Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 09, 2011, 10:09:37 AM
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Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
Laut aana wapas ussu bhes mein.

Hume dar bahut rehta hai iss baat ka.
Mausam badalta rehta hai zazbaat ka.
Suna hai pardes ki hawa mein mehak aur hai.
Kahin koi jadoo na chal jaye halaat ka.

Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
Laut aana wapas ussi bhes mein.

Wahan dekhnewalon ki nazar bhi aur hai.
Kajrare nainowali koi mausam karde barsaat ka.
Rang to gulon mein har gulshan mein hai.
Juda sa rang hai tere aage meri kainaat ka.

Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
laut aana wapas ussi bhes mein.
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2011, 11:15:45 AM »
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Bahut pyaari,bahut khoobsurat peshkash.Dil khush ho gaya.
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2011, 12:15:34 PM »
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waah..waah bahut khoob
Suresh Ji...

Daad qubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 12:22:45 PM »
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Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Waah waah janab kia baat hai bahut hi touchi aur
pyaare ahsaas kahe hai aapne...

Is khub aur pur asar kalaam par dili daad O
Mubarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile         
         
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 12:28:14 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 09, 2011, 10:09:37 AM
Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
Laut aana wapas ussu bhes mein.

Hume dar bahut rehta hai iss baat ka.
Mausam badalta rehta hai zazbaat ka.
Suna hai pardes ki hawa mein mehak aur hai.
Kahin koi jadoo na chal jaye halaat ka.




Waaaaaaa....h! Suresh ji, Bahut umda. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 12:45:20 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 09, 2011, 10:09:37 AM
Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
Laut aana wapas ussu bhes mein.

Hume dar bahut rehta hai iss baat ka.
Mausam badalta rehta hai zazbaat ka.
Suna hai pardes ki hawa mein mehak aur hai.
Kahin koi jadoo na chal jaye halaat ka.

Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
Laut aana wapas ussi bhes mein.

Wahan dekhnewalon ki nazar bhi aur hai.
Kajrare nainowali koi mausam karde barsaat ka.
Rang to gulon mein har gulshan mein hai.
Juda sa rang hai tere aage meri kainaat ka.

Tum jo jaate rehte ho pardes mein.
laut aana wapas ussi bhes mein.





good
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 02:22:25 PM »
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GOOD...KEEP IT UP...
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 04:33:48 PM »
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siddiqui ji aapka bahut shukriya ki aapne apna keemati waqt diya aur hausla afzahi ki.
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 09, 2011, 11:15:45 AM
Bahut pyaari,bahut khoobsurat peshkash.Dil khush ho gaya.
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 04:35:26 PM »
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raqeeb ji aapka bahut 2 shukriya
thanks for the compliments.
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 09, 2011, 12:15:34 PM
waah..waah bahut khoob
Suresh Ji...

Daad qubool farmaayen.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 04:37:40 PM »
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thanks a lot for the compliments.
parwaz ji.
aapke compliments padhne mein bahut achha lagta hai.
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 09, 2011, 12:22:45 PM
Suresh Jee Aadaab!

Waah waah janab kia baat hai bahut hi touchi aur
pyaare ahsaas kahe hai aapne...

Is khub aur pur asar kalaam par dili daad O
Mubarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile         
         

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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 04:39:40 PM »
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thanks for the compliments.
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 09, 2011, 12:28:14 PM
Waaaaaaa....h! Suresh ji, Bahut umda. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 04:42:17 PM »
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thanks adil ji .please keep writing.
Quote from: adil bechain on October 09, 2011, 12:45:20 PM
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2011, 04:42:50 PM »
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thanks sadiq rizvi ji.
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GOOD...KEEP IT UP...
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2011, 02:20:40 AM »
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bahot khoob janaab Usual Smile

acha laga bahot
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2011, 07:10:13 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya sirfira ji.
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aapke compliments ka intezar rehta hai.
Quote from: sarfira on October 10, 2011, 02:20:40 AM
bahot khoob janaab Usual Smile

acha laga bahot
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