-----/// Tu ne seene se lagaayaa thaa ///----- Hriday

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ek  bas  tu  hi thi, jisne  mujhe   seene   se  lagaayaa thaa
teraa  hi   chehraa  dekh, yeh 'Hriday'  muskuraayaa  thaa

jab gher rakhaa thaa mujhe gham ke ghane andheron ne
tab  tu  ne  hi  pyaar se  jeene kaa matlab sikhaayaa thaa

jab   sooraj   ki  roshni  bhi  kam  thi   in andheron ke liye
woh chiraag jis  se  roshni  hui  woh  tu  ne jalaayaa thaa

jab  chhat   se mujh par  baarish  ki  boondein tapakti thi
tab tu ne  hi mujh par apnaa aanchal woh lehraayaa thaa

jab kashti meri  fansi   thi  bich  samundar  toofaano mein
use saahil  tak  laane  ko  tu  ne  hi saath  nibhaayaa thaa

naa  ummeed  thi kuch jeene ki, naa  hi  koi  khwaaish thi
khaamosh si zindagi mein  aawaaz ban kar tu  aayaa thaa

jab thak  chukaa thaa main apni zindagi  se  haar maanke
zindagi  khoobsoorat  hai, yeh  tu ne hi  samjhaayaa thaa


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ek  bas  tu  hi thi, jisne  mujhe   seene   se  lagaayaa thaa
teraa  hi   chehraa  dekh, yeh 'Hriday'  muskuraayaa  thaa

jab gher rakhaa thaa mujhe gham ke ghane andheron ne
tab  tu  ne  hi  pyaar se  jeene kaa matlab sikhaayaa thaa

jab   sooraj   ki  roshni  bhi  kam  thi   in andheron ke liye
woh chiraag jis  se  roshni  hui  woh  tu  ne jalaayaa thaa

jab  chhat   se mujh par  baarish  ki  boondein tapakti thi
tab tu ne  hi mujh par apnaa aanchal woh lehraayaa thaa

jab kashti meri  fansi   thi  bich  samundar  toofaano mein
use saahil  tak  laane  ko  tu  ne  hi saath  nibhaayaa thaa

naa  ummeed  thi kuch jeene ki, naa  hi  koi  khwaaish thi
khaamosh si zindagi mein  aawaaz ban kar tu  aayaa thaa

jab thak  chukaa thaa main apni zindagi  se  haar maanke
zindagi  khoobsoorat  hai, yeh  tu ne hi  samjhaayaa thaa


*****HRIDAY*****



hriday bahut acha likha hai main ye samjhti hoon ya mera iss kalaam ke motalliq ye nazariya hai shayad ye MAA ki taarif mein likha hai tum ne...........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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waah bahut khoob hriday jee..happy9
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Waaaah hriday ji... aapke kalaamo ke kya kehne.. sach mein dil mein hulchul macha deti hai.. mujhe bhi aisa achcha accha likhna seekha do.. behad khoob.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho..
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2013, 02:46:58 PM »
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jab   sooraj   ki  roshni  bhi  kam  thi   in andheron ke liye
woh chiraag jis  se  roshni  hui  woh  tu  ne jalaayaa thaa

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji, maine aisaa kuch soch ke nahi likhaa thaa magar jab pooraa huwaa to padh ke lagaa ki maa ke liye hai...!!! Usual Smile

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hriday bahut acha likha hai main ye samjhti hoon ya mera iss kalaam ke motalliq ye nazariya hai shayad ye MAA ki taarif mein likha hai tum ne...........! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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waah bahut khoob hriday jee..happy9
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