Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Gar Main Dua Karoon "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: November 04, 2012, 10:59:52 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: November 04, 2012, 11:00:40 AM »
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«Reply #17 on: November 04, 2012, 11:02:16 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 04, 2012, 01:34:56 AM
waah khwaish bete aaj tumhaaree ghazal padh kar bashir badr kaa sher yaad aa gayaa
"kabhee yoon bhee aa meree aankh men ki meree nazar ko khabar n ho.
mujhe ek raat nawaaz de fir uske baad sahr n ho."
aapne kamaal kee ghazal kahee hai


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«Reply #18 on: November 04, 2012, 11:13:56 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 04, 2012, 02:26:08 AM
aapki ghazal padhkar dr bashir badr saheb ki yaad aagayi ..


kabhi yun bhi aa meri aankh maN ki meri nazar ko khabar na ho,

Mujhe ek raat nawaz de phir uske baad sehar naho.

wo bada rahim O kareem hai mujhe ye sifat bhi ata kare,

use bhoolne ki dua KaruN To meri dua me asar na ho;

kaisa ajeeb ittefaq hai,

mubarakbaad qubool kijiye....



Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Aarish ji...

Yeh Ghazal Likhte Waqt Mujhe Zara Bhi Andaaza nahi Tha Ke Isse Kaafiye-Radeef Par pehle Bhi Koi Ghazal Likhi Gayi Hai Woh Bhi Itne Bade Shayar Ki..Agar Aisa Hota To Mujhe Me Itni Kabliyat Zaroor Hai Ke Main Isse Alag Kaafiye Dekar Ek Naya Roop De Deta...Khair Main Bhi yeh Kahunga Ke Yeh "AJEEB" Ittefaq To Nahi Par Han Ittefaq Zaroor Hai... Yeh Ghazal Darasal Khaas Ek Sher Par Maine Likha Jo Main Kuch Din Se Suunta Aa Raha Tha...SON OF Sardar Movie Ka, Ajay Devgun Ki Awaaz mein...Uss Sher Ke jazbaat Ko Lafzon mein Utaarna Chaah raha Tha..Woh Sher Yuh Tha..

" Khuda Kare Zindagi Mein Yeh Mukaam Aaye.
  Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Dua Karun Aur
  Dua Mein Tera Naam Aaye.."

Iss Sher Ki Soch Ko badal kar Apni Ghazal mein Dhaalna Chaahta Tha..Aur Waheen Koshish bhi ki, Isliye Maine Title Bhi waheen Rakha Par Vaakai Ittefaqan Yeh Ghazal Bashir badr Saheb Ki Ghazal Se Kaafi Match Ho gayi..Khair Shayad MYeh Meri Khush Naseebi Hai...

Aapka Phir Se Shukriya Par Aapka Ajeeb kehna Galat Laga..
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«Reply #19 on: November 04, 2012, 11:15:49 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 04, 2012, 03:16:06 AM
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
tareef ke liye alfaz nahi


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«Reply #20 on: November 04, 2012, 11:17:20 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on November 04, 2012, 06:28:34 AM
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH ZABARDAST ZABARDAST.........AWESOME REALLY TOUCHING CREATION KHWAISH JI ...


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«Reply #21 on: November 04, 2012, 12:33:13 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on November 04, 2012, 10:19:39 AM
jab bhi mohabbatt ki shmaa mehkegi ..ye alffaz har mohabbat karne waala gungunaayega.....bahut hi khoobsurat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #22 on: November 04, 2012, 03:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 03, 2012, 04:46:16 PM
Naa Chaahat Ke Andaaz Alag!!!!
Naa Dil Ke The Jazbaat Alag!!!!!
Thee Saree Baat Sirf Lakeeron Ki..

Tere Haath Alag...
Mere Haath Alag...



Kabhi Yuh Bhi bas Mere Dil MeN
Ke Dhadkano Ko Khabar Naa Ho     Applause Applause Applause

Mujhse  Mil Jaa Ek Baar Sanam
Phir Bichadne Ka Darr Naa Ho    Applause Applause Applause

Jahaan Sirf Main Aur Tu Ho..!!!
Saath Koi Reh-Guzar Naa Ho       Bohat Khub!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Main Teri Baahon mein  Kho Jaau
Uss Raat Ki Phir Sehar Naa Ho    Wah Wah!!!!  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Jis Raah Mein Tera Saath Nahi..!!!!
Phir Mera Koi Aisa Safar Naa Ho     Lajawaab!!!  Applause Applause Applause

Ek Duje Ke Dil Mein Rahe Hum..!!!
Rehne Ke Liye aur Koi Ghar Na Ho    Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Gar Main Dua Karun
To Meri Duayon MeN Koi Asar Na Ho  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mohabbat Ki Mehak Umar Bhar Mehake
Sirf Tadpe Dil,Aisa Koi Hashar Na Ho     Applause Applause Applause



     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bohat hi Umda likha hai aap ne khwaish jee!!! Har ek ashaar khubsurat aur jazbaaton se chur hai....Kabhi kabhi kahin kuch bahut aacha pada hua hamare jahen mein reh jata hai aur wohi humari writing mein nazar aata hai....Isme koi burai nahi hai...Motivation bina likhna bohat hi mushkil hai. Aaise hi likhte rahiye...

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«Reply #23 on: November 04, 2012, 03:13:33 PM »
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behada umda dilkash gazal.......aapki tareef mein to kuch bhi kehne ko bacha hi nahi hai ......


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