tum bhe kitnay pagal ho na! (by vb)

by vb on October 24, 2013, 11:47:03 PM
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Yaad hay tum ko? tum kehti thi
Ake aavaara baadal ho tum
vb! Kitnay pagal ho tum

Jeevan apna haar diya na
Ik pardesi naar k ooper
Apna sub kuchh vaar diya na
Is dunya main ik larki ko
Kya khona? Kya paana? vb!
Aahen bharti naar k aagay
Kya jholi phelaana? vb!
Ik din hum dono ne aakhir
Duniya say uth jaana vb!
Jub main tum say kho jaun, tum
Dil apna behlaana vb!
Bhool he jaana is larki ko
Duniya main kho jaana vb!
Theek kaha tha tum ne lekin
Tum he par martay hen vb
Tum tu in ko bhool gai par
Yaad tumhen kartay hen vb
Aaj bhe gar tum say ho payay
vb jee ki baanhen bhar do
Paagal, paagal kehti thi tum
Such much in ko pagal kar do

vb! Kitnay pagal ho tum
Tum bhe kitnay paagal ho na!


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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 11:52:47 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2013, 01:09:15 AM »
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Nice...


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2013, 09:28:11 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 12:49:36 PM »
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Is dunya main ik larki ko
Kya khona? Kya paana? vb!
Aahen bharti naar k aagay
Kya jholi phelaana? vb!
Ik din hum dono ne aakhir
Duniya say uth jaana vb!
Jub main tum say kho jaun, tum
Dil apna behlaana vb!
Bhool he jaana is larki ko
Duniya main kho jaana vb!

Lajavaab..wah wah wah
paagal kar dene vaali lines..
nazm ke baadshaah ho aap.
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Bahut khooooooooooooob....
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buhat shukriya aap sub ka....
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«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2013, 08:27:07 PM »
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bahot achey waaaaaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2013, 10:34:20 PM »
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thanx.. Iqtedar sahab...
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