tum kya ho?(remaining)

by guhar on November 01, 2009, 07:38:39 AM
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...kuch ko burai k palde mein tola
kuch ko acchai ke
upadaya kaun sidh hoga?
ye hein tuccha prashna marg pe bhalai k,

jab bure ko prem se miloge
mana biguchan aas paas mandraiga
par pryaas jab hridaya aur samay laga kar jaari rakhoge
sach maano maanav sirf harsh ka pataka hi is jagat k devalaya mein lehraiga

bas us jich k lekh par
poorna viraam laga diya jaaye
vidhvansak jo shakti se tumhare andar baitha hai
adhikaari nahi naa tumse aadesh hai
fir bhi shaashak ki gaddi pe leta hai
use mita diya jaaye

daal karuna ke pushpa sabhi par
is vidhvansak ko apne bimb se door karo
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2009, 08:00:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Guhar ji,very beautiful creation.excellent,bahut sach aur gaheri baat kaha aapne.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2009, 09:48:35 AM »
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NIce and excellent Guhar JI Applause ApplauseApplause
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