~Tujhe bhula diya~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 01, 2010, 07:31:08 PM
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Kehte hai kisi ko bhulana bahaut mushkil hota hai..Mager uss shaks ko zindagi main yaad kar kya faeda jo apna hoke bhi apna nahin..Aise hi ek shaks ko maine bhula diya ya phir bhula raha hoon..
Kabhi kabhi haath chorrna parrta hai..Kabhi kabhi its better to let go..

Mager ap sabse ek baat kehna chahta hoon..kay ager aj, iss waqt koi hai aisa jo khas hai apke liye, toh usse sambhal kay rakhein..Rishte bade nazuk hote hai..Chahe apki galti ho ya na ho, bicharr ne par dard dono ko hota hai..Appreciate every moment of life, treasure every second of life..!

Tujhe yaad karna; ek aadat purani lagti hai,
Teri yaadon main jeena; ek aadat beimani lagti hai,
Tujhe yaad karna; ek aadat purani lagti hai..

Tere saye ko tak khud se alag kar baithe hum toh,
Tujhe khud se jodna; ek galti purani lagti hai,
Tujhe yaad karna; ek aadat purani lagti hai..

Najane kyun log ashk bahate hai bewaffaon kay liye,
‘Khamosh’ ko teri yaadon main rona; ek rasm bachkani lagti hai,
Tujhe yaad karna; ek aadat purani lagti hai..

Tere diye qhaton ko kabhi kabhi parr leta hoon main,
Mager ab unse ati awaz;mujhe anjaani lagti hai,
Tujhe yaad karna; ek aadat purani lagti hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 07:59:24 PM »
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Rahim bhai ......... Too gud ....

I jst vana 2 tll u tht ur going in right direction...

jst follow dis ....

Appreciate every momnt of lyf & treasure evry sec. of lyf..........

Seriously ur lyf would b amzing............

bt rembr Keep smiling alwyz .......

DIs is ur bst post evr coz it has vry +ive msg .......
Gud going Dear............
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 09:04:56 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Dost..!
Teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2010, 06:12:21 AM »
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kya baat hai rahim ji...
ishq ki wajah se rote or pareshaan hote to ddekha hai
par aapka andaaz... kya kahne janab..
dil se daad... kubul keejiye..
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2010, 07:40:49 AM »
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Rahim Bhai.. Yeh Aadat Waqai Bahut Taqleef deti Hai.. Par Kya Karen Unhe Yaad Kiye Bagher bhi Har us Lamha ek Kami si Lagti hai.. Har ek Lafz aapne Such Likha Hai.. Behad Hi Khubsoorat aur Dil ko Chhoo Jane wale Alfaazon se aur Jazzbaaton se Saji Rachna Hai aapki.. Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut khooooooob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2010, 08:42:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2010, 03:53:42 PM »
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Manzil-e-ishq jee bahaut bahaut shukriya,.

Tadapna ishq main kabhi fitrat thi Rahim ki,
Zindagi ne yunhi agey chalna seekha diya..!
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2010, 03:55:42 PM »
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Vikas bhaijan aur Khwaish Dost..Teh dil se shukriya ap dono ka..!
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2010, 05:28:23 PM »
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Midblowing.. super .. Fantastic,,, Awesome... Thank you so much for writing such a marvelous poetry...

Bahoot Bahoot KHoob!!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2010, 06:33:12 PM »
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Shukriya Divya di..! Teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 09:34:06 AM »
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Nice  icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 10:08:36 AM »
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tooo good Rahim bhaiii..hats off for this onee..

bahut hi behetereen likha he apne..

hazaron daad hazir he kubool kijiyeee~
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 07:10:45 PM »
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Shukriya Fivester jee aur Abhi bhaijan..!
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 04:25:04 PM »
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Ab kisi ki aas nahi zindagi ko... tanhayon ne akela jeena sika diya..tuje bhula diya
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