-----/// Tum hoti to ///----- Hriday

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tum  hoti  to   yun   shaayari  se    dil lagaane  ki zarurat naa hoti
tum  hoti  to   waqt   guzaarne ke  lie   likhne ki  zarurat naa hoti

kaash  tum  hoti mere sangh , to  main bas  tumhaaraa hi rehtaa
yun   apne   dard pe logo ko kisse  sunaane   ki  zarurat naa hoti

tum ,   haan   tum  me  hi  wo  baat   thi jo    kisi aur me naa mili
tum  hoti to  mujhe khud  ko  kahin dhundne ki zarurat naa hoti

tum  se  hi  jahaan thaa meraa, tumse hi to meraa aasmaan thaa
tum   hoti to khwaabon kaa   mahal  banaane ki zarurat naa hoti

kaash ,   aisaa   hotaa  ki  tum    meri hoti,  tum  mere saath hoti
to  deewaano   ki  tahraa ,  kalam   se  dosti  ki  zarurat  naa hoti

tum   hoti   to , naa 'Hriday'   naam  hotaa ,  naa  koi jaan paataa
kaash  tum  hoti, to mujhe  kisi  naye  naam   ki  zarurat naa hoti

tum   hoti,   to    ye  'Kapil'   sirf  aur    sirf tumhaaraa   hi  rehtaa
tum hoti  to   geeton  me kuch  bhi   bataane  ki zarurat naa hoti


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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2012, 06:49:18 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 06, 2012, 06:22:53 AM
tum  hoti  to   yun   shaayari  se    dil lagaane  ki zarurat naa hoti
tum  hoti  to   waqt   guzaarne ke  lie   likhne ki  zarurat naa hoti

kaash  tum  hoti mere sangh , to  main bas  tumhaaraa hi rehtaa
yun   apne   dard pe logo ko kisse  sunaane   ki  zarurat naa hoti

tum ,   haan   tum  me  hi  wo  baat   thi jo    kisi aur me naa mili
tum  hoti to  mujhe khud  ko  kahin dhundne ki zarurat naa hoti

tum  se  hi  jahaan thaa meraa, tumse hi to meraa aasmaan thaa
tum   hoti to khwaabon kaa   mahal  banaane ki zarurat naa hoti

kaash ,   aisaa   hotaa  ki  tum    meri hoti,  tum  mere saath hoti
to  deewaano   ki  tahraa ,  kalam   se  dosti  ki  zarurat  naa hoti

tum   hoti   to , naa 'Hriday'   naam  hotaa ,  naa  koi jaan paataa
kaash  tum  hoti, to mujhe  kisi  naye  naam   ki  zarurat naa hoti

tum   hoti,   to    ye  'Kapil'   sirf  aur    sirf tumhaaraa   hi  rehtaa
tum hoti  to   geeton  me kuch  bhi   bataane  ki zarurat naa hoti


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fabulous and fabulous composition ,sir
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2012, 06:57:17 AM »
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wah wah

Mai deewani tere geeto ki
Unhi bolo mein hoon jhumti

Mai na hoke bhi tumhare pass
Kapil ki dharkano ka hai ehsas

Vada karo o mere kavi "kapil"
Bahegi shabdo ki dhara vahi nirmal

Tabhi samne mai aaungi
Kavya ras ko mai peeungi
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2012, 07:23:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaah hriday jee tareef ke liye alfaz nahi bahut khoob kalam
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2012, 07:34:19 AM »
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tum hoti to,naa'Hriday'naam hotaa,naa koi jaan paataa kaash
tum hoti, to mujhe kisi naye naam ki zarurat naa hoti
tum hoti, to ye 'Kapil' sirf aur sirf tumhaaraa hi rehtaa
tum hoti to geeton me kuch bhi bataane ki zarurat naa hoti

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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2012, 09:01:18 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!



Aray janab kyuN jeete jee mar rahe ho bechari ko... tongue3
Just kidding..

Achche khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... bahut khoob...
Sabhi khayaal khoob rahe par lagta hai aapki kalam
meiN zaNg lag raha hai jo thik se ahsaas ko lafz nahi
de paayi... ?


Wel humari dher sari daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2012, 01:08:27 PM »
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tum  hoti  to   yun   shaayari  se    dil lagaane  ki zarurat naa hoti
tum  hoti  to   waqt   guzaarne ke  lie   likhne ki  zarurat naa hoti

kaash  tum  hoti mere sangh , to  main bas  tumhaaraa hi rehtaa
yun   apne   dard pe logo ko kisse  sunaane   ki  zarurat naa hoti
Bahut khoob hriday jee
very true..
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2012, 01:13:56 PM »
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oyee hoyeeee mere super shayar ji... kya baat hai tum hoti to ye tum hoti to wo.... oye jab main hoti hun tab to kuch bolta nahin jan jati hun to tum hoti to k geet gaata hai....
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2012, 02:34:51 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2012, 02:51:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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thank you soooooooooooo much M_b ji...!!!

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 06, 2012, 06:49:18 AM
fabulous and fabulous composition ,sir
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«Reply #11 on: December 18, 2012, 02:53:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Prashad ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: prashad on December 06, 2012, 06:57:17 AM
wah wah

Mai deewani tere geeto ki
Unhi bolo mein hoon jhumti

Mai na hoke bhi tumhare pass
Kapil ki dharkano ka hai ehsas

Vada karo o mere kavi "kapil"
Bahegi shabdo ki dhara vahi nirmal

Tabhi samne mai aaungi
Kavya ras ko mai peeungi
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on December 06, 2012, 07:23:26 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaah hriday jee tareef ke liye alfaz nahi bahut khoob kalam
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji....!!!

Quote from: @Heer@ on December 06, 2012, 07:34:19 AM
tum hoti to,naa'Hriday'naam hotaa,naa koi jaan paataa kaash
tum hoti, to mujhe kisi naye naam ki zarurat naa hoti
tum hoti, to ye 'Kapil' sirf aur sirf tumhaaraa hi rehtaa
tum hoti to geeton me kuch bhi bataane ki zarurat naa hoti

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2012, 11:51:06 AM »
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kabhi kabhi ho jaataa hai sirji.... jang  lagtaa rehtaa hai.... Usual Smile

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 06, 2012, 09:01:18 AM
Kapil Jee Aadaab!



Aray janab kyuN jeete jee mar rahe ho bechari ko... tongue3
Just kidding..

Achche khayaal bayaaN kiye hai... bahut khoob...
Sabhi khayaal khoob rahe par lagta hai aapki kalam
meiN zaNg lag raha hai jo thik se ahsaas ko lafz nahi
de paayi... ?


Wel humari dher sari daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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