~*~ Tujh bin bhi zindagi hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on March 26, 2011, 04:22:55 PM
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Yahan iss forum par, maine bahaut baar balke har baar dard pe likha hai..Mager aj ek nayi koshish karna chahta hoon..

Jab kisi se mohobat hojaye aur woh shaks apka hoke bhi na ho, toh dard beshumar hota hai..Aj kareeban 1.5 yrs hogaye hai jab usne kaha tha "Tujse mohobat nahin hai mujhe Rahim.." Doston iss 1.5 yrs main, jaise maine apne apko kho diya hai..Meri har nazm main jo dard maine bayan kiya hai, usse kayi zada ander mehsoos kiya hai..

Kuch dinn pehle hi realise kiya kay yeh sab galat hai..Yahan mere ek dost se barrkar bhai hai, 'Khwaish' jinki nazmon se maine bahaut kuch seekha hai aur unki ek baat yaad ati hai kay unhone kaha tha 'Agey barrne ka naam zindagi hai..'

So doston aj yeh kehna chahta hoon sabhi se, kay apni zindagi ko khul ke jeena seekhein..Maine toh ek arsa laga liya yeh seekhne main mager ap yeh galti na kijiyega..

Ek ghazal hai, zindagi main tu nahin toh kya rehjaega..bas issi flow main likh raha hoon..!

"Never let someone become your priority when you are just an option in theirs.."

Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega,
Haan mager tu na raha toh bahaut kuch badal jaega..

Ahiste ahiste dil se tere nishaan mit hi jaenge,
Dil main teri jagah koi aur leh jaega..

Dard main jeena, dard pe likhna… ab bas,
Jo teri yaadein mit gayi toh ‘Khamosh’ bhi muskuraega..

Usse bhool jao jiski zindagi main tum sirf ek naam ho,
Aisa andaz-e-jeena yeh nadan sabko seekha jaega..

Log ghadiyon ki tarha hai, aate jaate rehte hai,
Yahi misal ko soch dil tujhe dil se bhool jaega..

Waqt ki tez andhiyan mujhe hila sakti hai, gira nahin sakti,
Yakeen hai mujhe kay waqt ek dinn yeh zaroor seekhjaega..

Zindagi ki raah par chalta ek musafir hai ‘Khamosh’,
Kal tak tu thi saath, insh’Allah kal koi aur miljaega,
Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 04:48:34 PM »
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Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega,
Haan mager tu na raha toh bahaut kuch badal jaega..

Ahiste ahiste dil se tere nishaan mit hi jaenge,
Dil main teri jagah koi aur leh jaega..

Dard main jeena, dard pe likhna… ab bas,
Jo teri yaadein mit gayi toh ‘Khamosh’ bhi muskuraega..

Usse bhool jao jiski zindagi main tum sirf ek naam ho,
Aisa andaz-e-jeena yeh nadan sabko seekha jaega..

Log ghadiyon ki tarha hai, aate jaate rehte hai,
Yahi misal ko soch dil tujhe dil se bhool jaega..

Waqt ki tez andhiyan mujhe hila sakti hai, gira nahin sakti,
Yakeen hai mujhe kay waqt ek dinn yeh zaroor seekhjaega..

Zindagi ki raah par chalta ek musafir hai ‘Khamosh’,
Kal tak tu thi saath, insh’Allah kal koi aur miljaega,
Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega..


