~*~ Tujhe rona ajaega ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 10, 2011, 08:43:13 PM
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Khwaish dost ki ek nazm main ek line parri thi jo dil main bas gayi toh bas ussi line ko edit karke yeh ashaar banaya maine..


Mat pooch mujse meri zindagi ka haal tu Rahim,
Main teri ankhon main ansoo nahin dekh sakta..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2011, 08:46:07 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Bro.. Kya khoob likha hai !
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2011, 09:00:14 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 10, 2011, 08:46:07 PM
Bahoot Khoob Bro.. Kya khoob likha hai !
Teh dil se shukriya Di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 12:58:40 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 10, 2011, 08:43:13 PM
Khwaish dost ki ek nazm main ek line parri thi jo dil main bas gayi toh bas ussi line ko edit karke yeh ashaar banaya maine..


Mat pooch mujse meri zindagi ka haal tu Rahim,
Main teri ankhon main ansoo nahin dekh sakta..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut Khoooooooooob ... Rahim Ji !
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2011, 06:54:11 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on June 11, 2011, 12:58:40 AM
Bahut Khoooooooooob ... Rahim Ji !
Teh dil se shukriya Naresh bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 08:26:29 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 10, 2011, 08:43:13 PM
Khwaish dost ki ek nazm main ek line parri thi jo dil main bas gayi toh bas ussi line ko edit karke yeh ashaar banaya maine..


Mat pooch mujse meri zindagi ka haal tu Rahim,
Main teri ankhon main ansoo nahin dekh sakta..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Waah waah Waah!!! Bahut Khooob Mere Dost...Dard mein Bhi Mohabbat!!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


              Dard Ne Mere Daaman Ko yuh Thaam Rakha Hai!!!!
              Ke Jaise Unka Bhi Mere Siwaa Aur Koi Nahi...
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 08:49:20 AM »
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Bhuat Khoob Rahim jee Bhuat Khoob
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2011, 12:36:55 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 11, 2011, 08:26:29 AM

Waah waah Waah!!! Bahut Khooob Mere Dost...Dard mein Bhi Mohabbat!!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


              Dard Ne Mere Daaman Ko yuh Thaam Rakha Hai!!!!
              Ke Jaise Unka Bhi Mere Siwaa Aur Koi Nahi...
Haan dost, dard main bhi mohobat..Pata nahin kaise mager sach hai dil aj bhi usse chahta zaroor hai..
Apne toh Rahim ki zindagi ki sachayi likh di..
Apka ashaar parrkar Faraz ka ek ashaar yaad agaya kay:

Ab toh dard ki itni aadat hogayi hai Faraz,
Jab dard nahin milta toh dard hota hai..

Apne dil cheerne wala ashaar likha hai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2011, 12:41:44 PM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on June 11, 2011, 08:49:20 AM
Bhuat Khoob Rahim jee Bhuat Khoob

Jee bahaut bahaut shukriya Sanjeev jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2011, 01:59:48 PM »
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very nice lines rahim...
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2011, 10:56:43 AM »
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good one
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2011, 11:12:33 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 11, 2011, 01:59:48 PM
very nice lines rahim...

Shukriya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2011, 11:13:15 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on June 15, 2011, 10:56:43 AM
good one
Shukriya Abhi bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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