-----/// Tum Sabse Achchi Lagti Ho /// ----- klaskar

by klaskar on July 27, 2010, 11:01:08 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 30, 2010, 08:37:33 PM »
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Thanks a lot Neel ji... aap bhi kyun logo ki baaton ka bura maanti hain.. jo karna hai apni khushi k liye kijiye... kisi ne nahi vhhini hai aaapki koi shakti.. firse start kijiye... aap bahut achcha likhti hain... and thanx again for coming to this site and reading my poem...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on July 29, 2010, 09:19:30 PM
Kya baat hai kapil ........

Gud 1 ..........

Acha andaz hai lyk it ......

Dekh le tum muze apni poems ke liye yaha bula hi lete ho aur min padne ki liye aah hijati hoon ....dekh le uske baad kuch nhi likha ......... logon ne cheen li meri likhne ki shakti............

Anywyz gud work keep it up...........
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«Reply #16 on: July 31, 2010, 03:18:03 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 29, 2010, 06:25:28 AM
bahut bahut shukriya Sidra ji jo aapne meri kavita ko waqt diya , padha aur pasand kiya... ye kavita utni khoobsurat thi nahi jitni wo aapke taarifon se ban gayi hai... shukriya Sidra ji...bahut bahut shukriya...!!!





daat usse d jaati hai jo jasbaat kaabil-e-tareef ho.

My pleasure bhaijaan
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«Reply #17 on: August 07, 2010, 06:55:20 PM »
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thanx again...!!!

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on July 31, 2010, 03:18:03 AM



daat usse d jaati hai jo jasbaat kaabil-e-tareef ho.

My pleasure bhaijaan
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«Reply #18 on: September 09, 2010, 05:42:41 AM »
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Hamey be bht ache lagti hain ek pyari saba
Quote from: neelgold on July 29, 2010, 09:19:30 PM
Kya baat hai kapil ........

Gud 1 ..........

Acha andaz hai lyk it ......

Dekh le tum muze apni poems ke liye yaha bula hi lete ho aur min padne ki liye aah hijati hoon ....dekh le uske baad kuch nhi likha ......... logon ne cheen li meri likhne ki shakti............

Anywyz gud work keep it up...........
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«Reply #19 on: February 28, 2012, 07:42:25 PM »
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kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho... love4
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«Reply #20 on: February 28, 2012, 09:36:09 PM »
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Quote from: adil jamal on February 28, 2012, 07:42:25 PM
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Shukriya...!!!
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«Reply #21 on: June 23, 2012, 04:07:50 PM »
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Quote from: adil jamal on February 28, 2012, 07:42:25 PM
kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho... love4
Quote from: adil jamal on February 28, 2012, 07:42:25 PM
kaise kahun tumse, kya main bataun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

kabhi mujhe samjhaati ho aur kabhi khud naasamajh ban jaati ho,
jaane kya hai tum me wo khoobi ki tum mujhe apni jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi gusse se laal ho jaati, aur pal bhar me khud has deti ho,
tumhaari adaon ka gazab hai jaadu tum jaaduugarni lagti ho,

ek pal me tum maa ban jaati, pal bhar me bachchi ban jaati ho,
har gun ki tum malika ho mujhe tum bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe baatein tumhaari kuch deewaano si lagti hain,
maasoomiyat me doobke apne kabhi tum buddhu jaisi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi tum paagal ban jaati aur mujhko hi paagal kehti ho,
tumhaare us paagalpan me bhi tum mujhe bahut hi achchi lagti ho,

kabhi kabhi mujhe poochhti ho tum ki kaisi mujhe tum lagti ho,
tumhaari kasam main khaake hoon kehta tum sabse achchi lagti ho,

tumse pyaari muskaan tumhaari, koi pari mujhe tum lagti ho,
saagar se gehri aankhen tumhaari, tum bahut hi pyaari lagti ho,

kaise tumhe main ye samjhaun, kyun tum achchi lagti ho,
kabhi sharmaati, kabhi muskuraati, tum sabse achchi lagti ho... love4
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«Reply #22 on: June 25, 2012, 01:22:03 PM »
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Thanks a lot Tanvir ji....!!!

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«Reply #23 on: June 25, 2012, 01:29:25 PM »
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aap sab se acche shayar ho jee.. Applause Applause Applause

Is Dil Ka Haal Bhi Kuch Samundar Jaisa Hai,
Shaant Hai Din Mein, Sham Ko Baichain Ho Jata Hai...Tum bin  love9
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«Reply #24 on: July 23, 2012, 02:00:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji mujhe itni badi upaadhi se sammanit karne ke liye ...!!!

Quote from: suman59 on June 25, 2012, 01:29:25 PM
aap sab se acche shayar ho jee.. Applause Applause Applause

Is Dil Ka Haal Bhi Kuch Samundar Jaisa Hai,
Shaant Hai Din Mein, Sham Ko Baichain Ho Jata Hai...Tum bin  love9
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Bahot toot chuka hun av rha nai jata. Dard itna h ki av saha nai jata. Log puchte h bta tera dard kya h. Par hamse apna dard baya kiya nai jata.
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«Reply #26 on: March 08, 2014, 04:34:40 PM »
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Bahut khub sir itni acchi poem hai aapki ki Kya batau .hubahu meri mangetar jaise hai .bahut khub Applause
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«Reply #28 on: August 10, 2014, 01:59:01 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anil ji.....!!!

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Bahut khub sir itni acchi poem hai aapki ki Kya batau .hubahu meri mangetar jaise hai .bahut khub Applause
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very very sweet
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