tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu

by adrin on November 03, 2008, 06:24:14 PM
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 Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
k dosti bhi tu kuch dushmani si nibhata hai

kehta hai ki chahta hai meri khushi tu,
fir q tu mujhe hamesha rulata hai

deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya is jahanum me jalne ki koi saza deta hai

ye jan kr bhi ki ye saase hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko me saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagana bata deta hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2008, 11:34:16 PM »
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Achcha likha hai Adrin aapne ...Bas yunhi likhte rahiye  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2008, 11:57:04 PM »
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nice Adrin
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2008, 12:49:40 AM »
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Nice Adrin Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiyega
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2008, 12:57:17 AM »
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Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
k dosti bhi tu kuch dushmani si nibhata hai

kehta hai ki chahta hai meri khushi tu,
fir q tu mujhe hamesha rulata hai

deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya is jahanum me jalne ki koi saza deta hai

ye jan kr bhi ki ye saase hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko me saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagana bata deta hai


Bahut accha likha hai aapne Adrin ji.. and Welcome to YoIndia.
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2009, 09:22:32 PM »
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...dude awesome one...last two lines are just amazing...keep writing...
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2009, 09:29:28 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2011, 02:54:47 PM »
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Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
k dosti bhi tu kuch dushmani si nibhata hai

kehta hai ki chahta hai meri khushi tu,
fir q tu mujhe hamesha rulata hai

deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya is jahanum me jalne ki koi saza deta hai

ye jan kr bhi ki ye saase hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko me saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagana bata deta hai
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2011, 09:03:15 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2011, 09:09:40 AM »
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Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
k dosti bhi tu kuch dushmani si nibhata hai

kehta hai ki chahta hai meri khushi tu,
fir q tu mujhe hamesha rulata hai

deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya is jahanum me jalne ki koi saza deta hai

ye jan kr bhi ki ye saase hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko me saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagana bata deta hai


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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2011, 08:40:21 AM »
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Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
k dosti bhi tu kuch dushmani si nibhata hai

kehta hai ki chahta hai meri khushi tu,
fir q tu mujhe hamesha rulata hai

deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya is jahanum me jalne ki koi saza deta hai

ye jan kr bhi ki ye saase hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko me saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagana bata deta hai


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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2011, 08:48:00 AM »
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nice one adrin
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«Reply #13 on: March 20, 2012, 06:43:13 AM »
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superb lines.....!!
keep on writng fr us....!
heart touchng dude....!!:-)happy9
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«Reply #14 on: March 20, 2012, 06:53:37 AM »
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superb lines dear keep writing
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