Tumhaaree sadaa sun rahaa hoon azal sey!

by abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 06:36:44 AM
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Tumhaaree sadaa sun rahaa hoon azal sey!
Yeh nisbat naheen hai, 'abd', sirf kal sey!
Tumhain jaantaa mein naheen, Yaar! Leykin,
Yeh imkaan haasil hai kis key fazal sey?

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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 06:48:46 AM »
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Very beautifully written Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 06:52:30 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 07, 2009, 06:48:46 AM
Very beautifully written Usual Smile
Thanks Angel ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 07:41:09 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 06:36:44 AM
Tumhaaree sadaa sun rahaa hoon azal sey!
Yeh nisbat naheen hai, 'abd', sirf kal sey!
Tumhain jaantaa mein naheen, Yaar! Leykin,
Yeh imkaan haasil hai kis key fazal sey?

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kamal keh gaye abd ,dagh ki saadgi dekhi tumhare kalaam mein, masha allaha.
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 07:42:56 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 06:36:44 AM
Tumhaaree sadaa sun rahaa hoon azal sey!
Yeh nisbat naheen hai, 'abd', sirf kal sey!
Tumhain jaantaa mein naheen, Yaar! Leykin,
Yeh imkaan haasil hai kis key fazal sey?

                      - abd bundeli

Bahut khoob Uncle jiiii  Applause Applause[/color]
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2009, 08:18:25 AM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on June 07, 2009, 07:41:09 AM
kamal keh gaye abd ,dagh ki saadgi dekhi tumhare kalaam mein, masha allaha.
Shukriyah, saaz_haldwanvi ji! Baaqee aap kee nazar-e-inaayat hai!
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2009, 08:19:25 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 07, 2009, 07:42:56 AM

Bahut khoob Uncle jiiii  Applause Applause[/color]
Shukriyah Roja!
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 12:03:09 AM »
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Bravo! What a touching Rubai. Great read
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2009, 07:21:40 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 25, 2009, 12:03:09 AM
Bravo! What a touching Rubai. Great read
Thanks MHussain ji!
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2009, 04:34:14 PM »
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Bana ke kafeel jo hum bhejey gaey hayn
phir bhee muhtaj hum dekhey gaey hayn
samajhtey hayn qudrat ke ramooz-o-intabah
phir bhee ankhen band kartey paey gaey hayn

'Ramz'
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2009, 04:12:03 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 29, 2009, 04:34:14 PM
Bana ke kafeel jo hum bhejey gaey hayn
phir bhee muhtaj hum dekhey gaey hayn
samajhtey hayn qudrat ke ramooz-o-intabah
phir bhee ankhen band kartey paey gaey hayn

'Ramz'

Laakh aankheyn khuleen hon, fir bhi nazar aataa naheen!
Noor-e-baatin mein bhi, us kaa waqaar paataa naheen!
Ayaan hai, fir bhi, nihaan hai, na jaaney woh kaisey?
Dil-o-dimaag sey ehsaas go ki jaataa naheen!!

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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2009, 02:23:11 PM »
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Laakh aankheyn khuleen hon, fir bhi nazar aataa naheen!
Noor-e-baatin mein bhi, us kaa waqaar paataa naheen!
Ayaan hai, fir bhi, nihaan hai, na jaaney woh kaisey?
Dil-o-dimaag sey ehsaas go ki jaataa naheen!!

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khubsoorat sher likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2009, 02:48:19 PM »
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Quote from: Nira on June 30, 2009, 02:23:11 PM
khubsoorat sher likha hai
Shukriyah Nira ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2009, 07:31:15 AM »
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 BAHUT KHOOB KAHAA HAI BUNDELI JI AAPNEY Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 07:36:43 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 06, 2009, 07:31:15 AM
BAHUT KHOOB KAHAA HAI BUNDELI JI AAPNEY Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah marhoom bahayaat ji!
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