-----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

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kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho...


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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2010, 01:25:12 AM »
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wow! Mind blowing poem!


Muhabbat ka isse pyaara andaaz na dehka maine! Very nicely written. Kasam se, behad ahchchi lagi aapki poem. So sweet

tareef k aur alfaaz samhaj nai a rahe...

Bas. Toooo cute!
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2010, 01:45:44 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 27, 2010, 11:01:08 PM


kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho...


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nazare tumhari sacchi lagti hai
isiliye to wo tumhe acchi lagti hai

char din ki zindagi me,begano ki basti me
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 koi to tumhe apne karib lagti hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2010, 04:00:10 AM »
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sach kitni pyari hogi wo jise sochkar aapne ye kavita likhi hai...
wo sach hai ya koi aapki imagination ye to nahin pata par jo bhi hai hai badi hi pyari
aapke uss pyaar pe aur iss pyar ki iss tareef pe aapko bht sari
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 04:38:04 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 04:40:38 AM »
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JISKE LIYE AAPNE YE LIKHI HAI RACHNA ...AGAR WO REPLY DETI TO KYA DETI....KUCH ISS TARAH SHAYAD...KOSHISH KI HAI BATAIYEGA KAISI LAGI....

Kitna haseen tune mera ye aks banaya hai
Ek sidhe saadhe chehre ko kamal sa khilaya hai

Mere benuri chehro ko tune  apne pyaar k rangon se nikhara hai
dekhke jo mar mite ispe wo dilkash andaaz dikahya hai

Tere  pyar ka ehsaas hai ye jo ye yun sanwara hai
Kuch aur nahin  ye nuur tera pyaar isse chhalka hai

Tadapta raha hai tu meri chah me ab tak
 Mujhe apne pyaar se teri ye tadap mitana hai

Ye khuda ka hi farmaan hai jo dil me bas gai hun tere
Maine bhi jeewan bhar ka tujhe humsafar banaya hai….!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 05:30:58 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2010, 06:25:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Sidra ji jo aapne meri kavita ko waqt diya , padha aur pasand kiya... ye kavita utni khoobsurat thi nahi jitni wo aapke taarifon se ban gayi hai... shukriya Sidra ji...bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on July 28, 2010, 01:25:12 AM
wow! Mind blowing poem!


Muhabbat ka isse pyaara andaaz na dehka maine! Very nicely written. Kasam se, behad ahchchi lagi aapki poem. So sweet

tareef k aur alfaaz samhaj nai a rahe...

Bas. Toooo cute!
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2010, 06:27:28 AM »
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shukriya Veena ji... aur aapke taarif karne ka andaaz hi niraala hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne ...!!!

Quote from: veenavarsha on July 28, 2010, 01:45:44 AM

nazare tumhari sacchi lagti hai
isiliye to wo tumhe acchi lagti hai

char din ki zindagi me,begano ki basti me
sukr hai
 koi to tumhe apne karib lagti hai
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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2010, 06:31:44 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... hamesha ki tarha aapne meri is kavita ko bhi pasand kiya aur saraaha ... wo koi meri imagination nahi hai... bas ek dost hai... uska khayal dil me aate hi bas shabd apne aap aate rahe... mujhe sach kahun to is kavita ko likhne ke liye bilkul bhi words nahi jodne pade... bas apne aap keyboard pe ungliyaan chalti rahi... par haan wo mera pyaar nahi meri ek bahut achchi dost hai.... aur haan us dost ne kahaa aapka likha hua comment dekh ke ki main apse kahun wo pyaari hi nahi bahut sundar bhi hai... fir boli "just kidding"... anyways thanx a lot Kasak ji...!!!

 
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sach kitni pyari hogi wo jise sochkar aapne ye kavita likhi hai...
wo sach hai ya koi aapki imagination ye to nahin pata par jo bhi hai hai badi hi pyari
aapke uss pyaar pe aur iss pyar ki iss tareef pe aapko bht sari
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2010, 06:33:32 AM »
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Thank u so much Devangi ji...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2010, 07:02:19 AM »
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mujhe aapka ye jawaab bahut pasand aaya... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon ko joda hai... haaan shayad wo kuch isi tarha jawaab deti par use hindi dhang se nahi aati isliye shayad wo english me jawaab deti.... Usual Smile

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koshish ki hai maine kuch likhne ki aapke jawaab ke jawaab me.... umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi...

