Tu shamma main tera parwaana ho gaya.!! @Advo.RavinderRavi"Sagar"

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 15, 2013, 05:51:21 PM
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Kabhi kreeb tha mere aaj  falak ka  sitaara ho gaya.!
Kabhi tha jo mera  saare  jahaan ka  pyaara ho gaya.!!

Kya khoob thaa samaa us ke aane se bahaar  aati thi.!
Jiski khushboo se  mahakta  gulshan  begana ho gaya,!!

Tujh se kar muhabbat zamaane  mein alag  mukaam tha.!
Tere deewangi mein main aaj khud se anjaana ho gaya.!!

Tujhe khokar dar-badar pagal deewane se ghumte hain.!
Log kahte hain tu shamma main tera parwaana ho gaya.!!



कभी करीब था आज  फलक का सितारा हो गया.!
कभी था जो मेरा  सारे  जहाँ का प्यारा हो गया.!!

क्या खूब था समा उसके आने से बाहर आती थी.!
जिसकी खुश्बू से महकता गुलशन बेगाना हो गया,!!

तुझ से कर मुहब्बत ज़माने में अलग मुकाम था.!
तेरे दीवानगी में मैं  आज खुदसे अंजाना हो गया.!!

तुझे खो कर दर-बदर पागल  दीवाने से घूमते हैं.!
लोग कहते हैं तू शम्मा  मैं तेरा परवाना हो गया.!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2013, 05:55:40 PM »
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Waah waah kya baat hai sir ji..... bahut khoob andaaz   Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2013, 06:00:22 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaah ravindera ji.. bahut khooooooooooob...
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2013, 06:01:27 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2013, 06:06:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob waah waah lovely....
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2013, 06:09:48 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2013, 06:18:31 PM »
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nice lines ravi bhai kya baat hai parwaana ji shamaa raushan rakhiye
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2013, 06:21:26 PM »
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bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai Ravi ji.... aapke is sher ko padhkar na jaane kya kya dimaag me utar aaya hai..

Kya khoob thaa samaa us ke aane se bahaar  aati thi.!
Jiski khushboo se  mahakta  gulshan  begana ho gaya,!!

waahhhhhh  bahot khoob... likhte rahye...........

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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2013, 07:33:26 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2013, 10:43:01 PM »
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whaWHA WHA BHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2013, 05:14:01 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 15, 2013, 05:51:21 PM
Kabhi kreeb tha mere aaj  falak ka  sitaara ho gaya.!
Kabhi tha jo mera  saare  jahaan ka  pyaara ho gaya.!!
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Kya khoob thaa samaa us ke aane se bahaar  aati thi.!
Jiski khushboo se  mahakta  gulshan  begana ho gaya,!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tujh se kar muhabbat zamaane  mein alag  mukaam tha.!
Tere deewangi mein main aaj khud se anjaana ho gaya.!!
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Tujhe khokar dar-badar pagal deewane se ghumte hain.!
Log kahte hain tu shamma main tera parwaana ho gaya.!!
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कभी करीब था आज  फलक का सितारा हो गया.!
कभी था जो मेरा  सारे  जहाँ का प्यारा हो गया.!!
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क्या खूब था समा उसके आने से बाहर आती थी.!
जिसकी खुश्बू से महकता गुलशन बेगाना हो गया,!!

तुझ से कर मुहब्बत ज़माने में अलग मुकाम था.!
तेरे दीवानगी में मैं  आज खुदसे अंजाना हो गया.!!

तुझे खो कर दर-बदर पागल  दीवाने से घूमते हैं.!
लोग कहते हैं तू शम्मा  मैं तेरा परवाना हो गया.!!


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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2013, 06:47:47 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Ravi ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!

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Quote from: kittoo on October 15, 2013, 05:55:40 PM
Waah waah kya baat hai sir ji..... bahut khoob andaaz   Applause
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Quote from: aqsh on October 15, 2013, 06:00:22 PM
waaaaaaaaaaah ravindera ji.. bahut khooooooooooob...
Shuqriya Aqsh Jee.
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2013, 01:36:52 AM »
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