Tum hamaari ho (NM):Miscellaneous Shayri

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Re: Tum hamaari ho (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2010, 05:59:50 PM »

kya kehne aap ke bahot khoob likha hai kya kya kikh diya hai aap ne ,,bus dil chahta hai ki padhta hi jaaon ,,bahoot khoob ,itni umda shayeri kya kehne ,,wah wah wah....dil khush kardiya vb ji aap ne..aur thoda izafa karte to aur bhi achha hota ...ayenda se please itni chhoti chhoti nazam mat likha karo..thoda badi kardo ...dil mutmain nahi ho paraha hai ...likhte rehiye aap ...mehfil ko yun hi roshan karte rahiye...aap iss creation ke liye mubark baad ke mustahiq hain.


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Re: Tum hamaari ho (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2010, 06:47:05 AM »

............... kahaan se shuru karun aur kaise shuru karun taarif samajh hi nahi paa raha hoon. shabd hi nahi mil rahe hain taarif ke liye. hum to bas padhte gaye aur ye geet bas aage badhti gayi aur hum isme khote chale gaye. itni mithaas hai aapne is nazm me ki kya kahen. bas baar baar padhte rahe. sach kaha hai Saqib ji ne ki aisi kavita bas chali rahe to padhte jaane ka mann karta hai. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. bahut din baad aapka likha padhne ka mauka mila aur kya khoob mila. Waah...!!! Sach main yahaan YO me bahut logo ki shayari padhta hoon aur kuch logo ke lekh ka mujhe besabri se intzaar rehta hai. Aap unhi me se ek hain. yunhi likhte rahiye aur yahaan share karte rahiye. bahut sukoon milta hai aapka likha padhke... sach....!!!

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Re: Tum hamaari ho (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 07:03:38 AM »

sach kahun to aisa laga kisi dil ne bht tadap k kisi dil ko sadaa di hai......ye tadap jarur ranglayegi ji......behtareen nazm hai ye ...nazm nahin dil ka sara dard sara pagalpan yahan bayaan ho gaya hai vb ji........


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