kuch yun asar hua hai tere aajane se,
ab to har cheez khoobsurat lagti hai,

kal tak ye duniya begaani si lagti thi,
tere aane se ab ye apni si lagti hai,

maine teri koi tasveer nahi banaayi hai,
tu jo hai uski parchhaai hi ban aayi hai,

jis chehre ko tu benuri berang kehti hai,
mujhe wo duniya me sabse haseen lagti hai,

ye jo teri aankhen jhukaane ki aadat hai,
mujhe wo aadat bahut khoobsurat lagti hai,

ye sach hai ki main tadpa hoon tujhe paane ko,
wo tadap bhi mujhe bahut khoob lagti hai,

kaise shukriyaa adaa karun main parvardigar ka,
tu mujhe bin maange poori hui muraad lagti hai....



Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 28, 2010, 04:40:38 AM
JISKE LIYE AAPNE YE LIKHI HAI RACHNA ...AGAR WO REPLY DETI TO KYA DETI....KUCH ISS TARAH SHAYAD...KOSHISH KI HAI BATAIYEGA KAISI LAGI....

Kitna haseen tune mera ye aks banaya hai
Ek sidhe saadhe chehre ko kamal sa khilaya hai

Mere benuri chehro ko tune  apne pyaar k rangon se nikhara hai
dekhke jo mar mite ispe wo dilkash andaaz dikahya hai

Tere  pyar ka ehsaas hai ye jo ye yun sanwara hai
Kuch aur nahin  ye nuur tera pyaar isse chhalka hai

Tadapta raha hai tu meri chah me ab tak
 Mujhe apne pyaar se teri ye tadap mitana hai

Ye khuda ka hi farmaan hai jo dil me bas gai hun tere
Maine bhi jeewan bhar ka tujhe humsafar banaya hai….!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2010, 07:26:13 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 29, 2010, 07:02:19 AM
mujhe aapka ye jawaab bahut pasand aaya... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon ko joda hai... haaan shayad wo kuch isi tarha jawaab deti par use hindi dhang se nahi aati isliye shayad wo english me jawaab deti.... Usual Smile

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koshish ki hai maine kuch likhne ki aapke jawaab ke jawaab me.... umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi...

kuch yun asar hua hai tere aajane se,
ab to har cheez khoobsurat lagti hai,

kal tak ye duniya begaani si lagti thi,
tere aane se ab ye apni si lagti hai,

maine teri koi tasveer nahi banaayi hai,
tu jo hai uski parchhaai hi ban aayi hai,

jis chehre ko tu benuri berang kehti hai,
mujhe wo duniya me sabse haseen lagti hai,

ye jo teri aankhen jhukaane ki aadat hai,
mujhe wo aadat bahut khoobsurat lagti hai,

ye sach hai ki main tadpa hoon tujhe paane ko,
wo tadap bhi mujhe bahut khoob lagti hai,

kaise shukriyaa adaa karun main parvardigar ka,
tu mujhe bin maange poori hui muraad lagti hai....




aap pehle bhi bht khubbb likhte the klaskar ji...lekin aajakl aap jo likh rahe ho wo aur bhi khubsurat ho gaya hai...
usne aakar aapki life me ek kami thi jo puri kardi....bht hi pyara likha hai aapne ye reply bhi....

use hamari taraf se thnx kahiyega...k uski wajah se hume itni achchi poetries padhne mil rahi hai...and unka reply dene bhi maza araha ahai......
thnx to ur inspiration of this poem....
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Kya baat hai kapil ........

Gud 1 ..........

Acha andaz hai lyk it ......

Dekh le tum muze apni poems ke liye yaha bula hi lete ho aur min padne ki liye aah hijati hoon ....dekh le uske baad kuch nhi likha ......... logon ne cheen li meri likhne ki shakti............

Anywyz gud work keep it up...........
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2010, 12:24:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... humne bata diya hai unko...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 29, 2010, 07:26:13 AM
aap pehle bhi bht khubbb likhte the klaskar ji...lekin aajakl aap jo likh rahe ho wo aur bhi khubsurat ho gaya hai...
usne aakar aapki life me ek kami thi jo puri kardi....bht hi pyara likha hai aapne ye reply bhi....

use hamari taraf se thnx kahiyega...k uski wajah se hume itni achchi poetries padhne mil rahi hai...and unka reply dene bhi maza araha ahai......
thnx to ur inspiration of this poem....
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