-----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar:Miscellaneous Shayri

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho...

*****HRIDAY*****


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	Mujhe wo acha lagti hay bohat hi piyare lagti hay by muneeb in Ghazals
	Dosti achchi ho toh rang laati hai by captainyr in Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)
	Doosre ki biwi kuin Achchi lagti hai by javedarshad in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
	Mohhabbat nahi achchi~~~~~Rahi~~~~~~~~ by Rahi2001 in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
	----- /// Behna...Meri sabse achchi dost hai tu /// ----- by ~Hriday~ in Miscellaneous Shayri

anjaan dharkan

Yoindian Shayar

Rau: 0

Offline

Gender: Female

Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 13 hours and 44 minutes.
-May Allah Bless You-

Posts: 1900
Member Since: Jul 2008

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2010, 01:25:12 AM »

wow! Mind blowing poem!

Muhabbat ka isse pyaara andaaz na dehka maine! Very nicely written. Kasam se, behad ahchchi lagi aapki poem. So sweet

tareef k aur alfaaz samhaj nai a rahe...

Bas. Toooo cute!


	Logged

veenavarsha

Guest

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2010, 01:45:44 AM »

Quote from: klaskar on July 27, 2010, 11:01:08 PM

*****HRIDAY*****

nazare tumhari sacchi lagti hai
isiliye to wo tumhe acchi lagti hai

char din ki zindagi me,begano ki basti me
sukr hai
koi to tumhe apne karib lagti hai


	Logged

*KasaK*....Dil Ki

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Rau: 19

Offline

Gender: Female

Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2010, 04:00:10 AM »

sach kitni pyari hogi wo jise sochkar aapne ye kavita likhi hai...
wo sach hai ya koi aapki imagination ye to nahin pata par jo bhi hai hai badi hi pyari
aapke uss pyaar pe aur iss pyar ki iss tareef pe aapko bht sari


	Logged

thinkhattk

Guest

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 04:38:04 AM »


	Logged

*KasaK*....Dil Ki

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Rau: 19

Offline

Gender: Female

Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 04:40:38 AM »

JISKE LIYE AAPNE YE LIKHI HAI RACHNA ...AGAR WO REPLY DETI TO KYA DETI....KUCH ISS TARAH SHAYAD...KOSHISH KI HAI BATAIYEGA KAISI LAGI....

Kitna haseen tune mera ye aks banaya hai
Ek sidhe saadhe chehre ko kamal sa khilaya hai

Mere benuri chehro ko tune apne pyaar k rangon se nikhara hai
dekhke jo mar mite ispe wo dilkash andaaz dikahya hai

Tere pyar ka ehsaas hai ye jo ye yun sanwara hai
Kuch aur nahin ye nuur tera pyaar isse chhalka hai

Tadapta raha hai tu meri chah me ab tak
Mujhe apne pyaar se teri ye tadap mitana hai

Ye khuda ka hi farmaan hai jo dil me bas gai hun tere
Maine bhi jeewan bhar ka tujhe humsafar banaya hai….!!!!


	Logged

thinkhattk

Guest

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// -----

«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 05:30:58 AM »


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2010, 06:25:28 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Sidra ji jo aapne meri kavita ko waqt diya , padha aur pasand kiya... ye kavita utni khoobsurat thi nahi jitni wo aapke taarifon se ban gayi hai... shukriya Sidra ji...bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on July 28, 2010, 01:25:12 AM


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2010, 06:27:28 AM »

shukriya Veena ji... aur aapke taarif karne ka andaaz hi niraala hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne ...!!!

Quote from: veenavarsha on July 28, 2010, 01:45:44 AM

nazare tumhari sacchi lagti hai
isiliye to wo tumhe acchi lagti hai

char din ki zindagi me,begano ki basti me
sukr hai
koi to tumhe apne karib lagti hai


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2010, 06:31:44 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... hamesha ki tarha aapne meri is kavita ko bhi pasand kiya aur saraaha ... wo koi meri imagination nahi hai... bas ek dost hai... uska khayal dil me aate hi bas shabd apne aap aate rahe... mujhe sach kahun to is kavita ko likhne ke liye bilkul bhi words nahi jodne pade... bas apne aap keyboard pe ungliyaan chalti rahi... par haan wo mera pyaar nahi meri ek bahut achchi dost hai.... aur haan us dost ne kahaa aapka likha hua comment dekh ke ki main apse kahun wo pyaari hi nahi bahut sundar bhi hai... fir boli "just kidding"... anyways thanx a lot Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 28, 2010, 04:00:10 AM


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2010, 06:33:32 AM »

Thank u so much Devangi ji...!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on July 28, 2010, 04:38:04 AM


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2010, 07:02:19 AM »

mujhe aapka ye jawaab bahut pasand aaya... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon ko joda hai... haaan shayad wo kuch isi tarha jawaab deti par use hindi dhang se nahi aati isliye shayad wo english me jawaab deti....

koshish ki hai maine kuch likhne ki aapke jawaab ke jawaab me.... umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi...

kuch yun asar hua hai tere aajane se,
ab to har cheez khoobsurat lagti hai,

kal tak ye duniya begaani si lagti thi,
tere aane se ab ye apni si lagti hai,

maine teri koi tasveer nahi banaayi hai,
tu jo hai uski parchhaai hi ban aayi hai,

jis chehre ko tu benuri berang kehti hai,
mujhe wo duniya me sabse haseen lagti hai,

ye jo teri aankhen jhukaane ki aadat hai,
mujhe wo aadat bahut khoobsurat lagti hai,

ye sach hai ki main tadpa hoon tujhe paane ko,
wo tadap bhi mujhe bahut khoob lagti hai,

kaise shukriyaa adaa karun main parvardigar ka,
tu mujhe bin maange poori hui muraad lagti hai....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 28, 2010, 04:40:38 AM


	Logged

*KasaK*....Dil Ki

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Rau: 19

Offline

Gender: Female

Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2010, 07:26:13 AM »

Quote from: klaskar on July 29, 2010, 07:02:19 AM

aap pehle bhi bht khubbb likhte the klaskar ji...lekin aajakl aap jo likh rahe ho wo aur bhi khubsurat ho gaya hai...
usne aakar aapki life me ek kami thi jo puri kardi....bht hi pyara likha hai aapne ye reply bhi....

use hamari taraf se thnx kahiyega...k uski wajah se hume itni achchi poetries padhne mil rahi hai...and unka reply dene bhi maza araha ahai......
thnx to ur inspiration of this poem....


	Logged

neelgold

Guest

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2010, 09:19:30 PM »

Kya baat hai kapil ........

Gud 1 ..........

Acha andaz hai lyk it ......

Dekh le tum muze apni poems ke liye yaha bula hi lete ho aur min padne ki liye aah hijati hoon ....dekh le uske baad kuch nhi likha ......... logon ne cheen li meri likhne ki shakti............

Anywyz gud work keep it up...........


	Logged

~Hriday~

Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar

Rau: 115

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010

Re: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2010, 12:24:09 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... humne bata diya hai unko...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 29, 2010, 07:26:13 AM


	Logged

Pages: [1] 2 3 All

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: -----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar