Tum chali jaao ge (NM)

by vb on May 28, 2010, 06:34:08 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 949 times)
vb
Guest
Reply with quote

Monitors are requested to plz... delete..
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
ab aa bhi jaao by clicksahil in Shayri-E-Dard
aa bhi jaao by yahiya in Miscellaneous Shayri
Chali Chali Phir Chali Chali by ehsaas SK ka in Share Video
JAAO by injured.warrior in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
----- /// Aao na , aa jaao naa /// ----- by ~Hriday~ in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
anonymously sent
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2010, 08:57:46 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob!!! simple yet intricate- Keep writing!!!

tumhare intezaar mein na so rahee akhiyaan
woh nanhay parinday, woh pyari see batiyaan
jo beet gaye pal tu wapis na aayenge...

jeene ko taras rahay sookhay khusk pattay
inki tu jannat hain sard hawayein
inhein nahin choona bikhar jayenge...
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2010, 09:03:57 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah bahut khoob Vb ji,great and lovely creation,beautiful lines by the guest,excllent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
aaina
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2010, 10:26:16 PM »
Reply with quote
Waqt hote na sunte kabhi kisi ki
tum jahan bhi kahoge, thehar jaayenge

khoob bhut khoob.....keep wrinting


aslam
Logged
miankhalid
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2010, 08:55:39 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahaut khoob !!!
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2010, 08:06:53 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji... wah.. kya kehna... bahut hi umda...!!!
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2010, 10:42:41 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley   Applause   Applause   icon_thumleft
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: Tum chali jaao ge (NM)
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:28:41 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.096 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer