mukaam hota hai..
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 02:23:16 PM »
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Salil Bhai Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab Likha Hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 05:00:34 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha hai Yaar Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 09:07:14 PM »
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mere hothon par aake ruk gaya hai tera naam
kii main kahoon kuch toh mehfil mein tu badnaam hota hai

yeh bhi sahi kaha gaya kii aankehn meri khamosh thi
koi kya jaane woh manjar jo saamne inke subah o shaam hota hai

aapki aankhon mein dekh aansu, yeh duniya ro padi
aur rona ab hamara, mehfil mein bahut aam hota hai

aaye thay shirkat karne mehfil mein magar na jaane kyun
dekh kar jalwa tera ,dil-e-nadaan rota hai

tune bhi keh diya hashra mohabbat ka besharam
jara dekh toh ab iska charcha sare aam hota hai

maine toh izzzat nilaam kar di bahut pahle
mujhe kar k beizzat yahan, tu bhi badnaam hota hai
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Salil..Keep doing the good work...keep writing.......Very nice work !
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 10:08:18 PM »
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Applause Applause Wakei bahaut bahaut badi baat kehdi bhai apne..Akhri do lines wer jst toooooooooooo goood..Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 05:39:10 AM »
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mere hothon par aake ruk gaya hai tera naam
kii main kahoon kuch toh mehfil mein tu badnaam hota hai

yeh bhi sahi kaha gaya kii aankehn meri khamosh thi
koi kya jaane woh manjar jo saamne inke subah o shaam hota hai

aapki aankhon mein dekh aansu, yeh duniya ro padi
aur rona ab hamara, mehfil mein bahut aam hota hai

aaye thay shirkat karne mehfil mein magar na jaane kyun
dekh kar jalwa tera ,dil-e-nadaan rota hai

tune bhi keh diya hashra mohabbat ka besharam
jara dekh toh ab iska charcha sare aam hota hai

maine toh izzzat nilaam kar di bahut pahle
mujhe kar k beizzat yahan, tu bhi badnaam hota hai
BAHAUT ACHCCHEY SAAHIL SB ...KYAA KALAAM HAI
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 06:10:23 AM »
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Excellent,very nice Sahil ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2009, 07:48:34 AM »
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Bahut ache salil...kya baat hai Dear... Applause Applause

Beh jaati hai sari tamanna yun hi aansuaon ke sailaab me
saayad jahan me pyaar ka yahi aakhri mukaam hota hai..


verii naaice.....JJ
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 06:43:48 AM »
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Wah wah mere bhai tumhare makhte ne to Ghayel ko khareed liya yaar. Subhanallah bohat badiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii baat kehdi tumne mere bhai samne hote to matha chum leta tumhara. Khuda tumhe bohat khushiya de.
shukriya bade bhai aapne is nazm ko samjha aur saraha yeh bahut badi baat hai kyunki mujhe maloom hai ......aap sirf oonhi shero kii tareef karte hai jo laayak hoti hai........shukriya bhai
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 06:46:06 AM »
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Wah Sahil Ji Bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
Salil Bhai Humesha Ki tarah Lajawab Likha Hai Dost.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha hai Yaar Bohat Achche,.
BAHAUT ACHCCHEY SAAHIL SB ...KYAA KALAAM HAI
Excellent,very nice Sahil ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shukriya azeem bhai,khamosh awaaz, madhu dear, sarvesh bhai and vicky bhai
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2009, 06:47:24 AM »
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Applause Applause Wakei bahaut bahaut badi baat kehdi bhai apne..Akhri do lines wer jst toooooooooooo goood..Applause Applause
shukriya raheem bhai.......aapko meri jo last kii do lines pasand aayi.........hai batata chaloon kii woh mere bahut se aur doston ko bhi pasand aayi
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2009, 06:48:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Salil..Keep doing the good work...keep writing.......Very nice work !
thanks a lot di........
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