bhut khub rahim ji aapka ye kdum toote dilo ko bahut raahat dega yakin maniye agar nakam aashiqo ko samajh aajaye ki jindgi me aur bhi bahut kuchh hai is gum ke siwa aur waqt hai uska marhum to jeena aasan ho jaye .uspar aap jaise dosto ki dua aur sahara,thanks Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2011, 05:00:51 PM »
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Bahut achi baat hai rahiim ki tumne dard ko chhod zindgi mein phir ek nayi roshni ka hath thama hai,bus itna hi kahungi ki kisi k chale jane se zindgi nhi rukti aur is zindgi ko kisi aese insan k liye mat zaya karo jo uske layak hi na ho ye zindgi allah ki khubsurat den hai aur jo dil se allah ko mante hai vo unke is tohfe ki ehmiyat bhi jante hai...khush raho aur zindgi ko hamesha positive attitude se jiyo..god bless u take care...
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2011, 05:51:48 PM »
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aaj kuch jada nai likh paunga dost aapke iss nagme par. kuch mind prob hai…
bas apki iss soch ko salaam
be happy dear
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2011, 06:00:29 PM »
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Bahut khub Rahim ji aur Geet Ji ne Jo Likha Wo Sahi Hai Jo Apna Hai Wo Kabhi Chhor Kar Nahi Jata Hai Aur Chhor kar gya wo apna tha hi nahi isliye uske liye hum kyu Roye Kyu Unke Liye Dhukhi Rahe Bus Mast Raho
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2011, 07:59:35 PM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on March 26, 2011, 04:48:34 PM
bhut khub rahim ji aapka ye kdum toote dilo ko bahut raahat dega yakin maniye agar nakam aashiqo ko samajh aajaye ki jindgi me aur bhi bahut kuchh hai is gum ke siwa aur waqt hai uska marhum to jeena aasan ho jaye .uspar aap jaise dosto ki dua aur sahara,thanks Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Kamal bhai..
Aisi nazm sahara ager ek dil ko bhi dede,
toh main samjhunga kay main safal hua dost..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 26, 2011, 05:00:51 PM
Bahut achi baat hai rahiim ki tumne dard ko chhod zindgi mein phir ek nayi roshni ka hath thama hai,bus itna hi kahungi ki kisi k chale jane se zindgi nhi rukti aur is zindgi ko kisi aese insan k liye mat zaya karo jo uske layak hi na ho ye zindgi allah ki khubsurat den hai aur jo dil se allah ko mante hai vo unke is tohfe ki ehmiyat bhi jante hai...khush raho aur zindgi ko hamesha positive attitude se jiyo..god bless u take care...
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Geet di..
Apki har baat se sehmat hoon..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2011, 09:55:30 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on March 26, 2011, 05:51:48 PM
aaj kuch jada nai likh paunga dost aapke iss nagme par. kuch mind prob hai…
bas apki iss soch ko salaam
be happy dear
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Nirala dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on March 26, 2011, 06:00:29 PM
Bahut khub Rahim ji aur Geet Ji ne Jo Likha Wo Sahi Hai Jo Apna Hai Wo Kabhi Chhor Kar Nahi Jata Hai Aur Chhor kar gya wo apna tha hi nahi isliye uske liye hum kyu Roye Kyu Unke Liye Dhukhi Rahe Bus Mast Raho
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Rishi bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2011, 07:29:41 AM »
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woww... bht bht khoob rahim...
tumhari sprit bht acchi lagi mujhe...
chalne ka naam hi zindagi hai...
pahle do sher bht bht acche hai..
very nice..
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2011, 08:50:14 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 27, 2011, 07:29:41 AM
woww... bht bht khoob rahim...
tumhari sprit bht acchi lagi mujhe...
chalne ka naam hi zindagi hai...
pahle do sher bht bht acche hai..
very nice..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2011, 11:44:24 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 26, 2011, 04:22:55 PM
Yahan iss forum par, maine bahaut baar balke har baar dard pe likha hai..Mager aj ek nayi koshish karna chahta hoon..

Jab kisi se mohobat hojaye aur woh shaks apka hoke bhi na ho, toh dard beshumar hota hai..Aj kareeban 1.5 yrs hogaye hai jab usne kaha tha "Tujse mohobat nahin hai mujhe Rahim.." Doston iss 1.5 yrs main, jaise maine apne apko kho diya hai..Meri har nazm main jo dard maine bayan kiya hai, usse kayi zada ander mehsoos kiya hai..

