Tum Jaisa Na Koi Hai Maa....!!! -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: April 15, 2010, 02:02:52 AM »

bahoot hi khoob likha hai talat....


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Re: Tum Jaisa Na Koi Hai Maa....!!!

«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2010, 06:27:12 AM »

Wah kya baat hai Celmira ji.......

Haath se shuti zameen wapas mil sakhti hai
aaj nahi toh kal pura ho sakhta hai aasman chune ka armaa
par lout kar kabhi nahi aati duniya se jaane wali MAA
tu hi hamara jahaan hai MAA tu hi hamari zindagi hai MAA
Tum Jaisa Na Koi Hai MAA-Tum Jaisa Na Koi Hoga MAA......


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S.hashmi

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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2010, 08:03:54 AM »

Excellent


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riyaz106

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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2010, 10:13:57 AM »

Wah wah Talat ji bahot hi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Maa ke chale jaane ke baad uska gham aur yaadein zindagi ka hissa ban jate hain. Maa-baap wo saaya hain ke jab tak rahte hain to rahta hai, chale jaate hai to laulte nahi. Ye nazm padhkar dil mein hasrato-malaal ka samaa ban gaya.


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #19 on: April 16, 2010, 06:03:03 AM »

Bahut hi Umda Lekhni hai aap ki Celmira Ji


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daljeet_faqeer

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«Reply #20 on: April 18, 2010, 11:24:42 AM »

Bahut hi achchha likha hai. Applause


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #21 on: April 22, 2010, 12:55:54 PM »

Talat-di ati-sunder atayaat bhavpurn Maa k pyaar se out-prout dil ko chhune wali rachna hai aapki.... Applause

Maa k liye jitna likho utna kam hai....

Maa...
Tera Aanchal jaise sukh ka dariya
Teri goad jaise phoolon ki bagiya
Tera dulaar jaise mamta ka bhandaar
Teri ankhiye barsaati pyaar he pyaar

Tujh mai hai phoolon kee sugandh
Teri baaton mai phalo ki meethas
Tere chehre ki hai Maa jo muskaan
Hamaare parivaar kee wo hai shaan

Tujhse hai mere jeevan ki bahaar
Tu he Maa poore ghar ka shingaar
Tere dil mai hai prem be-shumaar
Tu deti rehna mujhe pyar he pyar

O MAA.....

Quote from: Celmira on April 14, 2010, 11:42:08 AM


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neelgold

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«Reply #22 on: April 22, 2010, 10:59:35 PM »

Wah koyal j tussi gr8 ho vry vll said


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KOYAL46

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«Reply #23 on: April 23, 2010, 12:53:26 PM »

Thanks Neel-di....your appreciation is my strength.... icon_flower

Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 10:59:35 PM

Wah koyal j tussi gr8 ho vry vll said


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Talat

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«Reply #24 on: April 23, 2010, 02:35:21 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 14, 2010, 12:35:35 PM

...NO WORD TO EXPRESS..........!!!

MAA KAA KOI BADADL NAHIN.

Aap ka bohot shukriya Khamosh Ji, aapne iss dard ko mehssos kiya....


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Talat

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«Reply #25 on: April 23, 2010, 02:36:53 PM »

Quote from: account on April 14, 2010, 12:54:37 PM

Bahut khub talat ji... Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya...Thanks a lot for the appreciation....


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Talat

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«Reply #26 on: April 23, 2010, 02:37:56 PM »

Quote from: samnoj on April 14, 2010, 01:23:16 PM

umda..bahtreen

saare ke saare shair badhya hai lekin last 4lines me aapne rula dala

Thanks a lot Sam...aapne alfaaz main chupe dard ko samjha aur mehsoos kiya.....


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Talat

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«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2010, 02:39:43 PM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 14, 2010, 05:22:13 PM

wah kahen ye ah , kya qoob nazm me hai bahen .. is mauzu per jo bhi likho kamm hi hoga magar apne mashallah bahoth kaha hai .. har bandh dad ka mustahiq hai .. hazaro dad apki is nazm pe .. khush rahen hamesha ..

ye eak ashar yaad aa gaya .. kya qoob kaha hai kissi ne

nigah e ishq ko itna tu mohtaram kerday
guzar gay hain jo lamhay unhay baham kerday
taras rahi hon koi maa sa meherban wajood
DUA E NOOR parhay or mujh pay dam kerday

qadeertoopchi

Bohot shukriya Qadeer bhai.........aur aapki in asha'ar ne aankhain nam kar deen...."Dua-e-noor padhe aur mujh pe dam kar de"....bohot si yaadon ko jaga diya is misre ne........


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neelgold

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«Reply #28 on: April 23, 2010, 11:44:49 PM »

AChha ji Koyal JI........

Gud one

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 23, 2010, 12:53:26 PM

Thanks Neel-di....your appreciation is my strength.... icon_flower


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salil2002

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«Reply #29 on: April 25, 2010, 12:40:18 PM »

di sach main maa toh ek hi hoti hai......i m also missing mom ....ghar se door hoon na shaayad isliye
aap kaise ho

do line aapke liye nahin MAA k liye

teri yaad bahut aati hai maa
tujhe kehta nahin magar bahut tadpaati hai maa
tujhe mil k tere saaye mein rehna chahta hoon
tere aanchal kii yaad aati hai maa
tere haathon kii woh rotiyon ka swad yaad aata hai
tujhse ladna, tera manana yaad aata hai
teri aankhon mein aansu aur labon ka hansa yaad aata hai
tera saahil keh raha tujhse, kii tujhe woh kitnaa chahta hai


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