Kuch dinn pehle hi realise kiya kay yeh sab galat hai..Yahan mere ek dost se barrkar bhai hai, 'Khwaish' jinki nazmon se maine bahaut kuch seekha hai aur unki ek baat yaad ati hai kay unhone kaha tha 'Agey barrne ka naam zindagi hai..'

So doston aj yeh kehna chahta hoon sabhi se, kay apni zindagi ko khul ke jeena seekhein..Maine toh ek arsa laga liya yeh seekhne main mager ap yeh galti na kijiyega..

Ek ghazal hai, zindagi main tu nahin toh kya rehjaega..bas issi flow main likh raha hoon..!

"Never let someone become your priority when you are just an option in theirs.."

Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega,
Haan mager tu na raha toh bahaut kuch badal jaega..

Ahiste ahiste dil se tere nishaan mit hi jaenge,
Dil main teri jagah koi aur leh jaega..

Dard main jeena, dard pe likhna… ab bas,
Jo teri yaadein mit gayi toh ‘Khamosh’ bhi muskuraega..

Usse bhool jao jiski zindagi main tum sirf ek naam ho,
Aisa andaz-e-jeena yeh nadan sabko seekha jaega..

Log ghadiyon ki tarha hai, aate jaate rehte hai,
Yahi misal ko soch dil tujhe dil se bhool jaega..

Waqt ki tez andhiyan mujhe hila sakti hai, gira nahin sakti,
Yakeen hai mujhe kay waqt ek dinn yeh zaroor seekhjaega..

Zindagi ki raah par chalta ek musafir hai ‘Khamosh’,
Kal tak tu thi saath, insh’Allah kal koi aur miljaega,
Tere bina bhi zindagi main bahaut kuch reh jaega..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bhai Rahim!!! Iss kalaam Ko padhkar Soch Mein pad Gaya Tha Aakhir Kya Comment Doon..Sach kahoon To Aapne choti si Umar Mein Zindagi Ki Baarikiyon Ko Bahut Ache Se Samjha Hai Jo Humesha Aapki Likhi kalaamo Mein Jhalakti Hai, Aaj Aapne Meri kahi Hui Uss Line Ko Itna Acha samjha Ke Kya Kahoon!!! Sach To yehi hai Ke Aage Ki Badhte Jaana Hi Zindagi Hai!!!

Aapke iss Kalaam Ki Postitivity ke liye Dil Ki Gehraiyon Se Daad Deta Hoon Dost!!! Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!


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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2011, 04:21:08 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 27, 2011, 11:44:24 AM

Bhai Rahim!!! Iss kalaam Ko padhkar Soch Mein pad Gaya Tha Aakhir Kya Comment Doon..Sach kahoon To Aapne choti si Umar Mein Zindagi Ki Baarikiyon Ko Bahut Ache Se Samjha Hai Jo Humesha Aapki Likhi kalaamo Mein Jhalakti Hai, Aaj Aapne Meri kahi Hui Uss Line Ko Itna Acha samjha Ke Kya Kahoon!!! Sach To yehi hai Ke Aage Ki Badhte Jaana Hi Zindagi Hai!!!

Aapke iss Kalaam Ki Postitivity ke liye Dil Ki Gehraiyon Se Daad Deta Hoon Dost!!! Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!


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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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Bahut Khoob Khayaal Pesh Kiye haiN ... Rahim Ji !

sabhi ehsaas dil ko chhuu ke jaate hai ... !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai .........  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2011, 07:43:53 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 27, 2011, 06:19:00 PM
Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai
Bahut Achha Laga Aapki Post Dekhkar

ALLAH Pak Aapko Shad o Aabad Rakhey Aameen

~Shihab~
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 27, 2011, 06:55:01 PM
Bahut Khoob Khayaal Pesh Kiye haiN ... Rahim Ji !

sabhi ehsaas dil ko chhuu ke jaate hai ... !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai .........  Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Naresh bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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